Naruto: From Hyuga To Otsutsuki With My Deduction System

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MrSfiry

The quality of the writing is good. But the progression of the story is very slow, 70 chapters and he hasn't even left the ninja academy yet. Very slow.

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Chu_Qingtian

Good keep it up hxudnndjdncbxnhcbcncnhxjxjxjdjhdnjsjxbdndjcbcnfjjcjchjksksnxhjfnfjxjdjskxknfjdjxnfjckisksnchjcjfjxicjnfjcjfkroosjdbbvsjskncdjjdiskjdjfkcidkkakkqpdonchfjndhxhjsjxfjiskdhyruonxhudkncbjksonxhfjkdksjhfjj

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NaturalSpirit

j'aime vraiment l'histoire je suis triste quelle est si peu de like mais si lauteur pense a abendonne quil nous donnes les raw avant de partir

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Stephen_Hart78

Good so far need more chapters the translation of the starting is dull seems like the translator hired an good editor for the novel.lol.keep it up brother I want to stop this review but this damn thing won't stop me until I submit i review a view with atleast 140 words damn. Am in a school or something writing an apology letter

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Brokedepressed

What’s the source for this? I can’t find any mention of where this comes from

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Steven_smith

I hope the author maintain this pace in the novel