rebuilding in walking dead

LV 12

bossmanee_dutreize

C'est une bonne fanfiction, j'aime bien ! ! le mc est un peu arrogant, et sa personnalité est un peu frustrante, mais l'histoire en elle même est cool et j'aime bien le style de reconstruire une civilisation !!

LV 14

YourShadowsenpai

Great novel I would really recommend, just wish there was more chapters so I can bing. Anyway keep up the good work

LV 1

Daoist0Z2uMD

How did you mess up the story after chapter 66, everything is mixed up and unclear. How did you mess up the story after chapter 66, everything is mixed up and unclear. How did you mess up the story after chapter 66, everything is mixed up and unclear.

LV 10

James_Dragon

its a 3 star for me some wrong pronouns wrong spelling wrong names and other problems if ur desperate read it its kinda mid just to past time i guess

LV 15

ConfusedZombie

Dude, you need an editor. The names keep changing, which is disconcerting and messes with the flow of the story. I like it so far but in each paragraph the names change and the POV switches are random if you find someone to fix that then this story would drastically improve.

LV 4

TheHighElite

After chapter 66 everything felt like a walking fever dream to read i got such a bad headache now damn but overall fairly decent up till chapter 66

LV 1

ko13

Se ve que es una traducción del chino, se puede tolerar un poco eso. El cambio de nombre entre capitulos o en algunos casos en el mismo capitulo los traduce en 3 formas diferentes. Pero despues del capitulo 65 cada parrafo esta mezclado, parace un rompecabezas mal armado.

LV 2

PeeeRS

The novel is good, but I need more chapters, and lately the paragraphs in the last chapters are very disorganized. I would appreciate it if you could give me the link to the original translation or where you got this novel from.

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

LV 4

M_Static

it was good till all chapters and paragraphs mixed up..................................................................................................... Original Fanfic name? Anyone?