3 Years Later

LV 4

WWFire

I've come here after you give me a full essay of helpful suggestions. I must say that your writing is screaming quality: your wide range of vocabulary and the smooth flow of each sentence... I thought that I visited the wrong site for a second. Do forgive me, because I have no comment for your overall writing style; you are better than me in this field. Though, I must point out that you might want to check several capitalization mistakes. I see that you don't update frequently. This site may not be suitable for you, dear author, and your great quality. I'd like to say that this site is like a fast-food restaurant; frequent updates and quantity takes precedence over quality. I want to suggest you to try publishing in RoyalRoad instead, I'm sure that people there will appreciate your work further.

LV 3

LiNa_Author

Read 22 chapters.. I can say that novel is pretty good till now. Story line is very interesting.. The characters development and the background is also good...it keeps you engrossed. I am going to continue reading it. Author..plz continue with the updates.. and do not leave the book in between.

LV 11

ihateyounot

As of this review, there is only 15 chapters posted. The narration is compelling. Right off the bat, the narration shows that the protagonist isn’t some damsel-in-distress, even if she has several issues (crippling loneliness, paranoia, holes in her memories, to name a few). The setting, being three years after a zombie apocalypse, sends us straight into the protagonist’s daily life, right before she encounters someone who sends her routine off its course. I have no idea where the future would take the protagonist, and frankly I don’t care. After the first few chapters, I’m stuck thinking, ‘God, just let this girl rest,’ because I can almost feel the exhaustion in her POV. The story is written in a way that makes me think that the author is no writer—no, the author of this story is a storyteller. Why is that a bad thing? Well, for one, it shows that the author does not give a rat’s ass about proper punctuation, spelling, and capitalisation. There’s little to no problems with the grammar, though, which is nice. Is the author a native English speaker, perhaps? That being said, these problems can be easily fixed with a little bit of editing. Overall, it’s a pretty okay story. Do take my opinion with a grain of salt, though, since it is still very early in the story, from what I can see. Good luck to the author, and don’t stop writing if you can help it.