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Hm hm hm another excellent fanfic ik it gets low power stone but it's an excellent novel definitely recommend
This is one of the best pokemon FanFiction that I have read. I hope you keep writing......................................... .....................
It's a good story so far. I enjoy reading it. Ash has a good training mindset. I hope the story will continue. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
estou realmente amando a sua história! gosto de tudo realmente, mas só acho os capítulos meio curtos. Fica sempre aquele gostinho de quero mais!
Well the story is good but Ash is way too calm.It's good to be calm in battles but too much silence doesn't fit the story.But interaction with Pokemon is nice
I enjoy a smarter Ash but it still brings the nostalgia from the show as it has stayed true to the development of the characters
Honestly it’s enjoyable and fun to read it’s following along with the anime but ash isn’t an idiot this time around I think you should check this out it’s great
It's by far one of the best new Ash fanfics, he doesn´t just catches new pokémon but also interacts better with his current ones. The only complain I have is that the chapters seem a bit too short and that bugs me a little.
The story is enjoyable and writing quality is decent [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
it's a good read till now and something to enjoy. I especially like the unique take on Ash's bonding ability. Do wish that author update it regularly
Hm hm hm another excellent fanfic ik it gets low power stone but it's an excellent novel definitely recommend
This is one of the best pokemon FanFiction that I have read. I hope you keep writing......................................... .....................
It's a good story so far. I enjoy reading it. Ash has a good training mindset. I hope the story will continue. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
estou realmente amando a sua história! gosto de tudo realmente, mas só acho os capítulos meio curtos. Fica sempre aquele gostinho de quero mais!
Well the story is good but Ash is way too calm.It's good to be calm in battles but too much silence doesn't fit the story.But interaction with Pokemon is nice
I enjoy a smarter Ash but it still brings the nostalgia from the show as it has stayed true to the development of the characters
Honestly it’s enjoyable and fun to read it’s following along with the anime but ash isn’t an idiot this time around I think you should check this out it’s great
It's by far one of the best new Ash fanfics, he doesn´t just catches new pokémon but also interacts better with his current ones. The only complain I have is that the chapters seem a bit too short and that bugs me a little.
The story is enjoyable and writing quality is decent [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
it's a good read till now and something to enjoy. I especially like the unique take on Ash's bonding ability. Do wish that author update it regularly
I read thirty chapter and there still no system.....👎👎👎