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I didn't have much expectation when I started this fic but after reading it I think it's a very good fic. The first 40-50 chapters felt very realistic and entertained me. The interactions between the characters and the character introductions were very good and felt very realistic to me. The only thing I complained about in the first 40-50 chapters was that he called MC 'our hero' instead of his name. After the first 40-50 chapters I started to see things I didn't like very much. As for the reason, it uses artificial intelligence. The author's native language is not English so there were a few spelling mistakes but that didn't matter to me. The author started to get help from artificial intelligence to fix these mistakes but I think it was a very bad decision in terms of fic because the characters started to not seem very realistic to me anymore. The interactions between the characters seem very artificial and formal. My advice to the author is that if you are writing with the help of artificial intelligence, please tell the artificial intelligence to explain or write with simple sentences and words. If that's the case, your writing will be less formal and simple. Anyway, you wrote very well in general. If anyone reads this comment can you recommend me a pornhwa fanfic. I've been reading pornhwa lately and some of them have really good stories. So I'm looking for a fanfic to read about pornhwa. (translated by google translate)
Character ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story line⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Plot⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Build up⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Writing quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ . .............. OVERALL:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐...............
Very annoyed on how the author used "Teenage Mercenary" in this fic as he just used it to get set up but he done well with the silent war and minus the addition of solo leveling this has been perfect and as much as i want to rate this 2-0 stars because of the teenage mercenary awful inclusion(which is just mc not being involved at all with and just had there millitary as an starting point for mc which was smart.) The fic has been good.
Boring novel, more than anything the protagonist. Is he really a professional killer? Why, looking like a pathetic child, did he really reveal that he was not of this world to the government? It's incredibly stupid, tremendous nonsense.
good fanfic always love fics with lookism verse stuff in it...........................................................................................
💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Cool, great story and plot wise, writing quality is great easy to understand, though a little mistake at some pronoun and misnaming some characters they were few i think they're around 30-40chap, still understandable though. Plus each characters has their own perspective personalities which flaws naturally within their role nothing forced or anything u can find disturbing and has a cool and charismatic mc with deep scheming and clever thinking. Also characters interaction was deeply explored and the pace was not too fast or too slow, which fits my taste and makes u engage or immerse reading the story wanting for more. Well, the most i like about this fanfic is it was made of pure korean manhwa and a bit of pornhwa which is rare in fanfic section and i hope it stays that way as the title entails.
While i was really invested in this story, the addition of Solo Leveling kinda broke the rules of the world. Sure adding some form of magic and supernatural is cool but i wish that it wasn't as big and open as Solo Leveling. Maybe some kind of secret world. The whole solo leveling universe added to regular worlds kinda made it overall inconsistent with the characters. If that alone was removed then i would have fully enjoyed the story and continue it more.
Everything about the story is pretty good so far. The writing quality fluctuates quite a bit because the author straight up did not edit some chapters. The issues are mainly pronouns and some simple diction, not a big deal but annoying nonetheless. The story development and world background are progressing quite smoothly. The author is taking things relatively slow, trying to introduce bits of all the elements he wants and straight-up ignoring parts he doesn't want as... well, he made changes to the plot. Anyway, the story itself is good so far. We saw bits and pieces of some manhwa, while some other manhwas get a lot more focus. It's not a problem, cus let him cook. The update rate is very high right now, but I hope the author hits a stable update rate. The character design is... well, they are all manhwa characters, and if not, the author provides images in an aux chap, so all good there. Also, I just noticed the author updated some chapters, so props to him for actually going back and editing the chapters. Keep up the work, author! Btw, you can try some software like chatgpt or grammarly to help with the grammar and then give it a read to see if nothing significant was changed.
The only problem with this is the she and he keep getting reversed in some chapters. Everything else is fine and pretty good for right now but idk about further on.
Does MC has Brawling Go MC's powers? I feel like that would be the most apt power set here. Also
I once gave this a five-star rating but it's a translation from Spanish and the translator messes up the he/she association at times and sometimes it's like translator goes brain dead. So great story but be prepared for some weird grammar and he/she mixups It also helps if you know the manhwas already but it's not necessary the enjoy it
The same thing I said when I read your work in Spanish, it is very good, continue with your work and don't let the meaningless criticism make you fall.
ネタバレを明かす
For being my first fanfic, it is very well written, keep it up author, don't let this novel pass away...................................................
My favorite author, it seems that you came back from the dead to bring us the continuation of your story, but now in English. For those who have doubts, this is a good story, but read the description and the labels carefully, because it is not for those who get bored quickly.
I followed your story in Spanish and I really liked it, the way you combined the different worlds without having problems and the balance you made with the female characters and avoiding the disgusting plots of their respective manhwas, that's why you deserve 5 stars.
Well, what can I say other than it's good, you don't need to read the manhwas to understand the plot. It's entertaining and the MC is strong but cautious. I like that the MC doesn't know the full plot and has to figure out situation by himself
Who knew that a novel more focused on obscenities could have so much character development and such a well-crafted story. I am very grateful to the author for creating this wonder.
It's good if you want to hear my dumb explanation go to where the Author gave himself a five star. Here a gift for the author:
ネタバレを明かす
meow meow meow meow . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
As a shameless author, I give myself 5 stars. Thank you for reading my fanfic, I hope you find it engaging. If you have any recommendations on Manhwas, Pornhwas or Webtoons, they would be welcome.
I didn't have much expectation when I started this fic but after reading it I think it's a very good fic. The first 40-50 chapters felt very realistic and entertained me. The interactions between the characters and the character introductions were very good and felt very realistic to me. The only thing I complained about in the first 40-50 chapters was that he called MC 'our hero' instead of his name. After the first 40-50 chapters I started to see things I didn't like very much. As for the reason, it uses artificial intelligence. The author's native language is not English so there were a few spelling mistakes but that didn't matter to me. The author started to get help from artificial intelligence to fix these mistakes but I think it was a very bad decision in terms of fic because the characters started to not seem very realistic to me anymore. The interactions between the characters seem very artificial and formal. My advice to the author is that if you are writing with the help of artificial intelligence, please tell the artificial intelligence to explain or write with simple sentences and words. If that's the case, your writing will be less formal and simple. Anyway, you wrote very well in general. If anyone reads this comment can you recommend me a pornhwa fanfic. I've been reading pornhwa lately and some of them have really good stories. So I'm looking for a fanfic to read about pornhwa. (translated by google translate)
Character ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story line⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Plot⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Build up⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Writing quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ . .............. OVERALL:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐...............
Very annoyed on how the author used "Teenage Mercenary" in this fic as he just used it to get set up but he done well with the silent war and minus the addition of solo leveling this has been perfect and as much as i want to rate this 2-0 stars because of the teenage mercenary awful inclusion(which is just mc not being involved at all with and just had there millitary as an starting point for mc which was smart.) The fic has been good.
Boring novel, more than anything the protagonist. Is he really a professional killer? Why, looking like a pathetic child, did he really reveal that he was not of this world to the government? It's incredibly stupid, tremendous nonsense.
good fanfic always love fics with lookism verse stuff in it...........................................................................................
💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Cool, great story and plot wise, writing quality is great easy to understand, though a little mistake at some pronoun and misnaming some characters they were few i think they're around 30-40chap, still understandable though. Plus each characters has their own perspective personalities which flaws naturally within their role nothing forced or anything u can find disturbing and has a cool and charismatic mc with deep scheming and clever thinking. Also characters interaction was deeply explored and the pace was not too fast or too slow, which fits my taste and makes u engage or immerse reading the story wanting for more. Well, the most i like about this fanfic is it was made of pure korean manhwa and a bit of pornhwa which is rare in fanfic section and i hope it stays that way as the title entails.
While i was really invested in this story, the addition of Solo Leveling kinda broke the rules of the world. Sure adding some form of magic and supernatural is cool but i wish that it wasn't as big and open as Solo Leveling. Maybe some kind of secret world. The whole solo leveling universe added to regular worlds kinda made it overall inconsistent with the characters. If that alone was removed then i would have fully enjoyed the story and continue it more.
Everything about the story is pretty good so far. The writing quality fluctuates quite a bit because the author straight up did not edit some chapters. The issues are mainly pronouns and some simple diction, not a big deal but annoying nonetheless. The story development and world background are progressing quite smoothly. The author is taking things relatively slow, trying to introduce bits of all the elements he wants and straight-up ignoring parts he doesn't want as... well, he made changes to the plot. Anyway, the story itself is good so far. We saw bits and pieces of some manhwa, while some other manhwas get a lot more focus. It's not a problem, cus let him cook. The update rate is very high right now, but I hope the author hits a stable update rate. The character design is... well, they are all manhwa characters, and if not, the author provides images in an aux chap, so all good there. Also, I just noticed the author updated some chapters, so props to him for actually going back and editing the chapters. Keep up the work, author! Btw, you can try some software like chatgpt or grammarly to help with the grammar and then give it a read to see if nothing significant was changed.
The only problem with this is the she and he keep getting reversed in some chapters. Everything else is fine and pretty good for right now but idk about further on.
Does MC has Brawling Go MC's powers? I feel like that would be the most apt power set here. Also
I once gave this a five-star rating but it's a translation from Spanish and the translator messes up the he/she association at times and sometimes it's like translator goes brain dead. So great story but be prepared for some weird grammar and he/she mixups It also helps if you know the manhwas already but it's not necessary the enjoy it
The same thing I said when I read your work in Spanish, it is very good, continue with your work and don't let the meaningless criticism make you fall.
ネタバレを明かす For being my first fanfic, it is very well written, keep it up author, don't let this novel pass away...................................................
My favorite author, it seems that you came back from the dead to bring us the continuation of your story, but now in English. For those who have doubts, this is a good story, but read the description and the labels carefully, because it is not for those who get bored quickly.
I followed your story in Spanish and I really liked it, the way you combined the different worlds without having problems and the balance you made with the female characters and avoiding the disgusting plots of their respective manhwas, that's why you deserve 5 stars.
Well, what can I say other than it's good, you don't need to read the manhwas to understand the plot. It's entertaining and the MC is strong but cautious. I like that the MC doesn't know the full plot and has to figure out situation by himself
Who knew that a novel more focused on obscenities could have so much character development and such a well-crafted story. I am very grateful to the author for creating this wonder.
It's good if you want to hear my dumb explanation go to where the Author gave himself a five star. Here a gift for the author:
ネタバレを明かす meow meow meow meow . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
As a shameless author, I give myself 5 stars. Thank you for reading my fanfic, I hope you find it engaging. If you have any recommendations on Manhwas, Pornhwas or Webtoons, they would be welcome.