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this is a really good story so far. you really need to have this marked as sg1 or stargate, and you might get more readers .The hp verse side seems like a fix it case. After hp left, a lot gets cleaned up there. so almost no solid Harry writing until roughly chapter 19 ish. He has little paragraph cameos after the initial fall through the Veil, at the start of the story, but that's it till later. writing so far is fast paced bit updates are long and in-between.
this is a really good story so far. you really need to have this marked as sg1 or stargate, and you might get more readers .The hp verse side seems like a fix it case. After hp left, a lot gets cleaned up there. so almost no solid Harry writing until roughly chapter 19 ish. He has little paragraph cameos after the initial fall through the Veil, at the start of the story, but that's it till later. writing so far is fast paced bit updates are long and in-between.