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This is a fantastic book and I cannot recommend it enough. While the book may seem from the synopsis that it is the common overused extra book with 2D characters and lack of depth. THIS IS NOT TRUE! The character development is unbelievable! each character is deep and feels realistic. There are no Dull or unnecessary or unrealistic plots or actions. The author has such a talent for leading the reader through a tale and letting them lean and grow with the characters. The storyline, characters and plot line has been tantalizing and amazing. I will support this book until the end, and I hope any one reading this will too! The book is so Good I'm making fan art, like it in my top three books of all time. thanks author for this masterpiece.
Never disappointed with this amazing novel! Each chapter is a true pleasure to read, full of emotion and surprises. Thank you for your good work
A review for the last chapters:(Spoilers) The story has got a lot more enjoyable and after Volume 1 the story has got way better. We dont really now mc's full power yet...so I hope there will be a big arc for mc's show of power. The world building is great nothing to criticise about except for I just wanted to know what is the power level of saints like city, or country level cus I hope it's big cus it will improve the story a lot and I suppose the gods are universal level ( dk actually ) About the new character (Anastasia), her behaviour is a bit childish ngl... but I believe in author so let's skip that part. She is a powerful main character and has a big role to play and the way author introduced her was great. One thing that mainly bothers me is mc's relationship with her family. tbh, he should have a grudge against them...I know in minor arc his family and him talked but that was not enough and felt so forced I mean he shouldn't have forgiven them so easily and right now I hope he become more cold toward them cus it's clear that his family put jasmine at their top priority, I know that she's the heiress but yeah, the mc's love for his family is way too forced after what they have done to him. And at last the story is solid 8.5/10 1 point for mc's childish acts toward his family and story's pace which is a little slow and 0.5 for update stability, I hope it'll reach 1 or even 2 chaps a day cus without no constant update, even though the story is peak, the novel will lose it's readers and will not get the attention it deserves.( no offence)
This is so peak! I fucking love this novel to a point i wake up every single looking forward to the next chapter dawg
man why is the mc always sad.....i like that he doesn't like harem....but he's always apologising towards his actual parents.....I want him to grow some balls
Good story and a nice read. But the author is inconsistent with his writing, especially concerning the MC. Also, he likes to define the appearence of things with the most ridiculous parallels. Not even exaggerating, he would explain a women’s silver hair as bright and breathtaking as an exploding star in a universe of complete darkness. Literally, even the smallest things get an insane parallel. Anyways, the inconsistencies mostly lay in the fact that the mc does something and/or says something but then doesn’t act upon it. Spoilers ahead, but one example is when he uses aura in class and says he does not care to hid it and wants to flaunt it, but when it came to an actual battle with other people at risk - he refuses to use it. Also, early in the story he was able to combine his two elements, and we have never seen him use it since. Like what?
ネタバレを明かす
A great take on the extra trope, the mc and side cast is likeable with actual goals, and the storyline has a lot of underlying mystery. Thank god there is no harem although there is not much romance as of ch 205. All in all it’s definitely worth a read.
this novel was exactly the type of novel that i was looking for i liked the characters the world building , and the atmosphere. the mc's personality is just my taste , overpowered but not in an unreasonable way, and this novel have the right amount of angst wish i absolutely loved. its my first time writing a review but i decided to do so cus i found it hard to find any other books on the same level even though i like the academy setting and extra or villain type mc its hard to find smth well written and actually interesting. im on chapter 204 i look forward to how things will go and i hope it won't turn bad . thank you author for this good read.
literally the best out there in this genre... read it I promise you won't regret it. p. s- though action is top tier along with world building but damn.. . this one gives feels too great
Hey author, I really like how you write mystery keep it up! Please don’t let the story devolve into mindless leveling up and face-slapping like many other novels in this genre.
I am delighted to have read this novel; it is very complete, and there is no disappointment. It has everything to please: a fluid writing style, a deep story, and endearing characters. I especially love the strong bond between our protagonist and their family, filled with affection and love. Just like with the first novel, *Rise of the White Devil*, I fell under its charm. I read it with sincere joy. Thank you to the author for these stories. To me, your writing style is among the best. Keep it up it's perfect!
i like it a lot the characters are very to my liking and so is the world building the MC's powers are very to my liking the only thing that this story lacks i would say is the power system frankly it's almost very bad it could be much better and much easier to understand but overall it's quite good to read
Finally a fellow harem hater. The writing is awesome The plot is crazy.................................................................................
Hey Crypthh, First of all, I just want to say that you don't have to take my review too seriously or as any form of criticism—you're the author, and it's your vision that makes this story so enjoyable. Even if you never read this comment, I’ll always be one of your biggest fans. From the very beginning, the story was already good, but as it progressed, your writing improved so much. The way you've enhanced your storytelling, built up the characters, and developed the plot is truly impressive. Hats off to you for your dedication and hard work—it's been an absolute pleasure to witness your growth as a writer. Also, I want to sincerely apologize for not being able to read this on Webnovel. Honestly, I'm pretty broke right now, but I'm focused on my studies and working towards a better future. If I ever do well in life, I promise I'll support your work the right way and read it on Webnovel. Your writing truly deserves all the recognition and support, and I genuinely appreciate the effort you put into creating such an amazing story. And to all the readers out there—definitely give this webnovel a try! The author’s writing improves so much mid-story, so please stick with it until it gets really interesting. You won’t regret it! Once again, thank you, Crypthh, for writing such an incredible story. You've done an amazing job, and I can't wait to see where the journey goes from here.
Review at the end of volume 1 My first thought after reading this book is “Flawed Masterpiece” This book has the most generic beginning. Mc loses family, get transmigrated to a fantasy world. But what really puts this book ahead of almost any book on this novel is the professionalism in the writing. This way the scenes are set up, how the characters interact, how monologues are provided and how cohesive the story is. It’s all premium. No one would bat an eye if this was a properly published light novel. There is no denying it the writer has talent. Even though the plot is generic the story itself has complex points, and goes away from cliches like plot armor, system and hero complex mc. I was pleasantly surprised on how fluid it felt. But, at the same time I feel this book not taking advantage of the web novels formats freedoms. The book feels too condensed, similar to a light novel every arc has to lead to another major arc. Which leads to mc personality development and leaves readers with solutions to previous mysteries and new questions. Which all feels accelerated as that is the format of writing a book. But webnovel allows you take a more slow approach, where you can build the world better with time to breath for the mc and the readers. For example, concepts like academy are just used for bringing the main cast together so that they could go to the next event in the story. The classes feel superficial and the rest of the school students might aswell be dolls. I know people will say it has been only 2 weeks in the story but for me the academy has already lost its shine. Another example would be the logic of this magic, the book just says mana Core==magic powers and skills. This is a typical l.novel structure where things are just stated to be true. Another would be just shrugging of questions like : how did the mc survive 2 years in the void realm?every single person on this would just believed it, cause a kid says so? What if he was kidnapped and brainwashed and lied. No one in this world thought that? Maybe dig in and ask the mc the secrets of the void. But no we will ignore this cause who cares. Again I am not being critical just for sticking out. I have to give high praises to this book for the high quality and professional content it provides. But I am just saying the book can take advantage of the web novel format. It allows authors to really refine their craft and build the world. Compared to a light novel format where you go from one story event to the next. With little time to breath.
THIS IS AWESOME. I'M AT 102 AND AUTHOR IS COOKING CRAZY HERE LIKE AT TIMES I DONT UNDERSTAND MOTIVES BUT HELL I CANT PUT IT DOWN SO YEAH READ ASAP
The more i read the more i like the story. It's the one of the best novel in Extra Genre. I hope it won't get dropped like certain Extra story with Void element MC. Best of luck Author.
Binged the first vvolum. This story has a very good potential to be up in the leagues of the big hitters. The cosmic horror aspect is also really well done. Give it a try. You won't regret it. If you're look for something to scratch your The Author's POV itch, this is it.
just finished shed vol 1 and i dont think I have words to describe this novel and the amount of plot twist I saw, I only have one thing to say to future readers this story is worth saving fast passes for
I dont know what to say. This novel is at the very top of my most liked storys. The development at the end of the first arc is amazing and the moment when things, you once deeply theorized about, get explained and click into place is simply the best. The only thing that can be remotely considered as „bad“ is that almost every f***ing chapter ends in a cliffhanger. But even this can sometimes be even more thrilling.
Absolutely amazing novel. The finale of the first volume was fucking fire. Keeping writing author cuz this is one of my favorite novels on the website.
Well, I’ve already read the entire first volume, which if I’m not mistaken goes up to chapter 175, and I just have to say that this is one of the best novels I’ve ever read. This novel keeps getting better and better. Yes, sometimes you get frustrated with the MC, but later, when it’s explained or you think carefully about why he did something, it all makes sense. It made me shed a few tears, the fights are epic, and the supporting characters are excellent. One of the best things about this novel is the mystery of wanting to know what happened—questions that are mostly answered in Volume 1. If you like stories where the MC has a tragic past or trauma but keeps moving forward, a powerful MC who stands out but isn’t so overpowered that the fights become boring, where the supporting characters feel real, and where the world is very dangerous and mysterious—this is for you.
PERFECT....but its a little slow paced, I hope author progress the plot faster. Also, could you please put the tournament arc as the next arc?
Truly one of the best novels ever. For anybody wondering, read it! It is so worth it in the end. Nearly cried when I reached the privileged chapter tag😭.
This book is as addictive as it is fun to read. Action around every corner. As his powers grow only more mysteries are created. What's possible next!?
I started this novel with low expectations because of the title, but it completely surpassed them. Although it was a bit rough around the edges at the beginning, it really came into its own as the story progressed. The character interactions feel natural, the story is engaging, and the characters are intelligent. The main character, in particular, is enjoyable. Overall, I highly recommend this novel.
Shameless author review here! Feel free to ask me questions regarding my novel, and I will try to answer them to the best of my abilities.
This is a fantastic book and I cannot recommend it enough. While the book may seem from the synopsis that it is the common overused extra book with 2D characters and lack of depth. THIS IS NOT TRUE! The character development is unbelievable! each character is deep and feels realistic. There are no Dull or unnecessary or unrealistic plots or actions. The author has such a talent for leading the reader through a tale and letting them lean and grow with the characters. The storyline, characters and plot line has been tantalizing and amazing. I will support this book until the end, and I hope any one reading this will too! The book is so Good I'm making fan art, like it in my top three books of all time. thanks author for this masterpiece.
Never disappointed with this amazing novel! Each chapter is a true pleasure to read, full of emotion and surprises. Thank you for your good work
A review for the last chapters:(Spoilers) The story has got a lot more enjoyable and after Volume 1 the story has got way better. We dont really now mc's full power yet...so I hope there will be a big arc for mc's show of power. The world building is great nothing to criticise about except for I just wanted to know what is the power level of saints like city, or country level cus I hope it's big cus it will improve the story a lot and I suppose the gods are universal level ( dk actually ) About the new character (Anastasia), her behaviour is a bit childish ngl... but I believe in author so let's skip that part. She is a powerful main character and has a big role to play and the way author introduced her was great. One thing that mainly bothers me is mc's relationship with her family. tbh, he should have a grudge against them...I know in minor arc his family and him talked but that was not enough and felt so forced I mean he shouldn't have forgiven them so easily and right now I hope he become more cold toward them cus it's clear that his family put jasmine at their top priority, I know that she's the heiress but yeah, the mc's love for his family is way too forced after what they have done to him. And at last the story is solid 8.5/10 1 point for mc's childish acts toward his family and story's pace which is a little slow and 0.5 for update stability, I hope it'll reach 1 or even 2 chaps a day cus without no constant update, even though the story is peak, the novel will lose it's readers and will not get the attention it deserves.( no offence)
This is so peak! I fucking love this novel to a point i wake up every single looking forward to the next chapter dawg
man why is the mc always sad.....i like that he doesn't like harem....but he's always apologising towards his actual parents.....I want him to grow some balls
Good story and a nice read. But the author is inconsistent with his writing, especially concerning the MC. Also, he likes to define the appearence of things with the most ridiculous parallels. Not even exaggerating, he would explain a women’s silver hair as bright and breathtaking as an exploding star in a universe of complete darkness. Literally, even the smallest things get an insane parallel. Anyways, the inconsistencies mostly lay in the fact that the mc does something and/or says something but then doesn’t act upon it. Spoilers ahead, but one example is when he uses aura in class and says he does not care to hid it and wants to flaunt it, but when it came to an actual battle with other people at risk - he refuses to use it. Also, early in the story he was able to combine his two elements, and we have never seen him use it since. Like what?
ネタバレを明かす A great take on the extra trope, the mc and side cast is likeable with actual goals, and the storyline has a lot of underlying mystery. Thank god there is no harem although there is not much romance as of ch 205. All in all it’s definitely worth a read.
this novel was exactly the type of novel that i was looking for i liked the characters the world building , and the atmosphere. the mc's personality is just my taste , overpowered but not in an unreasonable way, and this novel have the right amount of angst wish i absolutely loved. its my first time writing a review but i decided to do so cus i found it hard to find any other books on the same level even though i like the academy setting and extra or villain type mc its hard to find smth well written and actually interesting. im on chapter 204 i look forward to how things will go and i hope it won't turn bad . thank you author for this good read.
literally the best out there in this genre... read it I promise you won't regret it. p. s- though action is top tier along with world building but damn.. . this one gives feels too great
Hey author, I really like how you write mystery keep it up! Please don’t let the story devolve into mindless leveling up and face-slapping like many other novels in this genre.
I am delighted to have read this novel; it is very complete, and there is no disappointment. It has everything to please: a fluid writing style, a deep story, and endearing characters. I especially love the strong bond between our protagonist and their family, filled with affection and love. Just like with the first novel, *Rise of the White Devil*, I fell under its charm. I read it with sincere joy. Thank you to the author for these stories. To me, your writing style is among the best. Keep it up it's perfect!
i like it a lot the characters are very to my liking and so is the world building the MC's powers are very to my liking the only thing that this story lacks i would say is the power system frankly it's almost very bad it could be much better and much easier to understand but overall it's quite good to read
Finally a fellow harem hater. The writing is awesome The plot is crazy.................................................................................
Hey Crypthh, First of all, I just want to say that you don't have to take my review too seriously or as any form of criticism—you're the author, and it's your vision that makes this story so enjoyable. Even if you never read this comment, I’ll always be one of your biggest fans. From the very beginning, the story was already good, but as it progressed, your writing improved so much. The way you've enhanced your storytelling, built up the characters, and developed the plot is truly impressive. Hats off to you for your dedication and hard work—it's been an absolute pleasure to witness your growth as a writer. Also, I want to sincerely apologize for not being able to read this on Webnovel. Honestly, I'm pretty broke right now, but I'm focused on my studies and working towards a better future. If I ever do well in life, I promise I'll support your work the right way and read it on Webnovel. Your writing truly deserves all the recognition and support, and I genuinely appreciate the effort you put into creating such an amazing story. And to all the readers out there—definitely give this webnovel a try! The author’s writing improves so much mid-story, so please stick with it until it gets really interesting. You won’t regret it! Once again, thank you, Crypthh, for writing such an incredible story. You've done an amazing job, and I can't wait to see where the journey goes from here.
Review at the end of volume 1 My first thought after reading this book is “Flawed Masterpiece” This book has the most generic beginning. Mc loses family, get transmigrated to a fantasy world. But what really puts this book ahead of almost any book on this novel is the professionalism in the writing. This way the scenes are set up, how the characters interact, how monologues are provided and how cohesive the story is. It’s all premium. No one would bat an eye if this was a properly published light novel. There is no denying it the writer has talent. Even though the plot is generic the story itself has complex points, and goes away from cliches like plot armor, system and hero complex mc. I was pleasantly surprised on how fluid it felt. But, at the same time I feel this book not taking advantage of the web novels formats freedoms. The book feels too condensed, similar to a light novel every arc has to lead to another major arc. Which leads to mc personality development and leaves readers with solutions to previous mysteries and new questions. Which all feels accelerated as that is the format of writing a book. But webnovel allows you take a more slow approach, where you can build the world better with time to breath for the mc and the readers. For example, concepts like academy are just used for bringing the main cast together so that they could go to the next event in the story. The classes feel superficial and the rest of the school students might aswell be dolls. I know people will say it has been only 2 weeks in the story but for me the academy has already lost its shine. Another example would be the logic of this magic, the book just says mana Core==magic powers and skills. This is a typical l.novel structure where things are just stated to be true. Another would be just shrugging of questions like : how did the mc survive 2 years in the void realm?every single person on this would just believed it, cause a kid says so? What if he was kidnapped and brainwashed and lied. No one in this world thought that? Maybe dig in and ask the mc the secrets of the void. But no we will ignore this cause who cares. Again I am not being critical just for sticking out. I have to give high praises to this book for the high quality and professional content it provides. But I am just saying the book can take advantage of the web novel format. It allows authors to really refine their craft and build the world. Compared to a light novel format where you go from one story event to the next. With little time to breath.
THIS IS AWESOME. I'M AT 102 AND AUTHOR IS COOKING CRAZY HERE LIKE AT TIMES I DONT UNDERSTAND MOTIVES BUT HELL I CANT PUT IT DOWN SO YEAH READ ASAP
The more i read the more i like the story. It's the one of the best novel in Extra Genre. I hope it won't get dropped like certain Extra story with Void element MC. Best of luck Author.
Binged the first vvolum. This story has a very good potential to be up in the leagues of the big hitters. The cosmic horror aspect is also really well done. Give it a try. You won't regret it. If you're look for something to scratch your The Author's POV itch, this is it.
just finished shed vol 1 and i dont think I have words to describe this novel and the amount of plot twist I saw, I only have one thing to say to future readers this story is worth saving fast passes for
I dont know what to say. This novel is at the very top of my most liked storys. The development at the end of the first arc is amazing and the moment when things, you once deeply theorized about, get explained and click into place is simply the best. The only thing that can be remotely considered as „bad“ is that almost every f***ing chapter ends in a cliffhanger. But even this can sometimes be even more thrilling.
Absolutely amazing novel. The finale of the first volume was fucking fire. Keeping writing author cuz this is one of my favorite novels on the website.
Well, I’ve already read the entire first volume, which if I’m not mistaken goes up to chapter 175, and I just have to say that this is one of the best novels I’ve ever read. This novel keeps getting better and better. Yes, sometimes you get frustrated with the MC, but later, when it’s explained or you think carefully about why he did something, it all makes sense. It made me shed a few tears, the fights are epic, and the supporting characters are excellent. One of the best things about this novel is the mystery of wanting to know what happened—questions that are mostly answered in Volume 1. If you like stories where the MC has a tragic past or trauma but keeps moving forward, a powerful MC who stands out but isn’t so overpowered that the fights become boring, where the supporting characters feel real, and where the world is very dangerous and mysterious—this is for you.
PERFECT....but its a little slow paced, I hope author progress the plot faster. Also, could you please put the tournament arc as the next arc?
Truly one of the best novels ever. For anybody wondering, read it! It is so worth it in the end. Nearly cried when I reached the privileged chapter tag😭.
This book is as addictive as it is fun to read. Action around every corner. As his powers grow only more mysteries are created. What's possible next!?
I started this novel with low expectations because of the title, but it completely surpassed them. Although it was a bit rough around the edges at the beginning, it really came into its own as the story progressed. The character interactions feel natural, the story is engaging, and the characters are intelligent. The main character, in particular, is enjoyable. Overall, I highly recommend this novel.
Shameless author review here! Feel free to ask me questions regarding my novel, and I will try to answer them to the best of my abilities.