Illusion Sword of Mount Hua

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wewtard

20 chapters in and I have to say its definitely not bad my only complain is that the author makes the story look like a copy of the original novel with one extra character in the background not doing much, I understand the mc desn t have the ability to do anything just yet but the author should make the events that didnt change from the original shorter, instad of writeing a detailed version of Cheong beating some extras for 5 chapters he should make the details shorter or skip over the fights , most of us already know what happened and tbh I feel like I am rereading the original novel and for the ones who dont know it isant that important so writeing it shorter wont hurt the story. At least that s how I see things

LV 1

Jaehaerys83

Very Original, I love it. ............................................................................................................................................

LV 3

Bob_Bob_8597

Great story and idea since there aren’t any Mount Hua fanfics. The grammar is very good and it’s not boring to read, I recommend you to read it.