Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

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Doubleyolkeggs

Hello everyone, I'm the author Doubleyolkeggs, and I'm thrilled to be serializing my new book here. This is a story about transmigrating to a prehistoric world, which might be a bit niche, but I've spent a lot of time contemplating the world-building for this narrative. I hope to present it to you in a very engaging way and I hope you all enjoy it and find ample joy in reading it![img=recommend]

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MightyEagle

Great book, a real page turner. The excellent world building and kingdom building are such a rare find on Web Novel. I got hooked reading this book from the beginning.

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Yellowpuppy

The story of this novel is just too exciting; it’s the most thrilling plot I’ve seen so far. I hope to see the protagonist lead his tribe to develop step by step! It’s truly something to look forward to.

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SYED_AFAQ

Arthur is there any Yuri or ntr in it...

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Whisk92

A great novel that makes me reluctant to skip even a single chapter. I’m eagerly anticipating the protagonist’s future growth. Writing such a novel isn’t easy; it requires a lot of accumulated common sense and knowledge. I’m looking forward to the content of the author’s future works.

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BigWhiteGoose

The setting of this book is very interesting, and the protagonist doesn’t have any superpowers. This kind of novel can keep readers engaged for a long time; it’s truly great!I really enjoy this novel; the content is incredibly captivating, and the story’s pace is very tight. It’s definitely worth reading, and I will keep following it and continue reading! I am willing to recommend this novel to my friends. Honestly, it’s truly fantastic!

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Blazzing18

This book is good but it only lets u go to chapter 35 before u have to u passes witch almost all other books let u go to at least chapter 40 so in that regard this book suck and I wont use passes unless itspast chapter 40 at the very minimum!!

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Vassitri

as of chapter 141 I've enjoyed the story. the world building is slow but detailed, characters are distinct, but could use a bit more detail. the storyline is good as well. my biggest complaint is the constant change of he/him/she/her. characters are introduced and referred to as male, then 2 paragraphs later are "she/her" then back to male again. dozens of chapters after a character was introduced (Yara) I still have no idea if they are a man or woman because of the pronouns changing constantly. this problem is not exclusive to this character, but as a whole, pronouns are constantly flip-flopped.

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Xzerts

Повествование рваное, действия персонажей нелогичное. Лор интересный. Точно не 5 звёзд. Хотя задумка интересная, автор непоследователен в своих действиях и не учитывает множество нюансов. Если ты пишешь историю про развитие племени, то напиши ее хоть нормально

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ImJustOneGuy

Good book. Please don't drop it author. I'm waiting for more chapters to binge.

Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better

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krssto

great story and world building , the protagonist is smart.

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BWbear

The reason I like this book is that it makes me feel the story is completely real and logical. Unlike other novels that feature superhuman abilities, which can feel quite unrealistic, this one stays grounded. That’s why I will keep on reading!

It started with interesting kingdom/world-building and tolerable writing quality (though some times annoying). Then it managed to incorporate AI style writing while keeping stupid and inconsistent errors. And finaly by 200ish chapter it became incorrigibly cliched and braindead cultivation novel losing any semblance of worth. In both story and dialogues (those are absolutely abominable at times). And that too while keeping AI bullshit writing style (all those infuriating "prompting", "excuding" and overall pompous writing excessively smeared with out of place metaphors and comparisons all over it) with same stupid inconsistent errors (misplaced names and places, confusion of pronouns and genders). If anything managing to make that kind of chaos really requires special kind of genius talent Characters in this story feel very one dimensional and in the second half are basically thrown away entirely to be replaced with new ones introduced in that arc. And that mostly includes MC as well, since MC from the first half and MC from second half are that different in their behavior and logic. And that's not natural progression or development. Also if you want to read this for lemons they are ones of the worst you could find. Using "collision" in that context should be sign enough to not have any expectations for it. Dropping at 200 something. Division of "parts" in review is with that in mind.

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Bisker_Islam

Do you have pictures of beautiful women or not?....................................... ................................................................

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1Redhead1

personality trash mc like disdain towards primitive people without much worldly experience (what do you expect from primitive people) and laziness to teach them knowledge to quench their curiosity etc. with a messy way to uplift the tribes livelihood and organized functioning society, he just bombarding them with things here and there without proper planning.

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Lupita_Flores_2499

Es muy interesante y me encanta la forma en que se va desarrollando la historia.

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MiizStudz

decent story. decent writing. I have not gotten far, but so far it has a lot of potential to go places. I guess we will see. I hate to see a good story line fall short so 🤞. if I finish I will comment with an update .

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RoadWolfProduction

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