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レビューを書くmuito bom, continue assim.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Are you just going to just leave us hanging atleast update a chapter or two please or continue with the second footballer fanfic I'm begging you update
very consistent story sometimes misses out details but only really minor ones so no possible complaints from me the matches themselves are well detailed its a story where while talented our MC truly embodies the fact that maxing out on hardwork is the key to any success story
this is the best football fanfic i've ever read the characters is awesome but the only thing that bugs me a little is the update schedule other than that its awesome
This is probably the best football-related series I have read/seen (across manga, Books, novels). The author shows a great understanding of football tactics, skills, players, etc. There are parts that feel like a homage to some legendary players, particularly Ronaldo and Van Basten. I really liked that. He does a great job of making the MC's progression smooth with a simple system, he's a generational talent, but not extremely OP. The grammer and overall story flow is great as well. Highly recommended if you like sports series, particular football.
ネタバレを明かすEs una buena novela de fútbol, aunque el mtl lo deje avanzado ya que llegó un punto donde se hizo muy repetitivo, creo que una temporada después de que tuviera a su hija,lo único que me molestó era que si no recuerdo mal,siempre le marcaban la misma cantidad de goles en contra que se marcaron en la realidad, no se si me explico, el partido en la vida real acabo 2-2 y en la novela acaba 3-2, lo único que cambia es que el MC marcó gol, no está mal si son las primeras 3 temporadas al inicio, pero cuando más se nota es cuando llega al Madrid, donde sigue esta dinámica a pesar de que el hace sugerencias y fichan a los jugadores defensivos que el pidió, osea, no era el mismo Madrid de la vida real en esos años, era uno defensivamente mejor pero siempre le marcan los mismos goles, a lo mejor yo soy quisquilloso ya que mientras leo tengo una página donde veo los resultados que pasaron en la vida real para guiarme, pero bueno, en general una buena novela, algo larga y repetitiva, pero buena al fin y al cabo
ネタバレを明かすThis one started spectacularly. First 100 chapters were good. It was then the problems began to stick out like a sore thumb. First problem was slow pace. Because of slow pace, progression is slow. Repeatations were quickly noticed. Coupled with updating stability it's not very enticing to wait for next chapters. Character design was also lacking. Find mc's parents very annoying. They just worry about everything without any useful inputs. Their existence is only justified by increasing length of chapters were author will mention how worried they were. Author has good knowledge about football intricascies. So reading this is somewhat worthwhile. I was looking forward to time when mc can harness momentum and become a playmaker. But it hasn't reached there yet.
Lemme add a review so you know you won over another fan! Great translation or writing or whatever your doing lol. Tryna catch up and am sooooo happy to see this story is still being consistently updated. Keep up the great work 👏
Cara o romance e top, sem nacionalismo extremo, alem da gramatica excelente, fora que voce percebe que MC nao ganha as habilidades do nada, ele tem se esforçar muito.
This is a really good story. Definitely recommend it for anyone. It's well written, the characters are well developed and even though there is a system, it doesn't have much impact and the MC only develops skills through hard work. All in all, great story. Can't wait for more!
From not able to get a ball in the circle to representing China in asian cup, is a great journey and I hope it will continue to do so. also the developments and character interactions are not stupid which is great. Recommend it to read.
A truly great novel, the journey from nearly got kicked out of Almeria to Ajax is insane. Volume 1 has been done great, Now Volume two has begun, can't wait for the next journey
Autor dostarczył wielu niezapomnianych wrażeń . Pogłębił wiedzę na temat piłki nożnej. Dał mi wiele do myślenia o bohaterze Yang. Jestem zauroczona autora ma po prostu znakomity wenę twórczą. Idealnie oddał moją wizję świata powieści o piłce nożnej. Spełnił moich pokładanych w niej oczekiwań. Podobał mi się jej język/klimat/przesłanie . Ma ciekawą akcję i bardzo wiarygodnych bohaterów w tej powieści. Brawo dla autora.
Wonderful story, l really like that and l am looking forward to Yang Yang. This story is completely different from some fanfics that some authors decide to edit for better grammar and finally the grammar is not that different of mtl. This one has a good grammar and it's nice to read.
l edit my past review, this novel is a 5 stars novel. l loved reading the story and how Yang Yang progress: not too fast and not slow either, the perfect balance.
This is my third review for this novel and l am up to the current chapter and l have only one thing to say: WOW! l already liked this story when l read it with mtl, but now with proper grammar and correct names, it's a thousand times better. Now I don't have to search the internet for every misspelled name trying to guess the correct one. The story was already good but I think you added a little depth and meaning to the story with all the descriptions and everything you added. it's like it's a different story, if someone doesn't believe me, you can try and go read the mtl version and you'll see it's completely different.
Great story, one of the best ones focused on soccer. The MC development as a player makes much more sense than in most stories, with a lot of emphasis on fundamentals and smart career choices. Yang Yang is the goat
I'm already very advanced in the RAW but the novel is good, I didn't think I'd find it here with a good translation, keep updating who started reading it here go ahead and wait, the MTL isn't very nice...
This story unlike others I've read where the protagonist is given a system which will give him the skills of the most famous and talented players in history, this one changes this because although the protagonist has something similar these skills are only earned with dedication and self effort.in the opinion of a fan reading fan stories this story deserves my rating.
I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"
Hi there, I'm the one who published this story. Can you rate this story or comment if you see any mistakes? Seeing what you think will motivate me to edit more because this story has over 1000 chapters so we still have a long way to go before the end. I'm not making any money doing this, but I want to do it anyway because I have a lot of free time.
muito bom, continue assim.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Are you just going to just leave us hanging atleast update a chapter or two please or continue with the second footballer fanfic I'm begging you update
very consistent story sometimes misses out details but only really minor ones so no possible complaints from me the matches themselves are well detailed its a story where while talented our MC truly embodies the fact that maxing out on hardwork is the key to any success story
this is the best football fanfic i've ever read the characters is awesome but the only thing that bugs me a little is the update schedule other than that its awesome
This is probably the best football-related series I have read/seen (across manga, Books, novels). The author shows a great understanding of football tactics, skills, players, etc. There are parts that feel like a homage to some legendary players, particularly Ronaldo and Van Basten. I really liked that. He does a great job of making the MC's progression smooth with a simple system, he's a generational talent, but not extremely OP. The grammer and overall story flow is great as well. Highly recommended if you like sports series, particular football.
ネタバレを明かすEs una buena novela de fútbol, aunque el mtl lo deje avanzado ya que llegó un punto donde se hizo muy repetitivo, creo que una temporada después de que tuviera a su hija,lo único que me molestó era que si no recuerdo mal,siempre le marcaban la misma cantidad de goles en contra que se marcaron en la realidad, no se si me explico, el partido en la vida real acabo 2-2 y en la novela acaba 3-2, lo único que cambia es que el MC marcó gol, no está mal si son las primeras 3 temporadas al inicio, pero cuando más se nota es cuando llega al Madrid, donde sigue esta dinámica a pesar de que el hace sugerencias y fichan a los jugadores defensivos que el pidió, osea, no era el mismo Madrid de la vida real en esos años, era uno defensivamente mejor pero siempre le marcan los mismos goles, a lo mejor yo soy quisquilloso ya que mientras leo tengo una página donde veo los resultados que pasaron en la vida real para guiarme, pero bueno, en general una buena novela, algo larga y repetitiva, pero buena al fin y al cabo
ネタバレを明かすThis one started spectacularly. First 100 chapters were good. It was then the problems began to stick out like a sore thumb. First problem was slow pace. Because of slow pace, progression is slow. Repeatations were quickly noticed. Coupled with updating stability it's not very enticing to wait for next chapters. Character design was also lacking. Find mc's parents very annoying. They just worry about everything without any useful inputs. Their existence is only justified by increasing length of chapters were author will mention how worried they were. Author has good knowledge about football intricascies. So reading this is somewhat worthwhile. I was looking forward to time when mc can harness momentum and become a playmaker. But it hasn't reached there yet.
Lemme add a review so you know you won over another fan! Great translation or writing or whatever your doing lol. Tryna catch up and am sooooo happy to see this story is still being consistently updated. Keep up the great work 👏
Cara o romance e top, sem nacionalismo extremo, alem da gramatica excelente, fora que voce percebe que MC nao ganha as habilidades do nada, ele tem se esforçar muito.
This is a really good story. Definitely recommend it for anyone. It's well written, the characters are well developed and even though there is a system, it doesn't have much impact and the MC only develops skills through hard work. All in all, great story. Can't wait for more!
From not able to get a ball in the circle to representing China in asian cup, is a great journey and I hope it will continue to do so. also the developments and character interactions are not stupid which is great. Recommend it to read.
A truly great novel, the journey from nearly got kicked out of Almeria to Ajax is insane. Volume 1 has been done great, Now Volume two has begun, can't wait for the next journey
Autor dostarczył wielu niezapomnianych wrażeń . Pogłębił wiedzę na temat piłki nożnej. Dał mi wiele do myślenia o bohaterze Yang. Jestem zauroczona autora ma po prostu znakomity wenę twórczą. Idealnie oddał moją wizję świata powieści o piłce nożnej. Spełnił moich pokładanych w niej oczekiwań. Podobał mi się jej język/klimat/przesłanie . Ma ciekawą akcję i bardzo wiarygodnych bohaterów w tej powieści. Brawo dla autora.
Wonderful story, l really like that and l am looking forward to Yang Yang. This story is completely different from some fanfics that some authors decide to edit for better grammar and finally the grammar is not that different of mtl. This one has a good grammar and it's nice to read.
l edit my past review, this novel is a 5 stars novel. l loved reading the story and how Yang Yang progress: not too fast and not slow either, the perfect balance.
This is my third review for this novel and l am up to the current chapter and l have only one thing to say: WOW! l already liked this story when l read it with mtl, but now with proper grammar and correct names, it's a thousand times better. Now I don't have to search the internet for every misspelled name trying to guess the correct one. The story was already good but I think you added a little depth and meaning to the story with all the descriptions and everything you added. it's like it's a different story, if someone doesn't believe me, you can try and go read the mtl version and you'll see it's completely different.
Great story, one of the best ones focused on soccer. The MC development as a player makes much more sense than in most stories, with a lot of emphasis on fundamentals and smart career choices. Yang Yang is the goat
I'm already very advanced in the RAW but the novel is good, I didn't think I'd find it here with a good translation, keep updating who started reading it here go ahead and wait, the MTL isn't very nice...
This story unlike others I've read where the protagonist is given a system which will give him the skills of the most famous and talented players in history, this one changes this because although the protagonist has something similar these skills are only earned with dedication and self effort.in the opinion of a fan reading fan stories this story deserves my rating.
I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"
Hi there, I'm the one who published this story. Can you rate this story or comment if you see any mistakes? Seeing what you think will motivate me to edit more because this story has over 1000 chapters so we still have a long way to go before the end. I'm not making any money doing this, but I want to do it anyway because I have a lot of free time.
Have you dropped this book or you will still continue with it