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Reason it isn’t full 5 stars is due to it still being relatively new, but it has AMAZING potential. The author doesn’t have grammatical issues, the pacing of the story is nicely done so far, is also showing good world building, and many others I’m not actively listing. Currently, the character interactions seem to be shaping up nicely with, of course, your stereotypical bullies at the start, but at some point it appears the characters will somewhat compromise as teammates. I don’t know what the author plans on as far as longevity or how far they’ll take it, either college or actual pros, but I’m here for it. If I’m leaving something like romance out, well I honestly don’t know if that’ll ever be included, depends on the author. No matter what though, I’m really looking forward to the story and need more chapters.
Been looking for an American football story for a while now. really hope it's good
The synopsis looks good! Am willing to read but I won't start now. I will start once u have published atleast 20 chapters. I have read the greatest of all time atleast 10 times now,if it's anything like it, I'm sure I'll like this too! P .S. New people go read the greatest of all time if you have not already :)
I liked the book. You should continue updating it. I hope to see more chapters in the future 👍
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Reason it isn’t full 5 stars is due to it still being relatively new, but it has AMAZING potential. The author doesn’t have grammatical issues, the pacing of the story is nicely done so far, is also showing good world building, and many others I’m not actively listing. Currently, the character interactions seem to be shaping up nicely with, of course, your stereotypical bullies at the start, but at some point it appears the characters will somewhat compromise as teammates. I don’t know what the author plans on as far as longevity or how far they’ll take it, either college or actual pros, but I’m here for it. If I’m leaving something like romance out, well I honestly don’t know if that’ll ever be included, depends on the author. No matter what though, I’m really looking forward to the story and need more chapters.
Been looking for an American football story for a while now. really hope it's good
The synopsis looks good! Am willing to read but I won't start now. I will start once u have published atleast 20 chapters. I have read the greatest of all time atleast 10 times now,if it's anything like it, I'm sure I'll like this too! P .S. New people go read the greatest of all time if you have not already :)
I liked the book. You should continue updating it. I hope to see more chapters in the future 👍