/ Book&Literature / The Vengeful Lion of House Lannister
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The MC is granted a 2nd chance at life, only to wake up as a young Tywin Lannister. Follow the MC as he finds himself as part of a scheme fashioned by a higher being. He will have the opportunity to relive Tywin’s life while attempting to achieve his objective. With hindsight of the plot from the books, the MC will not only try to emulate Tywin’s greatest successes, but capitalize on his failures. All while carving his place in the World of a Song of Ice and Fire.
This is my first publication so feel free to comment. Lore and writing critiques will be considered.
This is ASOIAF Fanfic, that means it is R18. Anything goes- Violence, murder, sex, rape, incest, gore and tragedy. If you are easily offended then start complaining to G.R.R. Martin as this is based off of his work to which I am a fan. I am only practicing my writing while immersing my MC into a world I deeply enjoy.
*Not a sentient system.
*He will be breaking from book canon, so be warned.
*Current release schedule is at twice a week.
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Looks good so far(excited to see a new fic rather than more stolen work)
Why would the MC still act respectful to his father when he knew he could almost get away with anything he do, because of his fathers personality?
A beautiful story with an even more beautiful beginning. The only issue is the writing quality. It's not bad—in fact, it's good—but I hope it improves even further.
Good pace with added likable characters and world building. Couldnt have sales for more plus you got Tywin f* Lanniater as mc. The only bad thing i see about the book so far is that it has not too many chapters, but you just have to wait for that so… Also wouldnt want author to rush the story cuz hes not getting stones, just be patient, what is good will allways shine.
Very good story, definitely like how the system works (my only criticism would be to restructure the ‘skills’ tab to cut up into stages to make it clear what is at a ‘basic’ level vs ‘intermediate’…)
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The only defect so far is the low number of chapters (12), the rest, especially the naturalness between the relationships, the conversations, the script and its rhythm of the story (progression of time within the story) is sensational. Nothing is exaggerated, everything in the right proportion.
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Enjoying the book so far, good writing, looking forward to reading more of your stuff! The idea is definitely unique for me as I've never read a book with the MC entering into another character while being himself, it's definitely cool!
This story is so good!! Keep it up author! You got this, I really like character development. And the mc being a Tywin Lannister makes it more unique compared to GoT fanfics.
Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
I don't like the beginning of the story, the mc looks like a puppet as someone else said. but once there the mc acts like a real smartass, like the person whose place he takes, I can't wait to see if he will make the same romantic choices...
Just getting the ball rolling. Already have the story planned out, just having to get it down and out to the readers. And yes this is a shameless self promotion.
I was excited to read it, but I already gave up on the first chapter, the MC is just a puppet of a larger entity...........................................................