One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock

LV 15

Requien

I gonna be honest the Story is Bad, it has such an Chinese vibe of One piece that u read out of it, with the young Master Element in it and co. The Figures like Hancock and Kizaru etc. are not themself. I recommend not to waste time on this FF after reading like some chapter ist gets pretty boring

LV 5

Uchicha_Remant

I am willing to be shameless and give myself good review

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

The protagonist is a dragon, that is, the privileged and ruling class of that world (one piece). I like that the protagonist is not Luffy's pet, and that from the beginning Boa Hancock is saved by the protagonist without putting her status at risk. It is a Chinese novel but the story is not bad, it could be better if the paragraphs that are obviously Chinese are edited.

LV 15

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR

hey this is my only review or comment ill make on this ff now since I won't be reading it. It was great for a while, his abilities were cool and was looking forwardto what was next, I would say more but I won't cause I was disappointed with yuri in the harem, I even asked the author if there were any before reading it he said no, usually i take it like a grain of salt read abit before i personally see it or not. Sadly this was the case about chapter 50-52, just would've been great to be told so I didn't need to read it 😕

LV 3

Kono_Timoda

Imma be real with you, it is another trashy translation. but, why I like it is because the Chinese author isn't just making a wish fulfillment story, he's actually trying to flesh out the characters and make a well developed story with proper characters. My one problem is that I would love if the translator could make the story easier to read with a more natural English based syntax (which I can see the TL is getting better at) but I'm not complaining because we have lemons muhahaha Ch30 btw

LV 12

KeazL_

RAW : 航海：开局天龙人，拿下汉库克 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

LV 13

GodOfReader

I'mma be honest, The author is Pedophile, so are the reader of his in patreon. This FF contain alot of pornography involving a children. Please report this shit.

LV 14

unknown_daoist

Its the wirst of MTL, just blatantly lying with saying "fixed granmar" - there is no fixed grammar, just your typical MTL what makes it unreadable... probably just to promote his patreon - greedy author

LV 7

Melshan

Completely pathetic and disappointing, the author/translator has to put the tag Yuri, for people who hate Yuri like me, don't waste your time, Yuri is NTR.

LV 14

1stDrunkenImmortal

Just a translation with a bad story.

LV 4

PRIMORDIAL_09

FINALLY! we getting a celestial dragon as a mc!!

LV 3

Markushnia

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LV 13

DaoistgLZGKT

Great fanfic so far. Author doing a pretty good translation and the story is also smooth, hopefully it continue so.

LV 3

Author_for_fun

The Mc is just plain unlikable, and the constant gay undertones when he's binding men is annoying and honestly not funny, especially when it's constantly repeated. Also, I don't know why there's a romance tag considering that, so far, none of the girls he's with love him, Hancock has given up and basically accepted her fate but she seems not to enjoy his advances and was relieved when he ignored her. And the other is an undercover agent no need to explain.

LV 11

BrandPatriarch

not for everybody, slice of lemons, not many fights, and MC will be very OP sinse he is a tenryuubito with a system. still room for some charater develop tho, like MC gain power from system, but it does not increase his will (haki), or give him fighting exp, hope he will work for thouse

LV 1

Zakfiel_03

This is cool, the truth is that the proposal sounds interesting.............................................................................................

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eduardo_quintero

Sensacional y muy pero muy pero muy bueno espero por favor que lo continuas Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias

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Akhil4523_ssgk

bad you threw it away from chap 25 to 30

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Master_Dao

Good Fanfiction One Piece. This is the first time i read a fanfic with a MC Celestial Dragon and for the moment, it's awesome.

LV 1

Zero_idea

The idea is good and the system is good, but you would have made it a beauty system because the Hancock sisters are also talented, and also the three sisters are under 15 years old, and this is the world of One Piece. There is no internet for this. Children do not know these things, and the servants. You need to know that they are slaves who were taken by force, or from childhood. All that is required of them is to carry out orders and not even ask if they come to a good dragon. You need to know that the CP monitors the dragons. 24/7If a servant discusses with his master, they will kill him without asking. As for Hancock, she is a child. Her mind is not deep. She was suddenly kidnapped and saw the blackness of the world. All she needs to do is tie her to the system and let her train. Let her see how other dragons treat their slaves, and every once in a while, summon her and comfort her with gentle words and foreplay. It will be imprinted on her mind, and when Tiger comes, let her run away, after all, Hancock. She wouldn't be Hancock if she didn't become... Empress Try again bro you have talent. correct!! Man do you use the system in men???