/ Anime & Comics / I'm reborn as Rudeus Greyrat
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This is a fanfic based on the world of Reincarnation of the Unemployed with Rudeus as an assassin. Not that it's better than the original Rudeus, but I enjoyed the world, its characters, and the story. In addition to Rudeus' basic plushies, the character will have a game system, but a more willful one than usual in this type of fanfiction. Yes, it's the type of system that has a mind of its own and often trolls the protagonist. But in the end, the system ends up on his side.
This fanfic was banned, I tried to change some things maybe now it will be ok.
and the story is at patreon.com/FanFictionPremium
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1 he tells Roxy he is a reincarnated person 2 Roxy gets a system too I you like that then this story isn’t bad
How stupid is it to say something to someone else that you absolutely shouldn't? He reveals to others that he was reincarnated without any reason.
Author, please clear it out at the start: Is this a Harem Fanfic or not? I hope it is. I won't say much about tags anymore, though I still hope you won't make MC beta or something. Harem Lovers, Like: 👍
It's so amazing Tldr - Long chapters - well written chapters - the MCs personality comes off as slightly flat at times, and the narrative still can sometimes feel emotionally dull (but don't get me wrong, the fact that I can even recognise these traits should tell you how good this is) - system fic, so naturally it gets op but it's still entertaining - technically there is lolicon and shotacon, but the reason why these are socially bad is because of grooming and mental age (he's a reincarnator so it's a moot point) - he can talk to the waifus/wives so less drama in that regard (if you read the OG light novel, you'll understand 🙄) - MC is not as lecherous as the Of redeus but he is still a good MC to follow along 9/10 toots
Everything was good until the last chap, i.e. 36. The author didn't say he ended it, but with the way chapter 36 was written, it leaves no room for further development. The ending is frankly atrocious. It's like you were given a menu listing various delicacies, and everyone around you seems to be enjoying their food. Everything tasted great until you noticed a clump of hair in your last bite. And then, thinking back, you forgot to order appetizers or side dishes. There are so many characters who have not even been introduced, and their new stories remain unexplored. Good idea, decent execution, horrible ending. Grammar and layout are also below average.
Even though the fic has some questionable scenes, it starts off pretty well. The system aspect is a bit confusing and not very straightforward. I'm also unsure if I'll like the harem style the author is aiming for with Rudeus. But overall, it's an above-average read.
Me encanta ,lo único que me molestó hasta ahora fue que perdieron su virginidad demasiado joven pero por todo lo demás está increíble el fic🫠
So far so good! The story so far has been very engaging and I'm very happy that the grammar in this story isn't giving me an aneurysm] Hopefully the author keeps up the good work 😁
Loving the development of the novel right now. I like your way of writing, and thanks for the long chapters. Continue doing what your doing.
Creo que es una buena historia. Aunque preferiría que el protagonista tuviera conocimientos del mundo en lugar de un sistema, aún así me gusta mucho. La recomiendo totalmente.
Uff estoy emocionado por esta historia Bro ,me encanta , la gramática, los poderes y talentos no son exagerados lo cual está bien a mi parecer. Más capítulos Bro más , más ,más, más, más,.más muchos más capítulos 😃☺️
Keep up the good work in frequent chapter update. Nice consistent story that could be recommended to others.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Reading this author's works is like getting a pr0st!tute: you don't know if you'll have a great time or if you'll wake up with syphilis. Thankfully this novel is a great time; well written long chapters and an entertaining MC I would recommend 👍🏾
I don't like 1. MC told anyone he reincarnated/transmigrated 2. MC told anyone he got a system and ending was a rushed unfortunately but I am a simple guy and give this 5 stars because I simply enjoyed this one. - Idon't mind a vol. 2, same mc but maybe different world.
It was good at first, but the ending was unbelievably lazy and ruined the rest for me.
The story and idea are great, but jesus christ, the grammar needs work. From what I infer, the author already wrote these chapters, and he's just splitting them apart into chunks before posting. I have no clue how much chapters he has stocked up, but he should either implement the readers' suggestion for improving quality or try editing earlier chaps. For example, 1. Stick with one name per character (preferably the correct one). The author has misspelled Ghislaine multiple times in different ways 2. Maybe use brackets or some form of indicator for the system messages, e.g., [System message here] 3. Use quotes instead of dashes for the dialogue cus I still get confused about how tf the author is using the dashes at times, e.g., "Hello" 4. Run the chapters through a FREE grammar checker, e.g., grammarly, chatgpt, etc. 5. Proofread your work, and please for the love of God fix the pronouns. 6. This is a personal suggestion, but NEVER get peer pressured by the readers in deciding the direction your story takes. It never ended well from what I've seen. And you seem to be cooking some good ideas so you should be good 7a. I think you mentioned you are in Ukraine at some point in one of the chapters? I am not sure if you are using a translator, and I do not know if you even know english, so in that case, set up a discord 7b. Link discord to patreon such that the readers have to go to discord in order to read the chapters, and such you can hopefully more easily get suggestions for fixing grammar in the story. Patreon is also not reader friendly in that the options to filter chapters are limited, and you can't even sort them. Ig discord is the same in that aspect, but patreon gui is still mid af in my opinion 7c. Lastly, with a discord, you can have an interactive community where you can share ideas and get some feedback. Maybe set up some bots for some mini games like anigame or something Overall, it's a good fic, but the grammar is severely lacking in various aspects
Well this is actually my first time writing a review but I have to say, this is the best Mushoku Tensei Fanfic out on Webnovel. I loved it. Thanks for this, Author-San
good start to a great story just explain why he has toki or battle spirit when he has the laplas factor
waiting for comments and stones....