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Had high hopes, until the dude transforms into the batmobile because of the system, plus is scared of bane for no reason since he doesn't have the no gun rule, he could just ambush him with a bazooka. Stupid
The chapters dont even make sense of what is really happening. The authors way of telling story is hard to understand tbh. Should keep it simple for readers to hnderstand instead of using high level paragraphs. Idk why people like this story bcz it is nonsense.
There are 21 chapters published at the time I make this review. Correct the last chapters and separate the text into paragraphs. There's no way to read the last few chapters when each chapter is just a huge, gigantic single paragraph. Other than that, the translation and story are good.
it is very good, btw Where I can find the original? like the mtl version of it?
Hope you're enjoying the story. .............................................................................................
Your other fanfics are amazing well done and we as your readers just hope this one will exceed your previous fanfics in quality
Extremely terrible story. Reads like a child wrote it. batman is a joke. the system doesn't make any sense.
Had high hopes, until the dude transforms into the batmobile because of the system, plus is scared of bane for no reason since he doesn't have the no gun rule, he could just ambush him with a bazooka. Stupid
The chapters dont even make sense of what is really happening. The authors way of telling story is hard to understand tbh. Should keep it simple for readers to hnderstand instead of using high level paragraphs. Idk why people like this story bcz it is nonsense.
There are 21 chapters published at the time I make this review. Correct the last chapters and separate the text into paragraphs. There's no way to read the last few chapters when each chapter is just a huge, gigantic single paragraph. Other than that, the translation and story are good.
it is very good, btw Where I can find the original? like the mtl version of it?
Hope you're enjoying the story. .............................................................................................
Your other fanfics are amazing well done and we as your readers just hope this one will exceed your previous fanfics in quality
Extremely terrible story. Reads like a child wrote it. batman is a joke. the system doesn't make any sense.