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It’s written well and is a compelling story but the characters background doesn’t make up to his action and view. He’s supposed to be a warmonger from the blackstone legion be he act more a warden or lawbringer. The whole point of the blackstone legion lead by apollyon is to spread war and there contempt for weakness. So a well written Mc just his background lore doesn’t match up to how he acts
Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
pretty good story so far i just wish it was apollyon herself and not one of her soldiers as the mc, if anyone is writing an apollyon in GoT story please let me know
so far, the story is excellent. Are you making it like a knight of the seven kingdoms?
Love it please finish your fanfic and what time is this befor Robert rebellion or after it ?
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It’s written well and is a compelling story but the characters background doesn’t make up to his action and view. He’s supposed to be a warmonger from the blackstone legion be he act more a warden or lawbringer. The whole point of the blackstone legion lead by apollyon is to spread war and there contempt for weakness. So a well written Mc just his background lore doesn’t match up to how he acts
Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
pretty good story so far i just wish it was apollyon herself and not one of her soldiers as the mc, if anyone is writing an apollyon in GoT story please let me know
so far, the story is excellent. Are you making it like a knight of the seven kingdoms?
Love it please finish your fanfic and what time is this befor Robert rebellion or after it ?
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