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Schedule could be better, story development is alright and the summons are Random as hell but it ain't a bother. overall it's 👍
Tbh i only read four chapters before dropping it's not my cup of Tea i found it incredibly cringey (especially the banzai part) but the concept is very cool. The main character is my biggest complaint he's just bad i guess (feels really dry in my opinion) but that's all i have to say. I'm not saying it's unreadable I'm just saying there's room for improvement
Yoyo_Freeze Great Fanfic Keep up the good work You can do this GTA 5 fanfic idea after One Piece: GTA San Andreas System GTA V: Rebirth as Micheal De Santa Jack never really believed in transmigrations, just something to read to pass the time.He died from a heart attack.He met God and asks to be reborn in the body of Michael De Santa with the essence of the human science god, one of the protagonists of Grand Theft Auto V, six years before the Story Mode. This is the story of how he builds an empire and takes over Los Santos as he rises to the top Harem Amanda De Santa Tracey De Santa Kiki DeWynter Viola DeWynter Tanya Winters Maria Latore Lacey Jonas Kerry McIntosh Kate McReary (Deal Ending in GTA 4) Karen Daniels Ashley Butler Patricia Madrazo Mrs.Philips Sabine Brandt Clara Lille
Schedule could be better, story development is alright and the summons are Random as hell but it ain't a bother. overall it's 👍
Tbh i only read four chapters before dropping it's not my cup of Tea i found it incredibly cringey (especially the banzai part) but the concept is very cool. The main character is my biggest complaint he's just bad i guess (feels really dry in my opinion) but that's all i have to say. I'm not saying it's unreadable I'm just saying there's room for improvement
Yoyo_Freeze Great Fanfic Keep up the good work You can do this GTA 5 fanfic idea after One Piece: GTA San Andreas System GTA V: Rebirth as Micheal De Santa Jack never really believed in transmigrations, just something to read to pass the time.He died from a heart attack.He met God and asks to be reborn in the body of Michael De Santa with the essence of the human science god, one of the protagonists of Grand Theft Auto V, six years before the Story Mode. This is the story of how he builds an empire and takes over Los Santos as he rises to the top Harem Amanda De Santa Tracey De Santa Kiki DeWynter Viola DeWynter Tanya Winters Maria Latore Lacey Jonas Kerry McIntosh Kate McReary (Deal Ending in GTA 4) Karen Daniels Ashley Butler Patricia Madrazo Mrs.Philips Sabine Brandt Clara Lille