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I've read a lot of spiderman fanfictions and it's really hard to nail it like this it feels like actual responses that the spiderman would do. please whatever you do keep writing this I hope you can atleast get to 200 chapters because I love this fanfic
while this is readable and well done translation , mc's mentality is Chinese as this is a Chinese fic so expect the clitches like fat shaming, racism . this might be Au cause mcu's spiderman got one of the best version of Spidey sense which is shown but told it wasn't good until he went into noir .
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Im reading the early chapter, i think the pacing is too fast, in chapter 2 there is immediate timeskip. The concept in this novel is good, but i think you should invest and slow down the story so each world become impactfull for the story and the reader, hope it gets improved
I have read to the least chapter (6) and the story is unique and original I hope to read more
I've read a lot of spiderman fanfictions and it's really hard to nail it like this it feels like actual responses that the spiderman would do. please whatever you do keep writing this I hope you can atleast get to 200 chapters because I love this fanfic
while this is readable and well done translation , mc's mentality is Chinese as this is a Chinese fic so expect the clitches like fat shaming, racism . this might be Au cause mcu's spiderman got one of the best version of Spidey sense which is shown but told it wasn't good until he went into noir .
ネタバレを明かす Im reading the early chapter, i think the pacing is too fast, in chapter 2 there is immediate timeskip. The concept in this novel is good, but i think you should invest and slow down the story so each world become impactfull for the story and the reader, hope it gets improved
I have read to the least chapter (6) and the story is unique and original I hope to read more
Good.