Reviews of Robert I Baratheon by DaoistWDfd8h - Webnovel

60レビュー

4.4

  • テキストの品質
  • アップデートの安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界の背景

あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください

レビューを書く
Riccardo_De_Marchi

Keep writing, cool story need to know where it goes…

5mth
0 の返信を表示する
Gamer_Otaku448879

Dude this story has too much potential please update Your mc is amazing pls continue

img
5mth
0 の返信を表示する
Armand_Targaryen

Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?

img
6mth
0 の返信を表示する
Daioista

This fanfic can be summarized as follows: Someone offends robert* Robert: bhahahaha Someone: "My God he is so dangerous, he laughed at the offense I made, I must be careful" Robet: bhahaha Someone: "My god he's so dangerous, the way he laughs is so calculating"

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
bravo_bansal

is this dropped or what there hasn't been a chapter in a month or so

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
aswinguruswamy

The main problem is the upload rate. At least give us an update if you are going to continue writing, and if so, how frequent is it going to be.

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
Vaneford

Keep it up man[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
Tyronne_Taylor

Keep up the good work every update I love forward to it

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
AvengerV

first there are no Ntr ... people is too fast to make a review in that sense ... is true that the way the things happened is a little bit confused and that is 1 star less but in general i think is good and interesting to read

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
Sorrias

Pretty good, the Grammar is splendid, not perfect, but splendid, the character has a personality and the history is original too, he's OP but not in a physical way (Yet) but a mental one.

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
ThanatosGreekGod

37 chapters are out and the story is great! Until you get to the part where MC gets cucked by another character. Author is trying to play it off like the child could possibly be MC’s but it still explicitly states the other character touched MC’s woman many times and he even rubs it in the reader’s face talking about how “stimulating” it is to ravage the prideful mc’s woman…..

7mth
2 の返信を表示する
KnuckledBehemoth

One of the better GoT fanfics I've read. And i appreciate the 40k references here and there

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
ShieldMastra

please update regularly story is good so far.

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
Hotdiddy

Love the story but author doesn’t follow his own upload schedule

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
Keira_Kok

At the beginning, the fic was incredible with how the MC being easy-going and not too OP on some occasion and the comedy added in was a plus to me. But somehow along the line, it feels abit too rushed and messy to actually follow up with the storyplots, especially which romantic partner that MC going to have if this isnt a harem genre. But overall, not bad but not good fic.

img
7mth
0 の返信を表示する
CONNER_Jackson

Love the story so far And hoping we get more for the other stores. You've got why lion l johnson story

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
GrootT

35 chapters have gone by and absolutely nothing is happening. The author gives his Hanma bloodline and smart atoms and says he does not want the MC to be OP…. And the worst part is the NTR….

img
8mth
2 の返信を表示する
aceZ0
LV 4 Badge

I really liked this novel at the start but with the way plot isngoing its become convulted. Mc is a contrary to what you'd expect from a king (he chose a king essence). He's more suited for schemes, very contrary to the cover of this book lol. It also feels artificial cause his essence causes others to be loyal to him just by drinking his blood, and I haven't seen one character question how or why. Progress with characters also feels stale, old men who are players of the game fear him even as when he was just a child while women are attracted to him lol. He's a "king" who lets his treasure be used by others, slight hints of (#maybe/ntr). Characters also feel ooc at times and most times author doesn't follow the show not tell rule. He just writes that mc has a charismatic aura with "boisterous laughter" instantly able to befriend most people with most of the progress being cut. All in all you could find better asoiaf ff out there with way better mcs who became better kings even without an essence to aid them. I havent see any grammar/spelling mistakes and author has potential, I hope he keeps writing

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
Herach

Overall, it's fine. The powers given are a bit too OP. The MC is a bit too much of a Gary Stu without faults, and people keep basking in his glory. A lot of chapters are just long ego boosts. What got me to drop it was the NTR. If you're fine with it and can move on from it, then that's great. But it's not for me.

8mth
1 の返信を表示する
Castor_Med0

the story was good but chapter 33 onwards it was destroyed

ネタバレを明かす
8mth
1 の返信を表示する
Victor_Venegas

I'll start with the things I like, I always enjoy interesting world building as well as the resource management trope, much more so if it means the development of a world in the medieval era whit modern knowledge. From there things go downhill, there is much more focus on the secondary characters describing the main character's good qualities than actually showing those qualities. Power, strength, wisdom and all the things that many of us want to obtain in one way or another is quite good, the problem is when to make these qualities shine you have to overshadow that of others, you are not the smartest person in a room because others are stupid, you are the "smartest" because you have more knowledge. Lastly, and the reason why I will unfortunately stop reading what in my opinion could have been something much more interesting to follow is the whole bloodline excuse, I say excuse because it seems that there is no other way in which the author can manage making his character shine so he decided to make it extremely powerful basically for free, in my opinion the most interesting thing about a story where a character develops is the development itself, from the age of 10+ the protagonist already has a super developed body almost better than some adults and now at 16 he will have (apart from the already superior advantages it had) even more advantages, there is nothing more to read, will the mad king do something stupid that will endanger something? It doesn't matter, the protagonist will solve it without a problem after all he have a lot of charisma and now almost super powers. Thanks for your efforts, good luck with your story.

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
aswinguruswamy

I wish i could rate more. Wonderful writing and story development. I like Robert's personality. Ideal hero. Thanks author. Please do write more. Cheers.

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
Xavierzelaya2

[img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
Odil
LV 14 Badge

It's a gem! Try it, you won't regret it.

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
mercurystarship

I haven't watched Game of Thrones, so I only know about it from other fanfics. This one is well-written and interesting. There are a few things I'm not clear on, and some parts I don't agree with, but I'm still intrigued and want to read more. Overall, it's pretty good.

img
8mth
0 の返信を表示する
The_Trickster303

I really like that you put efforts in introducing the characters 💕💕

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
EugenSimion

Yep, so far so good! I'm on chapter 19 and I gotta say, this story is promising! Do you have patreon with advance chapters or is what's posted here the latest?

8mth
1 の返信を表示する
Destrokali

Good....................................

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
Aks_ChainsOfHeaven

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

img
8mth
0 の返信を表示する
augusto_henrique

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
Riccardo_De_Marchi

Keep writing, cool story need to know where it goes…

5mth
0 の返信を表示する
Gamer_Otaku448879

Dude this story has too much potential please update Your mc is amazing pls continue

img
5mth
0 の返信を表示する
Armand_Targaryen

Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?

img
6mth
0 の返信を表示する
Daioista

This fanfic can be summarized as follows: Someone offends robert* Robert: bhahahaha Someone: "My God he is so dangerous, he laughed at the offense I made, I must be careful" Robet: bhahaha Someone: "My god he's so dangerous, the way he laughs is so calculating"

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
bravo_bansal

is this dropped or what there hasn't been a chapter in a month or so

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
aswinguruswamy

The main problem is the upload rate. At least give us an update if you are going to continue writing, and if so, how frequent is it going to be.

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
Vaneford

Keep it up man[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
Tyronne_Taylor

Keep up the good work every update I love forward to it

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
AvengerV

first there are no Ntr ... people is too fast to make a review in that sense ... is true that the way the things happened is a little bit confused and that is 1 star less but in general i think is good and interesting to read

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
Sorrias

Pretty good, the Grammar is splendid, not perfect, but splendid, the character has a personality and the history is original too, he's OP but not in a physical way (Yet) but a mental one.

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
ThanatosGreekGod

37 chapters are out and the story is great! Until you get to the part where MC gets cucked by another character. Author is trying to play it off like the child could possibly be MC’s but it still explicitly states the other character touched MC’s woman many times and he even rubs it in the reader’s face talking about how “stimulating” it is to ravage the prideful mc’s woman…..

7mth
2 の返信を表示する
KnuckledBehemoth

One of the better GoT fanfics I've read. And i appreciate the 40k references here and there

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
ShieldMastra

please update regularly story is good so far.

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
Hotdiddy

Love the story but author doesn’t follow his own upload schedule

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
Keira_Kok

At the beginning, the fic was incredible with how the MC being easy-going and not too OP on some occasion and the comedy added in was a plus to me. But somehow along the line, it feels abit too rushed and messy to actually follow up with the storyplots, especially which romantic partner that MC going to have if this isnt a harem genre. But overall, not bad but not good fic.

img
7mth
0 の返信を表示する
CONNER_Jackson

Love the story so far And hoping we get more for the other stores. You've got why lion l johnson story

7mth
0 の返信を表示する
GrootT

35 chapters have gone by and absolutely nothing is happening. The author gives his Hanma bloodline and smart atoms and says he does not want the MC to be OP…. And the worst part is the NTR….

img
8mth
2 の返信を表示する
aceZ0
LV 4 Badge

I really liked this novel at the start but with the way plot isngoing its become convulted. Mc is a contrary to what you'd expect from a king (he chose a king essence). He's more suited for schemes, very contrary to the cover of this book lol. It also feels artificial cause his essence causes others to be loyal to him just by drinking his blood, and I haven't seen one character question how or why. Progress with characters also feels stale, old men who are players of the game fear him even as when he was just a child while women are attracted to him lol. He's a "king" who lets his treasure be used by others, slight hints of (#maybe/ntr). Characters also feel ooc at times and most times author doesn't follow the show not tell rule. He just writes that mc has a charismatic aura with "boisterous laughter" instantly able to befriend most people with most of the progress being cut. All in all you could find better asoiaf ff out there with way better mcs who became better kings even without an essence to aid them. I havent see any grammar/spelling mistakes and author has potential, I hope he keeps writing

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
Herach

Overall, it's fine. The powers given are a bit too OP. The MC is a bit too much of a Gary Stu without faults, and people keep basking in his glory. A lot of chapters are just long ego boosts. What got me to drop it was the NTR. If you're fine with it and can move on from it, then that's great. But it's not for me.

8mth
1 の返信を表示する
Castor_Med0

the story was good but chapter 33 onwards it was destroyed

ネタバレを明かす
8mth
1 の返信を表示する
Victor_Venegas

I'll start with the things I like, I always enjoy interesting world building as well as the resource management trope, much more so if it means the development of a world in the medieval era whit modern knowledge. From there things go downhill, there is much more focus on the secondary characters describing the main character's good qualities than actually showing those qualities. Power, strength, wisdom and all the things that many of us want to obtain in one way or another is quite good, the problem is when to make these qualities shine you have to overshadow that of others, you are not the smartest person in a room because others are stupid, you are the "smartest" because you have more knowledge. Lastly, and the reason why I will unfortunately stop reading what in my opinion could have been something much more interesting to follow is the whole bloodline excuse, I say excuse because it seems that there is no other way in which the author can manage making his character shine so he decided to make it extremely powerful basically for free, in my opinion the most interesting thing about a story where a character develops is the development itself, from the age of 10+ the protagonist already has a super developed body almost better than some adults and now at 16 he will have (apart from the already superior advantages it had) even more advantages, there is nothing more to read, will the mad king do something stupid that will endanger something? It doesn't matter, the protagonist will solve it without a problem after all he have a lot of charisma and now almost super powers. Thanks for your efforts, good luck with your story.

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
aswinguruswamy

I wish i could rate more. Wonderful writing and story development. I like Robert's personality. Ideal hero. Thanks author. Please do write more. Cheers.

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
Xavierzelaya2

[img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
Odil
LV 14 Badge

It's a gem! Try it, you won't regret it.

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
mercurystarship

I haven't watched Game of Thrones, so I only know about it from other fanfics. This one is well-written and interesting. There are a few things I'm not clear on, and some parts I don't agree with, but I'm still intrigued and want to read more. Overall, it's pretty good.

img
8mth
0 の返信を表示する
The_Trickster303

I really like that you put efforts in introducing the characters 💕💕

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
EugenSimion

Yep, so far so good! I'm on chapter 19 and I gotta say, this story is promising! Do you have patreon with advance chapters or is what's posted here the latest?

8mth
1 の返信を表示する
Destrokali

Good....................................

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
Aks_ChainsOfHeaven

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

img
8mth
0 の返信を表示する
augusto_henrique

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

8mth
0 の返信を表示する
next page