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CaioBR

Great story, I highly recommend you read it, anyway I don't have much to say The original story is by OmegaLul1234 The original story is by OmegaLul1234 The original story is by OmegaLul1234

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OmegaLul1234

Author here! I am now posting this story on webnovel and have posted arc 4 for those who are interested. Also, for any new readers, I have rewritten the first two arcs, so there are many corrections and easier flow of reading. Thanks!

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Jobloss344

Loving it best mushoku tensei fic I seen loving it so far plz don’t drop the main character some times acts like a Typical mc but then tips it on it head not acting naive and doing what needs to be done.

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Kaizou_Koi

This is one of the best fanfics of mushoku tensei. I love how the story,plot and emotion connects. I also love the character developments and interactions between them. I hope the author finishes it completely otherwise it will be very sad and disappointing if it gets dropped

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Lion_Comet

Soo far everything is following canon events and he is just an improved version of Rudy with Touki...

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Zlivikir

One of the best fics I've ever read, both the character development and the MC's personality are good, and although I don't like harem I see that the author won't simply throw new girls at the MC every 20 chapters.

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WLuz
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É ótima fanfic muito bem escrita com um ótimo MC com um ótimo roteiro. Agradecimentos ao escritor desta obra, pois eu nunca tinha visto uma fic de mushoku tensei tão boa antes, na verdade acho que nem tem

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JBrandt

Amazing. Chapter 47 the best chapter in this story so far; Leons fight with Orstead was INCREDIBLE, all of Arc 3 was incredible! I’m still curious about Leon, whom he truly is (or what); reincarnation, some weird miko or something else. GREAT WORK! And please update the this again soon. ❤️

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1_2_7029

What a story. It feels like the beginning of a masterpiece... ................................................................................................................

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Termotanque

Amo esta historia, el desarrollo de personajes me parece increíble y muy bien logrado. Espero el autor pueda terminarla cuanto antes

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Grass_Cutter

This is a good story. I had a 900+ letter review singing it’s praises, but WebNovel had to be jank. To summarize the story has wonderful grammar, and style. The author is well knowledgeable when it comes to Mushoku Tensei, and I would prefer the story to go a bit more off the rails rather than MC taking Rudeus’ place, but better.

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SaintArgus

Well, honestly, I didn't watch the anime, I like reading fanfic and I really don't like most of them, they just follow the same course which is boring when you read almost the same thing, also from my point of view it's the same rudeus but without being perverted

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Unlimited_

So far, it is still following the flow of the anime’s main story, but it’s still REALLY well written. I would recommend this

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Hit_Me_Truck_kun

Great writing and quite good compared to what I expected but it is very slow paced to my taste. I would surely recommend it to u if you can deal with the pace.[img=recommend]

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Shinomiya_Akira

Wow!😍,harus aku katakan ini sangat luar biasa!!,ini salah satu ff mushoku tensei terbaik yang aku baca😳,hanya saja pembaruan yang cukup lambat sedikit mengurangi Reting....😔dan semoga saja ff ini tidak dijatuhkan/diberhentikan🤐

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i_dont_like_garems

Looking forward to new chapters! The story is not very fast but not slow either, Mac’s relationship with other characters is very pleasant and well described by the author, and Mac himself is not super strong, a little stronger than Rudy

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Ken_Kaneki_3855

I'm actually captured by this novel, it's by far the best MST novel that I've read, It's very interesting on how he changes things on the cannon

6mth
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Machete_007

Good enough to have it as a book. No mistakes so far. Still don't know why this has so few ratings. Keep up the good work author sun........,...................................................... .........

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HyperMan07

I’m completely in love with this novel, keep it up author. I’m earnestly waiting for the next arc, I’ll provide you with power stones

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Josue_Alarcon

I love the story, the mc is also well written, keep it up, although I see that the story hasn't been updated in a while. 👍 stars I look forward to the next update and continuing this great story

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Supper_mega

this is great, it's not just a copy paste of a fic and the mc actually works hard and the characters have emotion too not like any other fic of jobless reincarnation, I absolutely recommend that you read this( I hope it continues to update)

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Yugi_Yugi

Good give it a try it one of those good fanfic that not that many find

7mth
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Magasu_senpai

does he really steal rudeus girls? I just need a know

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CaioBR

Great story, I highly recommend you read it, anyway I don't have much to say The original story is by OmegaLul1234 The original story is by OmegaLul1234 The original story is by OmegaLul1234

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OmegaLul1234

Author here! I am now posting this story on webnovel and have posted arc 4 for those who are interested. Also, for any new readers, I have rewritten the first two arcs, so there are many corrections and easier flow of reading. Thanks!

5mth
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Jobloss344

Loving it best mushoku tensei fic I seen loving it so far plz don’t drop the main character some times acts like a Typical mc but then tips it on it head not acting naive and doing what needs to be done.

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5mth
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Kaizou_Koi

This is one of the best fanfics of mushoku tensei. I love how the story,plot and emotion connects. I also love the character developments and interactions between them. I hope the author finishes it completely otherwise it will be very sad and disappointing if it gets dropped

5mth
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Lion_Comet

Soo far everything is following canon events and he is just an improved version of Rudy with Touki...

img
5mth
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Zlivikir

One of the best fics I've ever read, both the character development and the MC's personality are good, and although I don't like harem I see that the author won't simply throw new girls at the MC every 20 chapters.

5mth
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WLuz
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É ótima fanfic muito bem escrita com um ótimo MC com um ótimo roteiro. Agradecimentos ao escritor desta obra, pois eu nunca tinha visto uma fic de mushoku tensei tão boa antes, na verdade acho que nem tem

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5mth
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JBrandt

Amazing. Chapter 47 the best chapter in this story so far; Leons fight with Orstead was INCREDIBLE, all of Arc 3 was incredible! I’m still curious about Leon, whom he truly is (or what); reincarnation, some weird miko or something else. GREAT WORK! And please update the this again soon. ❤️

5mth
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1_2_7029

What a story. It feels like the beginning of a masterpiece... ................................................................................................................

6mth
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Termotanque

Amo esta historia, el desarrollo de personajes me parece increíble y muy bien logrado. Espero el autor pueda terminarla cuanto antes

6mth
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Grass_Cutter

This is a good story. I had a 900+ letter review singing it’s praises, but WebNovel had to be jank. To summarize the story has wonderful grammar, and style. The author is well knowledgeable when it comes to Mushoku Tensei, and I would prefer the story to go a bit more off the rails rather than MC taking Rudeus’ place, but better.

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6mth
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SaintArgus

Well, honestly, I didn't watch the anime, I like reading fanfic and I really don't like most of them, they just follow the same course which is boring when you read almost the same thing, also from my point of view it's the same rudeus but without being perverted

6mth
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Unlimited_

So far, it is still following the flow of the anime’s main story, but it’s still REALLY well written. I would recommend this

6mth
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Hit_Me_Truck_kun

Great writing and quite good compared to what I expected but it is very slow paced to my taste. I would surely recommend it to u if you can deal with the pace.[img=recommend]

6mth
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Shinomiya_Akira

Wow!😍,harus aku katakan ini sangat luar biasa!!,ini salah satu ff mushoku tensei terbaik yang aku baca😳,hanya saja pembaruan yang cukup lambat sedikit mengurangi Reting....😔dan semoga saja ff ini tidak dijatuhkan/diberhentikan🤐

6mth
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i_dont_like_garems

Looking forward to new chapters! The story is not very fast but not slow either, Mac’s relationship with other characters is very pleasant and well described by the author, and Mac himself is not super strong, a little stronger than Rudy

6mth
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Ken_Kaneki_3855

I'm actually captured by this novel, it's by far the best MST novel that I've read, It's very interesting on how he changes things on the cannon

6mth
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Machete_007

Good enough to have it as a book. No mistakes so far. Still don't know why this has so few ratings. Keep up the good work author sun........,...................................................... .........

6mth
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HyperMan07

I’m completely in love with this novel, keep it up author. I’m earnestly waiting for the next arc, I’ll provide you with power stones

6mth
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Josue_Alarcon

I love the story, the mc is also well written, keep it up, although I see that the story hasn't been updated in a while. 👍 stars I look forward to the next update and continuing this great story

6mth
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Supper_mega

this is great, it's not just a copy paste of a fic and the mc actually works hard and the characters have emotion too not like any other fic of jobless reincarnation, I absolutely recommend that you read this( I hope it continues to update)

7mth
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Yugi_Yugi

Good give it a try it one of those good fanfic that not that many find

7mth
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Magasu_senpai

does he really steal rudeus girls? I just need a know

7mth
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