/ Fantasy / Stuck in a Chinese novel
概要
An amazing world of cultivation. A majestic world where miracles happen. There is a warrior who defies destiny and forge his own path facing innumerable difficulties ahead.
Come and join the life of the person who will go against the set destiny of the cruel world and become something extraordinary.
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Extraordinary my foot. What is this illogical cr*p? Does it even make sense?
If you are doctor, then work in a hospital. What the hell are you doing going after girls?
If you are a commander in the army, then bring your army to get revenge on those who wronged you. Why go through the trouble of pretending to be a weakling.
You are a useless son in law? Your wife's family thinks you are good for nothing? Then how the hell did you score her in the first place?!!! If they like money so much and you are a hidden millionaire, then why in the name of sanity would you hide this fact and be berated every day?!!!
The hell is all this?!!! The more I read it, the more illogical it becomes. Like this all came straight out of someone's as--
[Host, why don't you calm down?]
'You shut up!!! You're the reason I'm stuck here in the first place!!!!'
[Host, you need anger management]
'THE FU*K DID YOU SAY?!!!!!'
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Hello everyone!
This is my second novel and so far, nothing is decided. This is just an idea that has been plaguing my mind for quite a long time and I decided to let it out and let you guys decide whether or not I should work on it.
Give it a proper read and let me know. You guys will decide the fate of this novel.
Also, I would like you guys to come up with proper genres for this story.
Bonus chapters:
150 PS for one chapter
300 PS for another chapter
20 GT for two chapters
50 GT for another two chapters
1 Review of 4 stars or above, 1 extra chapters
Maximum extra chapters per week: 7
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The cover is A.I generated and is not mine.
If the real owner would like me to remove it, let me know in any chapter comments.
That's it. Enjoy!
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Hello guys! Author here. This is a new novel I am writing and unlike my first novel, I'm writing this one without a plan. Anything could happen. My MC could be cruel or sympathetic, good or evil, nothing is known for sure. Stick with me and find out what I bring to you. I promise you won't regret it.
Author has cooked really hard. Many left halfway because of mc temperament, but if u read till 76, you will notice he only behaves such on useless matter
the 1st chapter is a totally let down. im only reading it and i can totally not believe it. because the MC seems to have a few screws loose from the get go and seems to like walking and running naked all over the place. and seems to like screaming a lot and looks stupid to everyone around him. so those looking to try it. better not.
Decided to read it since it was free and luckily it was. Ignoring everything off putting with the Mc, his personality, and the system, it’s blatantly obvious that the author goes out of their way to nerf him multiple times. To awaken Qi he all of sudden has to earn 1 billion yuan and instead of converting stolen money to gold he end up leaving it because the author says he doesn’t need it right now. What exactly is the main premise of this novel?? Isn’t the whole point of him doing business and making money to get gold and beat the protagonist?? This Mc is supposedly some business savant in his previous life and all he does is kill and rob people. His businesses are even more of a joke and are forced asf. He has 1 year before he dies and he does what? Produce movies and games… But sure plot allows him to complete everything in a month. Like honestly, he inherits an entertainment company from his current body and he fires everyone from the beginning. At that point why even have an entertainment company at all, just make a completely different one or better yet just copy the company you had in your past life. Can’t say how frustrating it was to read this, the author tries making things intricate but ends up contradicting himself, adding in a bunch of things that don’t really help the story. I will say that the premise is somewhat novel in having an mc who doesn’t know the plot. However, the inclusion of him buying said plot via the system was definitely a mistake. Overall, good idea but it was a fumble.
This novel is interesting. Please show the real evil mc. Most villain novels are not villain. Please show the real evil mc.
synopsis is bait, doesn't correlate with the story I thought this web novel was supposed to break cliches but it didn't. Main character becomes a villain and gets a luck plunder system, also he's supposed to make hell for the protagonist. Overused and really bland tbh, other than that it just feels like another Chinese cashgrab with with a copy and pasted plot.
I really like this story. No harems, no super duper pianos, no perversions. The temperamental main character. This is exactly what I've been looking for all this time.
Personally, this novel is better then many out there. though many think MC is short tempered due to first few chapters, but believe me the Author Cooked 5 star cuisine. Anyways without spoiling much, mc isn't system slave, readable and most important uses his BRAIN. All in all, it's a good read that I enjoyed. Definitely rereading again.
I was hooked reading the synopsis thinking the mc going to bash all the cliche events of the Chinese novel setting but colour me suprised when he get a snaching hero luck type of system and then routine continue where mc take mantle of villain taking hero opportunity like in all chinese novel , i expected the novel to be like [I want play by the books] novel,but i was disappointed, sad,angry .
So far I love the story it's a fun read, but i at this point it doesn't feel like his family is the top family in the city, everyone is so easily targeting them and facing no serious repercussions. Everything he is facing on his own. Does the family gets more involve later on, and shows why they are the top family?
I stopped at chapter two, MC is temperamental, every time he speaks he has to shout 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
The character’s personality is like if Batman lacked a sense of justice, other than that the Author is incredibly creative and legible.
Excellent Light Novel. A crucial point to not lose focus would be Internal Consistency, ensuring that the characters' actions are in accordance with their professions, motivations and the world in which they live.
If you are going to God forbid read this novel be prepared for half baked jokes and cringe dialogues where Mc screaming at the air is considered funny.