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Well, so far so good. It was a nice and enjoyable reading. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
I read up to chapter 5, which was the last chapter released so far, and my conclusion is that the author really doesn't know much about the story.The author changes the names of some characters with others, characters that should already be dead are still alive. Now in relation to the MC in this story he is irrelevant he has no charisma, he inherited the powers and treasures of Artoria but so far it seems like he just wants to be a servant of house Arryn
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I like the concept a lot, but I think this is poorly executed. Reading what the author has already written made me feel like he isn't really familiar with ASOIAF. There are too many inconsistencies and blunders along the way. At least, that's what I feel. Maybe it's too early to form an opinion, and things could change, but to be honest, I have quite low expectations about this story
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This is a good fic and the idea itself is good however I have a question did u stop writing?
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Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
I read up to chapter 5, which was the last chapter released so far, and my conclusion is that the author really doesn't know much about the story.The author changes the names of some characters with others, characters that should already be dead are still alive. Now in relation to the MC in this story he is irrelevant he has no charisma, he inherited the powers and treasures of Artoria but so far it seems like he just wants to be a servant of house Arryn
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I like the concept a lot, but I think this is poorly executed. Reading what the author has already written made me feel like he isn't really familiar with ASOIAF. There are too many inconsistencies and blunders along the way. At least, that's what I feel. Maybe it's too early to form an opinion, and things could change, but to be honest, I have quite low expectations about this story
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This is a good fic and the idea itself is good however I have a question did u stop writing?