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all the places are based on a fantasy trope. The updates are consistent and sheesh the MC's character design is hot. The story development is so-so.
Interesting story concept, but some immaturity in writing technique that disturbs the flow for the reader. From switching between 1st and 3rd person perspective every paragraph or so, to restricted vocabulary and/or repetitive word use (eg nearly very sentence in a paragraph starting with or exclusively using the pronoun, ‘she’). For me, this many grammatical issues in the opening chapters has me dropping the book and leaving a cautionary review for those readers who find these kinds of consistent flaws to be off putting too.
The story's good although I want more romance between Remillia and Cypher. The action or adventure of the MC is well written. However the one character that I love the most is Macaron. I really love owls [img=Loving it] Please author, I want more of Macarons's adventures
At first,I start reading this book just to get a free pass but as soon as I read 1 chapter my interest start growing and in just 2 days I have completed 31 chapters. I found this really really interesting. a nice choice for everyone who love adventure and fantasy stories. Overall the story and character setting are amazing.
Very enjoyable version/remake of “The Novel’s Extra” - while it follows the same plot, I really like that the MC was changed from male to female and the “hero” now has a crush on her. Looking forward to more.
I gotta say, I got this story on my daily reco and I'm glad that I took the plunge to read it. It's quite a fun lighthearted read. I ended up reading up to the privileged chapters (chapter 43) The MC is a fun character. To me, she comes off almost borderline psychotic with the way she talks to her pet owl and system out loud, thereby having random people looking at her weirdly. She's got a very nonchalant attitude, but that also doesn't stop her from giving the same energy back whenever people try her. I like the way the author didn't do the typical "oh I gotta get away from the MC and co. to be an extra!!!"...while doing things that get the MC and their crew's attention. MC here legit goes out of her way to stay with the MC here because she knows she needs to help them, especially seeing how things are changing. I think the story is a bit too early to judge the other characters as atm they need fleshing out, but I trust that the author will get into that once we get more chapters and the more she interacts with the world. Right now as the story is still a bit early, we're only getting snippets here and there of the actual world, but from what we've seen so far it seems promising. While there are some tropes that are reminiscent of other novels of a similar genre, (TNE as one example) I think the author did a good job of putting their own twist into it that kept me engaged. There are a couple of minor grammatical errors and typos, but nothing that would throw you off of your immersion to the story. Now the big thing. The author put paid chapters starting from chapter 20 and while I personally think that it's too early, I hope you readers continue with it anyway. I found it's worth spending my coins on the story as I've found it to be an enjoyable read so far.
So far the novel is good for me I just hope it doesn't drop Please continue author-san 🫶 It would also be great if you could increase the number of words in one chapter Or maybe publish two chapters in one day, so your novel will spread faster
The syntax is awful. The diction is super repetitive. The author can’t decide whether they want to write in third person or first. The logic behind some of the scenes is just so stupid and forced. Author does a good job with being super descriptive and allowing you to imagine the scenes in your mind as you read but it doesn’t rlly work with the other issues constantly breaking your immersion. I was going to read all the free chapters but couldn’t make it past chapter 6. Wouldn’t recommend.
all the places are based on a fantasy trope. The updates are consistent and sheesh the MC's character design is hot. The story development is so-so.
Interesting story concept, but some immaturity in writing technique that disturbs the flow for the reader. From switching between 1st and 3rd person perspective every paragraph or so, to restricted vocabulary and/or repetitive word use (eg nearly very sentence in a paragraph starting with or exclusively using the pronoun, ‘she’). For me, this many grammatical issues in the opening chapters has me dropping the book and leaving a cautionary review for those readers who find these kinds of consistent flaws to be off putting too.
The story's good although I want more romance between Remillia and Cypher. The action or adventure of the MC is well written. However the one character that I love the most is Macaron. I really love owls [img=Loving it] Please author, I want more of Macarons's adventures
At first,I start reading this book just to get a free pass but as soon as I read 1 chapter my interest start growing and in just 2 days I have completed 31 chapters. I found this really really interesting. a nice choice for everyone who love adventure and fantasy stories. Overall the story and character setting are amazing.
Very enjoyable version/remake of “The Novel’s Extra” - while it follows the same plot, I really like that the MC was changed from male to female and the “hero” now has a crush on her. Looking forward to more.
I gotta say, I got this story on my daily reco and I'm glad that I took the plunge to read it. It's quite a fun lighthearted read. I ended up reading up to the privileged chapters (chapter 43) The MC is a fun character. To me, she comes off almost borderline psychotic with the way she talks to her pet owl and system out loud, thereby having random people looking at her weirdly. She's got a very nonchalant attitude, but that also doesn't stop her from giving the same energy back whenever people try her. I like the way the author didn't do the typical "oh I gotta get away from the MC and co. to be an extra!!!"...while doing things that get the MC and their crew's attention. MC here legit goes out of her way to stay with the MC here because she knows she needs to help them, especially seeing how things are changing. I think the story is a bit too early to judge the other characters as atm they need fleshing out, but I trust that the author will get into that once we get more chapters and the more she interacts with the world. Right now as the story is still a bit early, we're only getting snippets here and there of the actual world, but from what we've seen so far it seems promising. While there are some tropes that are reminiscent of other novels of a similar genre, (TNE as one example) I think the author did a good job of putting their own twist into it that kept me engaged. There are a couple of minor grammatical errors and typos, but nothing that would throw you off of your immersion to the story. Now the big thing. The author put paid chapters starting from chapter 20 and while I personally think that it's too early, I hope you readers continue with it anyway. I found it's worth spending my coins on the story as I've found it to be an enjoyable read so far.
So far the novel is good for me I just hope it doesn't drop Please continue author-san 🫶 It would also be great if you could increase the number of words in one chapter Or maybe publish two chapters in one day, so your novel will spread faster
The syntax is awful. The diction is super repetitive. The author can’t decide whether they want to write in third person or first. The logic behind some of the scenes is just so stupid and forced. Author does a good job with being super descriptive and allowing you to imagine the scenes in your mind as you read but it doesn’t rlly work with the other issues constantly breaking your immersion. I was going to read all the free chapters but couldn’t make it past chapter 6. Wouldn’t recommend.