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Ok, the story is decent and the interactions and relationship-development between the characters is refreshing compared to other DxD ffs. The novel is definitely worth a read. HOWEVER, the writing quality needs editing. And I’m not talking about some small mistakes. You can see the author putting some work into the novel, and that’s commendable. But the sentence structure, some missing words (not often,but it’s there), general grammar and wording of some parts leaves some room for improvement. It’s a bit dicey to read (not so bad compared to certain ffs), definitely better as an audio-book (the writing is definitely more pleasant to the ear rather than visually). Overall, a decent read.
can someone explain the system tag I've read 14ch i still can't see anything like that !
História tá parecendo interessante,só achei um pouco desanimador o MC não ter nenhum dedo de ouro fora a capacidade mágica que vai demorar muito para começar a ajudar ele em algo já que ele é humano e facilmente morto
okay here the thing ,mc give girls to Issei .. basically mc help Issei become better ..and make Issei have harem ... Well that's how the story goes , I'm not sure if this will change in future .. but overall,most people's read novel with perspective their self as main character... now here the question for author , so you will give girls to other mc if you reincarnated in another world ?
ネタバレを明かす Ok, the story is decent and the interactions and relationship-development between the characters is refreshing compared to other DxD ffs. The novel is definitely worth a read. HOWEVER, the writing quality needs editing. And I’m not talking about some small mistakes. You can see the author putting some work into the novel, and that’s commendable. But the sentence structure, some missing words (not often,but it’s there), general grammar and wording of some parts leaves some room for improvement. It’s a bit dicey to read (not so bad compared to certain ffs), definitely better as an audio-book (the writing is definitely more pleasant to the ear rather than visually). Overall, a decent read.
can someone explain the system tag I've read 14ch i still can't see anything like that !
História tá parecendo interessante,só achei um pouco desanimador o MC não ter nenhum dedo de ouro fora a capacidade mágica que vai demorar muito para começar a ajudar ele em algo já que ele é humano e facilmente morto
okay here the thing ,mc give girls to Issei .. basically mc help Issei become better ..and make Issei have harem ... Well that's how the story goes , I'm not sure if this will change in future .. but overall,most people's read novel with perspective their self as main character... now here the question for author , so you will give girls to other mc if you reincarnated in another world ?
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