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This is my second review on this fanfic so far I actually like the story it's a little generic yes but the concept and the actual story is not bad at all the only glaring major fault I have with it is the author for some reason thinks this is some kind of cultivator world yes I know it's a translated Chinese fanfic but he's completely missed that this is not cultivator Knights or samurais duels. Just in case before anyone says something like they can't interfere they're too powerful there's multiple levels of Fighters around yes a genin can't interfere with a cage level fight because they will get crushed like bugs without being able to do anything but on a jonin level fight even a chunin can make a difference by putting pressure on. They're Ninja so there's should be no standing around watching a duel and commenting on that when you can be sneak attacking the other people There's no such thing as honor in ninjas except serving their Village
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4.0 Timelines and shi are so confusing wth, its either the translator just don't bother to edit the translation or just dont. sigh im done
Bro at least this author mentions it in the description, do you know how many shameless people did not even mention anything, look at web novels now, a lot of Chinese fics, and some even behave like writing their own novels.
I'm caught up (chapter 172 at the time of writing this), and overall, I would highly recommend it. It is a translation, but it's well done compared to others. The MC focusses on smithing with a secondary focus on personal strength. Three things (imo) make this novel a good one. The first and best reason is that the MC doesn't care about changing the plot and has already done so quite a bit. It's refreshing to see honestly. The second reason is that it doesn't take place in Konoha and actually tries to dive deep into the hidden mist and greater world overall. The third reason is that the MC feels relatively human in his actions and reactions, not like a super psychopath that randomly becomes a monster. I can actually understand him. Overall, would definitely recommend giving it a shot if it seems interesting.
One of my best Naruto's novels It's perfect and very different , I finished it in 2 days ...............................................................
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Bloated mess. It is preachy filled with explanations on explanations and back stories of back stories. The amount of filler and repetitive nonsense is astounding. Whatever story being told gets drowned in the excessive filler for word count.
This is one amazing naruto fanfic and that is new in story setting that is different from others naruto fanfics and hope you can continue making it and here a idea you can use in future when you more weapons how about upgrading the seven swords of hidden mist and or combine them with materials for forging new improved and more powerful version of them.
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I don't know what to say, well I really like this fanfic, and, I would say that in the case you don't know if you want to start readind thos fanfic or not, I'd say to give it a chance. Well, thanks for the update[img=update]
I LOVE THIS FF!!! It’s a breath of freshness in a valley of (bluntly putting it) generic Naruto ff. I would definitely recommend giving it a try! Kisame being the MC’s friend also helps as he one of my favourite characters. The conflicts within the Mist village also somewhat mirror the ones of Konoha, however, the slight difference between the two present the overall situation in a completely new light, making the story engaging and exciting! Give it a try!! You will not regret it!
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I like the story a lot it's not the greatest but it is a fun read the only issue I have with it is very system dependent and in my opinion that's taking quite a bit away from the story it'd be a little better if he did more blacksmithing and work on his own without complete Reliance on the system especially even to get bonuses or points from the system it should not be some odd Loop where it has to be pretty much maintained from the system by the system him earning anything should at least be somewhat separate
The story quality is pretty good and advancing at a slow but steady pace. It kinda reminds me of another naruto FF called “wind calamity” due to it’s focus on the characters experience in the world vs most other fanfics which is that characters experience with the plot
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I can confidently say this is amazing there is another novel like this on the platform and it’s absolute garbage, but this, this is peak great translation good storytelling character design it’s nice 👍 keep up the good work author
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very good translation quality. making swords to get famous and get famous to run gacha, run gacha to get stronger and get stronger to get more materials, more materials makes more swords, repeat. Good loop. Give it a try.
EXCELLENT! Very unique story with an amazing story style that'll blow your mind. I really like the reaction of people when they see the effect of soma's swords. People shouldn't be dissing and low rating this novel for patron problem, this is webnovel, judge the book for its content here.
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ネタバレを明かす This is my second review on this fanfic so far I actually like the story it's a little generic yes but the concept and the actual story is not bad at all the only glaring major fault I have with it is the author for some reason thinks this is some kind of cultivator world yes I know it's a translated Chinese fanfic but he's completely missed that this is not cultivator Knights or samurais duels. Just in case before anyone says something like they can't interfere they're too powerful there's multiple levels of Fighters around yes a genin can't interfere with a cage level fight because they will get crushed like bugs without being able to do anything but on a jonin level fight even a chunin can make a difference by putting pressure on. They're Ninja so there's should be no standing around watching a duel and commenting on that when you can be sneak attacking the other people There's no such thing as honor in ninjas except serving their Village
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4.0 Timelines and shi are so confusing wth, its either the translator just don't bother to edit the translation or just dont. sigh im done
Bro at least this author mentions it in the description, do you know how many shameless people did not even mention anything, look at web novels now, a lot of Chinese fics, and some even behave like writing their own novels.
I'm caught up (chapter 172 at the time of writing this), and overall, I would highly recommend it. It is a translation, but it's well done compared to others. The MC focusses on smithing with a secondary focus on personal strength. Three things (imo) make this novel a good one. The first and best reason is that the MC doesn't care about changing the plot and has already done so quite a bit. It's refreshing to see honestly. The second reason is that it doesn't take place in Konoha and actually tries to dive deep into the hidden mist and greater world overall. The third reason is that the MC feels relatively human in his actions and reactions, not like a super psychopath that randomly becomes a monster. I can actually understand him. Overall, would definitely recommend giving it a shot if it seems interesting.
One of my best Naruto's novels It's perfect and very different , I finished it in 2 days ...............................................................
Nice plot story fan fiction Naruto Keep good job Dhdjdjdkdjdhsjsjssjjssjshsjsjdududhdjdjdjdjdjdjdhdjdjdhdjdjdhsjdhdjdhdjdhdududjdhdjdjdjdjdjddjjddkjdididjdjdjdjdjdjddjjddjjdjdjd
Bloated mess. It is preachy filled with explanations on explanations and back stories of back stories. The amount of filler and repetitive nonsense is astounding. Whatever story being told gets drowned in the excessive filler for word count.
This is one amazing naruto fanfic and that is new in story setting that is different from others naruto fanfics and hope you can continue making it and here a idea you can use in future when you more weapons how about upgrading the seven swords of hidden mist and or combine them with materials for forging new improved and more powerful version of them.
:)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(:
I don't know what to say, well I really like this fanfic, and, I would say that in the case you don't know if you want to start readind thos fanfic or not, I'd say to give it a chance. Well, thanks for the update[img=update]
I LOVE THIS FF!!! It’s a breath of freshness in a valley of (bluntly putting it) generic Naruto ff. I would definitely recommend giving it a try! Kisame being the MC’s friend also helps as he one of my favourite characters. The conflicts within the Mist village also somewhat mirror the ones of Konoha, however, the slight difference between the two present the overall situation in a completely new light, making the story engaging and exciting! Give it a try!! You will not regret it!
ネタバレを明かす I like the story a lot it's not the greatest but it is a fun read the only issue I have with it is very system dependent and in my opinion that's taking quite a bit away from the story it'd be a little better if he did more blacksmithing and work on his own without complete Reliance on the system especially even to get bonuses or points from the system it should not be some odd Loop where it has to be pretty much maintained from the system by the system him earning anything should at least be somewhat separate
The story quality is pretty good and advancing at a slow but steady pace. It kinda reminds me of another naruto FF called “wind calamity” due to it’s focus on the characters experience in the world vs most other fanfics which is that characters experience with the plot
good story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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I can confidently say this is amazing there is another novel like this on the platform and it’s absolute garbage, but this, this is peak great translation good storytelling character design it’s nice 👍 keep up the good work author
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very good translation quality. making swords to get famous and get famous to run gacha, run gacha to get stronger and get stronger to get more materials, more materials makes more swords, repeat. Good loop. Give it a try.
EXCELLENT! Very unique story with an amazing story style that'll blow your mind. I really like the reaction of people when they see the effect of soma's swords. People shouldn't be dissing and low rating this novel for patron problem, this is webnovel, judge the book for its content here.
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