DUNE-A False Haerach-(SI into brother of Irulan)

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AsItWasWritten

Peak fiction, as it was written, lisan al gaib. Do not drop, we must see the golden path. My one critique is that you post too slowly, I am impatient. Your healing asoiaf fanfic was great too.

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King_Kitkat

PLEASE READ,I never leave reviews as they are not helpful to readers only writers but I must see this creation prosper. So far, the story has been great, with the only Grammer being the misuse of a word or two and forgetting to use the plural version instead of singular.

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CorvusThan

this has a great premise. i saw how on another side this story got a bit target by people critizing its"realism" and all. Which is funny when you are talking about a fictional universe in the first place... So to the author: dont listen to the trolls. You are writing a solid developing story that makes me check daily for updates!

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xHelios

It’s an ok fic, no more than that. Mc is the son of the emperor and bene gesserit and gets sent to arrakis when he’s about a couple months old, becomes fremen freedom fighter and then leader, also hates the prophecy and fights against it. Makes technology like odm gear from attack on titan, shield for the planet, etc. Grammar is barely passable, sometimes you can read it, and then other times you can’t. The person talking will be written her 10x, and then you find out it was actually a guy the whole time. It confuses me when you can’t even properly gender whoever is currently talking at the time, and makes this fic annoying to try to read and understand. Plot is just meh, reading for fun.

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QBL

I liked it so far. I've only watched the movies, haven't read the comics or novel, and one thing stood out to me: there are many references to Arabic culture and Muslims (words like: kazaab, al mahadi...).

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Eladzha

Good>VERY GOOD) Just give it

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that_crazy_bastard

ok, so since it's ended I can definitively say it's absolute cinema

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Cynthia_Martin_2461

iiiiiìiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiloveittttyttty

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Marmora

That story is great, really good. There are some mistakes, but nothing major. I just don't like the protagonist, but everything else is pretty cool.

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_Diddy_

Plot given enough time to unravel, and mc motives are justified. Some typos here and there, but nothing too devastating. So far very promising.

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Sin_of_sloth

a great story with intriguing writing and an excellent plot. i really hope you keep going with this.

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Greta_traps

Grate fanfic can’t wait for more chapters to be posted

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sunles

PLEASE READ,I never leave reviews as they are not helpful to readers only writers but I must see this creation prosper. ……………………………………………………………………..

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megaman_zero

it is the dune universe so go read the original books or watch the movies for background world. update a bit slow but hey this ff already completed, so im not complaining. mc, writing quality n story devs is good. i really love reading any author making a dark grim story to become more brighter and hopeful, if that make any sense to you. anyways, congrats author for finishing ur story 🎉🎉🎉

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Guri_01_09

🔥🔥🔥🔥 Captured Dune in its Essence. 👍👍 MC could have been better, but all other characters 👍👍

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DarkDemon_KING

This an amazing story, sad that it ended but happy for its good conclusion.

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raghavjpr

This story was truly special to me. I’m overjoyed and thankful that the author brought it to a proper conclusion, especially since they often leave stories unfinished. Yet, I can’t help but feel a bit sad now that this journey has come to an end—it’s like saying goodbye to a dear friend.

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Insta_username

Well a good fic from Bum author.. Well bum one can destroy this fic like ll the other's. ..............................................................................................................................

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SonDio

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