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Hey, stop right here. Yeah, I'm talking to you, stop looking around. Well, this isn't your regular 'author review'. It serves as a Q&A section and also, for suggestions. You can ask anything you're curious about concerning the story, and I so much welcome your creative ideas too. Done reading? No more drooling over it again, start asking and suggesting. Sharp! ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ
It is readable. Story premise is good. Execution is terrible. Way to much immersion breaking, plot armor is too thick. Lack of using the story premise, his clones, in any intelligent way. MC is a moron. - He dives into dungeons without any knowledge. Not even the basics. Like the types of dungeons, or basic combat/survival knowledge. - He sends a stupid clone to school while he dives into the dangerous dungeon alone... - Agrees to a guild contract without a lawyer to read it... His guild recruiter who knows he has a rare ability, doesn't even have someone to watch over him.
the mc is really stupid can't answer basic questions and the author 'forgot' the harem tag which I just noticed
When I first delved into the initial chapters, I sensed a remarkable potential within the story. My instinct turned out to be accurate; this narrative encompasses all the essential elements that contribute to a compelling and unforgettable tale. It's fascinating how each reader interprets the story through their unique lens, bringing personal experiences and perspectives to the forefront. I feel compelled to offer a word of caution: if you're currently reading this, don’t deprive yourself of the opportunity to fully immerse yourself in this captivating story. Every page holds a new twist or revelation that could resonate deeply with you. Trust me, you wouldn’t want to regret missing out on such an intriguing journey in the future.
I've been hooked from the first few chapters of Dual Levelling. The protagonist, Lee Seung, faces incredible loss and tragedy, setting the stage for his quest for power and revenge. His unique ability to create replications adds a fascinating twist to the leveling system, making battles exciting and strategic. The emotional depth of his journey, paired with thrilling action sequences, keeps you eagerly turning pages. It's a fresh take on the typical monster-hunting genre, and I'm excited to see the story development in later chapters.
I love this novel. The description is okay for me. Although I haven't read all available chapters but I'm enjoying it and of course reading more. Hehehe 😁😁
initial chapters: mc character is all over the place. mc doesn't even check how his clone is different or how it works. he just magically knows it's tangible and working out effect the clone or how long it stays active. no experimentation whatsoever. His clone knows how to fight an arm opponent without any prior training. author u r not even trying at this point.
I liked the premise, but that's about it. it's awfully similar to one man what I read some time ago with some small changes. I didn't like the way the first chapter introduced us to things that should be introduced during the actual reading of the novel and not in an auxiliary chapter. I don't like that there is problems with the management of numbers and altough the author seems to read comments and say he will check it, doesn't. overall not recommended unless you want to read something while shooting off your brain and read it just to pass time.
got up to the first chapter, and it's good. Plus, I think that cloning and leveling will be good.
The game like settings is quite interesting as well as the cloning, which add new taste to my flavour. Hope you will update more.
I love the concept of clones fighting alongside the protagonist! The main character starts off weak but grows stronger with each passing chapter. He excels at expressing his feelings, and the world’s lore is well-crafted and cohesive. Overall, it's easy to follow, fun to read, and highly recommended
No proper tags at all! What’s the point? I don’t have time to be wasting reading half the novel just to get blindsided why would you not disclose that either in the synopsis or tags?
A brilliant start, good flow of story and excellent character design. So far it's going in right direction and plot developing interestingly. Highly recommend.
Its a good story the only reason i rated it a 4.8 was beacuse it doesnt have daily uploads, besides that its awesome and has a fast pace at the beginning but it uses that well and manages to capture your interest even though most other fail when doing something similar. Overall its a good read and i recommend others atleast give it a shot.
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From the title we already know this is gonna be a good one. Not a solo leveling fan? you'll love it! A solo leveling fan? You will love it even more! well, at least that's the vibe i got from the first few chapters. Writing Quality? Pass. Story Development? Pass. Character Design? A pass, but it would be better if there were more descriptions. world background? seems to follow solo-leveling and MHA style - got to love it! Update Stability? this is the only rating I deducted because it is only 3 chapters a week but since everyone has irl responsibilities, I'll be lenient and give a 3. all round, this book is a great read so far!
bro you have inspired by someone I have no this but the cloan technique I love it keep it up but focus it on one thing you stories interesting but the development is league looking like exact solo leveling don't look like it because you have a upper hand like clone used it
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The starting looked unique and the way the story progressed was not too fast and not too slow it wad perfect. The scenes were explained well. Hope to see more and continue this work. Its unique and way better.
Now you see, I may be a little bias because this is some power I wanted myself but I should say that the writing is applied well in gaining this awakening of their power. It is good through and through . It does stake a few chapters to get off the ground and get into exploring the ability but it is fine when the story behind it keeps it flowing. It is something I intend to keep on reading and others should join me. Because it's cloning. Did I say how much I like the concept of clones? I know there is one famous cloning thing but now this looks like it could be the next. Interesting.
To be honest I have no ideas it was fun or not to read cause it just 9 chapters when this review was written. But I need to read more, reading this book remind me from neighborhood book which getting anime adaptation. I love the premise of this book, expect romance in future plot. So far good work for author and fun book to read.
The story is really good and it reminds me of auto hunting with my clones and that other manhwa I forgot what it was called. The writing quality is great and so is the world building. the rest is average.
Seriously, the concept of clones in a world at war? Count me in! Looking forward to diving deeper into this unique power and seeing how it shapes the protagonist's journey. Definitely recommend giving it a read! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Wow, an ability of cloning. But the chapter are still little😓 Expecting more chapter author
as reading the 1st chapter made me laugh, and get more interested in the story. I will continue to support you in every chapter you create. a nice and well rounded story is a good story
Hey, stop right here. Yeah, I'm talking to you, stop looking around. Well, this isn't your regular 'author review'. It serves as a Q&A section and also, for suggestions. You can ask anything you're curious about concerning the story, and I so much welcome your creative ideas too. Done reading? No more drooling over it again, start asking and suggesting. Sharp! ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ
It is readable. Story premise is good. Execution is terrible. Way to much immersion breaking, plot armor is too thick. Lack of using the story premise, his clones, in any intelligent way. MC is a moron. - He dives into dungeons without any knowledge. Not even the basics. Like the types of dungeons, or basic combat/survival knowledge. - He sends a stupid clone to school while he dives into the dangerous dungeon alone... - Agrees to a guild contract without a lawyer to read it... His guild recruiter who knows he has a rare ability, doesn't even have someone to watch over him.
the mc is really stupid can't answer basic questions and the author 'forgot' the harem tag which I just noticed
When I first delved into the initial chapters, I sensed a remarkable potential within the story. My instinct turned out to be accurate; this narrative encompasses all the essential elements that contribute to a compelling and unforgettable tale. It's fascinating how each reader interprets the story through their unique lens, bringing personal experiences and perspectives to the forefront. I feel compelled to offer a word of caution: if you're currently reading this, don’t deprive yourself of the opportunity to fully immerse yourself in this captivating story. Every page holds a new twist or revelation that could resonate deeply with you. Trust me, you wouldn’t want to regret missing out on such an intriguing journey in the future.
I've been hooked from the first few chapters of Dual Levelling. The protagonist, Lee Seung, faces incredible loss and tragedy, setting the stage for his quest for power and revenge. His unique ability to create replications adds a fascinating twist to the leveling system, making battles exciting and strategic. The emotional depth of his journey, paired with thrilling action sequences, keeps you eagerly turning pages. It's a fresh take on the typical monster-hunting genre, and I'm excited to see the story development in later chapters.
I love this novel. The description is okay for me. Although I haven't read all available chapters but I'm enjoying it and of course reading more. Hehehe 😁😁
initial chapters: mc character is all over the place. mc doesn't even check how his clone is different or how it works. he just magically knows it's tangible and working out effect the clone or how long it stays active. no experimentation whatsoever. His clone knows how to fight an arm opponent without any prior training. author u r not even trying at this point.
I liked the premise, but that's about it. it's awfully similar to one man what I read some time ago with some small changes. I didn't like the way the first chapter introduced us to things that should be introduced during the actual reading of the novel and not in an auxiliary chapter. I don't like that there is problems with the management of numbers and altough the author seems to read comments and say he will check it, doesn't. overall not recommended unless you want to read something while shooting off your brain and read it just to pass time.
got up to the first chapter, and it's good. Plus, I think that cloning and leveling will be good.
The game like settings is quite interesting as well as the cloning, which add new taste to my flavour. Hope you will update more.
I love the concept of clones fighting alongside the protagonist! The main character starts off weak but grows stronger with each passing chapter. He excels at expressing his feelings, and the world’s lore is well-crafted and cohesive. Overall, it's easy to follow, fun to read, and highly recommended
No proper tags at all! What’s the point? I don’t have time to be wasting reading half the novel just to get blindsided why would you not disclose that either in the synopsis or tags?
A brilliant start, good flow of story and excellent character design. So far it's going in right direction and plot developing interestingly. Highly recommend.
Its a good story the only reason i rated it a 4.8 was beacuse it doesnt have daily uploads, besides that its awesome and has a fast pace at the beginning but it uses that well and manages to capture your interest even though most other fail when doing something similar. Overall its a good read and i recommend others atleast give it a shot.
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From the title we already know this is gonna be a good one. Not a solo leveling fan? you'll love it! A solo leveling fan? You will love it even more! well, at least that's the vibe i got from the first few chapters. Writing Quality? Pass. Story Development? Pass. Character Design? A pass, but it would be better if there were more descriptions. world background? seems to follow solo-leveling and MHA style - got to love it! Update Stability? this is the only rating I deducted because it is only 3 chapters a week but since everyone has irl responsibilities, I'll be lenient and give a 3. all round, this book is a great read so far!
bro you have inspired by someone I have no this but the cloan technique I love it keep it up but focus it on one thing you stories interesting but the development is league looking like exact solo leveling don't look like it because you have a upper hand like clone used it
ネタバレを明かす The starting looked unique and the way the story progressed was not too fast and not too slow it wad perfect. The scenes were explained well. Hope to see more and continue this work. Its unique and way better.
Now you see, I may be a little bias because this is some power I wanted myself but I should say that the writing is applied well in gaining this awakening of their power. It is good through and through . It does stake a few chapters to get off the ground and get into exploring the ability but it is fine when the story behind it keeps it flowing. It is something I intend to keep on reading and others should join me. Because it's cloning. Did I say how much I like the concept of clones? I know there is one famous cloning thing but now this looks like it could be the next. Interesting.
To be honest I have no ideas it was fun or not to read cause it just 9 chapters when this review was written. But I need to read more, reading this book remind me from neighborhood book which getting anime adaptation. I love the premise of this book, expect romance in future plot. So far good work for author and fun book to read.
The story is really good and it reminds me of auto hunting with my clones and that other manhwa I forgot what it was called. The writing quality is great and so is the world building. the rest is average.
Seriously, the concept of clones in a world at war? Count me in! Looking forward to diving deeper into this unique power and seeing how it shapes the protagonist's journey. Definitely recommend giving it a read! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Wow, an ability of cloning. But the chapter are still little😓 Expecting more chapter author
as reading the 1st chapter made me laugh, and get more interested in the story. I will continue to support you in every chapter you create. a nice and well rounded story is a good story