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Wow, this was a mess. It didn't even bother to give a proper introduction to the MC. The writing absolutely sucks, the run-on sentences and lack of punctuation make it hard to read, and the pacing is incredibly bad. Also, inserting Goku into MHA? Do you want the world to be destroyed? Why give him all that power when he can't even use most of it unless he wants to destroy the entire solar system? All in all, it's not worth reading this, as it goes way too fast for readers to actually take in the plot and I'm pretty sure there's gonna be some convoluted bs that the author pulls because the MC will literally bulldoze through everyone otherwise.
Wow, this was a mess. It didn't even bother to give a proper introduction to the MC. The writing absolutely sucks, the run-on sentences and lack of punctuation make it hard to read, and the pacing is incredibly bad. Also, inserting Goku into MHA? Do you want the world to be destroyed? Why give him all that power when he can't even use most of it unless he wants to destroy the entire solar system? All in all, it's not worth reading this, as it goes way too fast for readers to actually take in the plot and I'm pretty sure there's gonna be some convoluted bs that the author pulls because the MC will literally bulldoze through everyone otherwise.