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It’s a very interesting premise and I look forward to the future developments. And if I didn’t like it I wouldn’t bother reviewing. That being said, there’s a glaring issue that really brings this novel down… there’s basically no character descriptions and this includes Christine aka the MC. In fact let me go ahead and list all the things we know about Christine: - They’re female. - They presumably have fox ears and fox tail(s), though this is never explicitly stated in the actual text. - They were called beautiful once in chapter 9 or 10. That’s the extent of Christine’s character description. Hair color, eye color, height, figure, all of these things are left to the imagination, I guess. It’s somehow even worse for the NPCs who are basically just names without descriptions and have no memorable quirks. Not that Christine has any memorable quirks either, nor has she or any of the NPCs had the opportunity to show them it they did. No time was spent assessing the internal situation or exploring the Solstice Empire before the story began focusing exclusively on external matters. That would have been the best time to write some fun NPCs.
What A Great Start It Have I'm Already Loving It I'm Interested In Seeing More Of This Story Go Show Some Love And Support For The Author
I love the story, i found it in Wattpad and i admit is realy good, i hope i can read next chapters soon, i like the concept of the futuristic fantasy isekai crossover like a futuristic/sci-fi faction in a fantasy medieval world, is hard to find stories like these, i hope u continue 👍
It’s a very interesting premise and I look forward to the future developments. And if I didn’t like it I wouldn’t bother reviewing. That being said, there’s a glaring issue that really brings this novel down… there’s basically no character descriptions and this includes Christine aka the MC. In fact let me go ahead and list all the things we know about Christine: - They’re female. - They presumably have fox ears and fox tail(s), though this is never explicitly stated in the actual text. - They were called beautiful once in chapter 9 or 10. That’s the extent of Christine’s character description. Hair color, eye color, height, figure, all of these things are left to the imagination, I guess. It’s somehow even worse for the NPCs who are basically just names without descriptions and have no memorable quirks. Not that Christine has any memorable quirks either, nor has she or any of the NPCs had the opportunity to show them it they did. No time was spent assessing the internal situation or exploring the Solstice Empire before the story began focusing exclusively on external matters. That would have been the best time to write some fun NPCs.
What A Great Start It Have I'm Already Loving It I'm Interested In Seeing More Of This Story Go Show Some Love And Support For The Author
I love the story, i found it in Wattpad and i admit is realy good, i hope i can read next chapters soon, i like the concept of the futuristic fantasy isekai crossover like a futuristic/sci-fi faction in a fantasy medieval world, is hard to find stories like these, i hope u continue 👍