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Meet the third Salvatore of the Salvatore brothers. Thomas ‘Tommy’ or ‘Tom’ is back in the town of Mystic falls, to meet his brother Stefan. But is that all the reason why he’s here. Find more in this fanfic.
Ps: I own nothing but the oc. English is my second language and I’ve tried my best to keep the spelling error to the minimum, but if you find some let me know.
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Gonna wait you get a few more chapters in. Hope it doesn't get dropped. Also hoping to finally see a only vampire mc (no hybrid, tribrid, heretic) Just a good old vampire... I didn't read yet. So don't know what's going to be.
Almost read it if not for the fact that Bonnie is the love interest. Literally every single fanfic has her as the love interest. Overused
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overall this has been interesting I look forward to the continuation of this and hope to see this continue
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It's too difficult to understand what's going on when views are changing as mad. Author must use only 1st face, only 3rd face or both with a marker which gives readers an indication of the change in perspective. That's such a basic thing... and I don't see it here.
卷 1
- 1 Thomas Elenor Salvatore 9 months ago
- 2 Back for Blood 9 months ago
- 3 Dreams from beyond 9 months ago
- 4 Giuseppe’s list. 9 months ago
- 5 Brotherly Love 9 months ago
- 6 Dating in Stone Age. 9 months ago
- 7 STD 9 months ago
- 8 Friday night bites Pt.1 9 months ago
- 9 Friday Night bites pt.2 9 months ago
- 10 Pep rally for the slackers 8 months ago
- 11 Intermediate of Balls 8 months ago
- 12 Advance Ball & Liquid inebriation 8 months ago
- 13 Intro to Investigative Journalism 8 months ago
- 14 Into into Torsion 8 months ago
- 15 Announcement 8 months ago
- 16 Negotiations 8 months ago
- 17 Intro to Occult 8 months ago
- 18 Javelin throw 8 months ago
- 19 Into into Psychology 101 8 months ago
- 20 Psychology 102 8 months ago
- 21 Psychology 103 Finals 8 months ago
- 22 PhysEd 8 months ago
- 23 Important 7 months ago
- 24 Introductions pt.1 7 months ago
- 25 Introduction Pt.2 7 months ago
- 26 162 candles pt.1 7 months ago
- 27 Announcement 7 months ago
- 28 162 Candles pt.2 3 months ago
- 29 162 Candles Pt.3 2 months ago
- 30 162 Candles Pt.4 2 months ago
- 31 162 Candles Pt.5 2 months ago
- 32 The Baby 2 months ago
- 33 Bad Grades 2 months ago
- 34 Heavy Exposition 2 months ago
- 35 Announcement 2 months ago
- 36 Intro to Deception 101 1 months ago
- 37 Feild trip 1 months ago
- 38 Interogation 101 1 months ago
- 39 Interogations Finals 1 months ago
- 40 Horticulture 1 months ago
- 41 Vicki’s Joy ride 1 months ago
- 42 Quick announcement 1 months ago
- 43 Livin on a prayer 25 days ago
- 44 Fluid Rounds pt.1 24 days ago
- 45 Fluid rounds pt.2 22 days ago
- 46 Fluid Rounds pt.3 (R-18) 21 days ago
- 47 Finality of Fluid Rounds 20 days ago
- 48 Announcement 17 days ago
- 49 Blood of my blood 15 days ago
- 50 How to make a daylight ring 14 days ago
- 51 Dance Lessons 12 days ago
- 52 Dance lessons 102 11 days ago
- 53 Dance Finals 10 days ago
- 54 Tresure hunt 5 days ago
- 55 Treaure hunt pt.2 4 days ago
I'm giving this novel a 5 star review cause I'm coming from your other novel and it was great, the drafts for this one was also awesome, so good luck and keep up the good stuff author.