Reviews of Immortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat points by Smoke Painted - Webnovel

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Carl_Ricafrente

The flow of the story was quite smooth and addicting, the only problem that I notices is the confusing translation — I had no idea if his pet was ant or termites.

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Uselesschild92

I hope there's another book. Thank you for this one.

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N3xUs
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the story is super great and it's a little bit sad about the sudden ending because of your health issues. I also wish that you can recover and comeback again. PS: Waiting for you to continue the story 😊

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DimensionalDaddy

very good unfortunately ended very quickly and without a clear end.

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CJMCC26
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Anyone know why it was finished like this!

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Asgar1224

good novel with potential.But being ended at mid, it is such a huge loss. I hope that the writer ask help for completing the novel if he is I'll and so that the novel gets justice as the novel background and story has deep potential

3mth
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Elvis_Iwunze

A nice novel, but a rough ending. And you deviated from the main focus of the book, which was cultivating an ant Queen by adding starts points and also forgot about your gold finger.,

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Julie_Alegre

Great story relaxing ... [img=update][img=fp]

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WackyT
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Great read, shame it had stopped. If you like something different, go for it.

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Norman_Givens

this is reading at its best ,magnificence is the only way too describe it,cant wait to see what's next.

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Daoist1bqKpk

sometimes you just want a story without super power jumps

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Sven_Erickson

nice character growth. the writing style changes after a little bit. i preferred the original style, but ive gotten over it.

4mth
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Eric_Sauber

well written, very enjoyable to read. ,..............

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Henry_Juan

I absolutely loved this novel and am deeply saddened that it ended so soon it was just getting to a good bit and just ended so although an amazing book if you don't want to be left unsatisfied and disappointed don't read it but on the flip side if you want a short and amazing read i would definitely recommend

4mth
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_Andy_101

Great book would recommend to any one looking for something new

4mth
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Clay_Osborn

this book was a fantastic read and I would recommend it to others if they want to read a decent book that is not too long. it would have been nice if the author could have ended the book better and not on a massive cliff hanger.

4mth
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ProfManny

nicely written and very engaging. it makes you feel the scene and characters. once start reading your'e hooked until to the last chapter. well done.... Bravo

4mth
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P_Paq
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Enjoying the story 👍 keep it up author ✍️ [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4mth
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Patheror

overall good story so far. my issue is that it seems like author forgot about the system-like stats, so it kinda changed focus of story in my eyes.

4mth
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Nighty
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Translation is so bad that its barely readable, story is somewhat original due to the fact that it is about insect taming, but the rest of the story is an amalgamation of clichees.

5mth
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Tardtastic

complete trash. The ant is a termite and the termite is an ant. Machine translate at its finest.

5mth
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Deeznuts69_

overall pretty good, it's just that ant/termite and bee/hornet keep getting mixed up

5mth
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Clay_Osborn

I have been enjoying this book quite well and I love how the story seems to speed up then it slows down quickly.

6mth
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Thomas_Plocher

Would get full marks but idk if he has an ant or a termite and the fact that you go back and forth between the two is starting to get annoying otherwise a great story

6mth
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Ak_Gamer_Fourth

in chapter 249 MC to a citizen of other clan/ country which is it in war with an Evil person just because he (reported him/patriotic to country) an enemy nation. I didn't understand is every person in path of your destination is an Evil person. did you this flaw for MC intentionally or it's your view or mistake in translation and also MC panel for farming why don't he fouces more on Farming? he has huge advantage he can be immortal just by that what's to catch did everyone has it or what? also is it MC first life or not? btw like this novel a lot I'm not complaining just some confusion it has far less than any other I read thank you for your hard work 😁

6mth
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StitchedUpTomat0

when a professional youtube shorts yapper becomes a webnovel writer...all else are very good

6mth
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Ak_Gamer_Fiveth

I like this novels it's quite good to read but I don't know author didn't specify if its MC's first or second life author didn't says it's second but their some action is like that mature or something please clarify and thanks you for your hard work

7mth
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Rowenoak84

awesome novel I just wish the translation was better but still awesome

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Cravien

i wanted to rate this down to one star.. However - i am not sure i should. Termites are not ants. The introduction is willy nilly and before u comfortable with the world background they just spring random unnatural behavior on you. If you enjoy chaos go ahead.

7mth
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Karol_Tatarczyk

....................................... .

8mth
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Carl_Ricafrente

The flow of the story was quite smooth and addicting, the only problem that I notices is the confusing translation — I had no idea if his pet was ant or termites.

1mth
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Uselesschild92

I hope there's another book. Thank you for this one.

2mth
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N3xUs
LV 13 Badge

the story is super great and it's a little bit sad about the sudden ending because of your health issues. I also wish that you can recover and comeback again. PS: Waiting for you to continue the story 😊

3mth
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DimensionalDaddy

very good unfortunately ended very quickly and without a clear end.

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3mth
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CJMCC26
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Anyone know why it was finished like this!

3mth
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Asgar1224

good novel with potential.But being ended at mid, it is such a huge loss. I hope that the writer ask help for completing the novel if he is I'll and so that the novel gets justice as the novel background and story has deep potential

3mth
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Elvis_Iwunze

A nice novel, but a rough ending. And you deviated from the main focus of the book, which was cultivating an ant Queen by adding starts points and also forgot about your gold finger.,

4mth
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Julie_Alegre

Great story relaxing ... [img=update][img=fp]

4mth
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WackyT
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Great read, shame it had stopped. If you like something different, go for it.

4mth
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Norman_Givens

this is reading at its best ,magnificence is the only way too describe it,cant wait to see what's next.

4mth
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Daoist1bqKpk

sometimes you just want a story without super power jumps

4mth
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Sven_Erickson

nice character growth. the writing style changes after a little bit. i preferred the original style, but ive gotten over it.

4mth
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Eric_Sauber

well written, very enjoyable to read. ,..............

4mth
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Henry_Juan

I absolutely loved this novel and am deeply saddened that it ended so soon it was just getting to a good bit and just ended so although an amazing book if you don't want to be left unsatisfied and disappointed don't read it but on the flip side if you want a short and amazing read i would definitely recommend

4mth
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_Andy_101

Great book would recommend to any one looking for something new

4mth
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Clay_Osborn

this book was a fantastic read and I would recommend it to others if they want to read a decent book that is not too long. it would have been nice if the author could have ended the book better and not on a massive cliff hanger.

4mth
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ProfManny

nicely written and very engaging. it makes you feel the scene and characters. once start reading your'e hooked until to the last chapter. well done.... Bravo

4mth
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P_Paq
LV 15 Badge

Enjoying the story 👍 keep it up author ✍️ [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4mth
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Patheror

overall good story so far. my issue is that it seems like author forgot about the system-like stats, so it kinda changed focus of story in my eyes.

4mth
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Nighty
LV 14 Badge

Translation is so bad that its barely readable, story is somewhat original due to the fact that it is about insect taming, but the rest of the story is an amalgamation of clichees.

5mth
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Tardtastic

complete trash. The ant is a termite and the termite is an ant. Machine translate at its finest.

5mth
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Deeznuts69_

overall pretty good, it's just that ant/termite and bee/hornet keep getting mixed up

5mth
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Clay_Osborn

I have been enjoying this book quite well and I love how the story seems to speed up then it slows down quickly.

6mth
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Thomas_Plocher

Would get full marks but idk if he has an ant or a termite and the fact that you go back and forth between the two is starting to get annoying otherwise a great story

6mth
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Ak_Gamer_Fourth

in chapter 249 MC to a citizen of other clan/ country which is it in war with an Evil person just because he (reported him/patriotic to country) an enemy nation. I didn't understand is every person in path of your destination is an Evil person. did you this flaw for MC intentionally or it's your view or mistake in translation and also MC panel for farming why don't he fouces more on Farming? he has huge advantage he can be immortal just by that what's to catch did everyone has it or what? also is it MC first life or not? btw like this novel a lot I'm not complaining just some confusion it has far less than any other I read thank you for your hard work 😁

6mth
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StitchedUpTomat0

when a professional youtube shorts yapper becomes a webnovel writer...all else are very good

6mth
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Ak_Gamer_Fiveth

I like this novels it's quite good to read but I don't know author didn't specify if its MC's first or second life author didn't says it's second but their some action is like that mature or something please clarify and thanks you for your hard work

7mth
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Rowenoak84

awesome novel I just wish the translation was better but still awesome

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7mth
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Cravien

i wanted to rate this down to one star.. However - i am not sure i should. Termites are not ants. The introduction is willy nilly and before u comfortable with the world background they just spring random unnatural behavior on you. If you enjoy chaos go ahead.

7mth
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Karol_Tatarczyk

....................................... .

8mth
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