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nice story with light hearted comedy, i enjoyed it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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try using AI to fix the grammars/sentence so it will be easier to read, or use software like grammarly because the story are great
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honestly the grammar has been a major problem sticking with this novel, i like the premise and the story but at times i cant stand reading it because it feels like caveman speech. the author literally has not used "The" in nearly every chapter. if he used it the grammar would be atleast 5 times better than it is.
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nice story with light hearted comedy, i enjoyed it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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try using AI to fix the grammars/sentence so it will be easier to read, or use software like grammarly because the story are great
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honestly the grammar has been a major problem sticking with this novel, i like the premise and the story but at times i cant stand reading it because it feels like caveman speech. the author literally has not used "The" in nearly every chapter. if he used it the grammar would be atleast 5 times better than it is.