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well it's decent so far I ain't got no complaint but it's only two chapters but the chapters are at a decent length so if it was some other writers you would probably have 10 chapters already worth three hopefully author puts out more chapters that'd be nice
im not a good reviewer and just a normal reader but as a fallout fan myself this novel just a new breath for me, 2 year in this app i dont see much a good fallout fanfic, a lot of em just a self insert or a low effort because they doesnt know fallout much, but i see this novel have potential to be a good one, i must say its has many flaw but you can improve it more and make the character more likeable, im hoping im saying this for you author have more motivation not a pressure you to write and having you a burnout or writer block, enjoy exploring the story , charcater , some wierd stuff that fallout world offer and to writing this fanfic, take it slow if you new at writing.
well it's decent so far I ain't got no complaint but it's only two chapters but the chapters are at a decent length so if it was some other writers you would probably have 10 chapters already worth three hopefully author puts out more chapters that'd be nice
im not a good reviewer and just a normal reader but as a fallout fan myself this novel just a new breath for me, 2 year in this app i dont see much a good fallout fanfic, a lot of em just a self insert or a low effort because they doesnt know fallout much, but i see this novel have potential to be a good one, i must say its has many flaw but you can improve it more and make the character more likeable, im hoping im saying this for you author have more motivation not a pressure you to write and having you a burnout or writer block, enjoy exploring the story , charcater , some wierd stuff that fallout world offer and to writing this fanfic, take it slow if you new at writing.