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Wow! I found this after reading your football novel and it's really great, hopefully you'll be able to get back to this and update it. I'm loving your other novel as well
good day author san since you have stopped writing this fic and will not continue it why not give it to someone else to continue.
Overall great story, sad to see he is gonna drop tho, hopefully in the future he has a change of heart because this was one of not the best music stories I’ve ever read
how this book has fallen, from rap to conspiracy theory blood rituals. Bro not to sound too critical but wth are you doing with this book, Since you told you wanted to drop it, it is going downhill since. It is better to drop than destroy a good story
Goated FF.............................................................................
My fellow [Convict To King] fans, if you liked the former cover picture like my comment to petition for old picture to be brought back. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
A must read🤝💯💪 Personal opinion though….make arell focus more on his career and make his signed artists feature in his album and drop India broooo, like why India? Ain’t no sense. I’d recommend this anytime, anywhere.
Binged this whole Story in two days, it was great. Congratulations Author, What you have here is something special man.
Im giving a straight 5 star to help author out since i’ve seen quite many clearly racist 1-star reviews and i feel like thats unfair so here you go
Didn’t know monkeys could read, much less write. Oh wait this is chat gpt. Crazy how advanced ai can get to understand monkey scribblings. Of course monkeys flock to this story hope the ai suggests that the mf gets arrested and put in jail. Most realistic outcome for these criminals.
Amazing job. I love this, please don’t stop writing. Finish it all the way for me. I really enjoy reading this masterpiece, the development of the story is phenomenal. Also as well I think you should let him go to the tattoo shop for the story.🔥🙏💯
Hella good bro 🪶 maybe focus a bit more on the music side if it burns u out since I think there’s a lot of potential with the songs he can do
Love the book. Always happy to see new chapters. This is one of those rare books I wish I didn’t discover so early so there would already be a couple hundred chapters available. Do you have a Patreon ? If not I’d suggest getting one id support you.
Overall this is 5 star. I’m not understanding how this is not higher up in the charts at least at top 5 novel.
nice novel boss, this the first novel i read in the hiphop genre and i like it. So, to the people out there readin this recommend me some novel like this one, I'd really appreciate it 🫶
The story build up to the character development is just wild… waiting for more chapters😌😌
Thoughts it's an interesting idea. The grammar is great. The presentation of the status in most of the chapters is awesome. Problems, first Idk If ur waiting to make the connection or not but the system choice for a rapper for the Mc whn the only connection to rap for him is jail time and where he lived. There seem to be no history there of a young someone who's trying but don't hv a break or something thts rooted in rap hence why the system choose him and also a rap system. Also the Mc seem to not be interested in finding this out also and another thing which is forgotten or maybe it turn into the butler, the system is sentient like n the Mc is just chill with that WHY also that aspect of the system is not explore after tht. Another thing is since the system cn create a human per say and money and also a house with equipments, it begs the question is this magic or mechanical because again this doesn't seem to bother the Mc 1 bit like how's this happening. Also I'm curious why hv the Mc use a label whn theres SoundCloud or Spotify to grow ...Maybe sing in the streets or at those pop up bars with a little crowd to build a following.
this is great I would rate this as a five stars but I'm not sure if you would continue this I don't wanna be disappointed
So far man the story is great, I like the realism that you keep in especially with the gangs, hope you keep uploading and do more with the other characters.
Hi there, I don't really see fanfics or light novels on hip hop, so I want this to continue. PLS
Wow! I found this after reading your football novel and it's really great, hopefully you'll be able to get back to this and update it. I'm loving your other novel as well
good day author san since you have stopped writing this fic and will not continue it why not give it to someone else to continue.
Overall great story, sad to see he is gonna drop tho, hopefully in the future he has a change of heart because this was one of not the best music stories I’ve ever read
how this book has fallen, from rap to conspiracy theory blood rituals. Bro not to sound too critical but wth are you doing with this book, Since you told you wanted to drop it, it is going downhill since. It is better to drop than destroy a good story
Goated FF.............................................................................
My fellow [Convict To King] fans, if you liked the former cover picture like my comment to petition for old picture to be brought back. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
A must read🤝💯💪 Personal opinion though….make arell focus more on his career and make his signed artists feature in his album and drop India broooo, like why India? Ain’t no sense. I’d recommend this anytime, anywhere.
Binged this whole Story in two days, it was great. Congratulations Author, What you have here is something special man.
Im giving a straight 5 star to help author out since i’ve seen quite many clearly racist 1-star reviews and i feel like thats unfair so here you go
Didn’t know monkeys could read, much less write. Oh wait this is chat gpt. Crazy how advanced ai can get to understand monkey scribblings. Of course monkeys flock to this story hope the ai suggests that the mf gets arrested and put in jail. Most realistic outcome for these criminals.
Amazing job. I love this, please don’t stop writing. Finish it all the way for me. I really enjoy reading this masterpiece, the development of the story is phenomenal. Also as well I think you should let him go to the tattoo shop for the story.🔥🙏💯
Hella good bro 🪶 maybe focus a bit more on the music side if it burns u out since I think there’s a lot of potential with the songs he can do
Love the book. Always happy to see new chapters. This is one of those rare books I wish I didn’t discover so early so there would already be a couple hundred chapters available. Do you have a Patreon ? If not I’d suggest getting one id support you.
Overall this is 5 star. I’m not understanding how this is not higher up in the charts at least at top 5 novel.
nice novel boss, this the first novel i read in the hiphop genre and i like it. So, to the people out there readin this recommend me some novel like this one, I'd really appreciate it 🫶
The story build up to the character development is just wild… waiting for more chapters😌😌
Thoughts it's an interesting idea. The grammar is great. The presentation of the status in most of the chapters is awesome. Problems, first Idk If ur waiting to make the connection or not but the system choice for a rapper for the Mc whn the only connection to rap for him is jail time and where he lived. There seem to be no history there of a young someone who's trying but don't hv a break or something thts rooted in rap hence why the system choose him and also a rap system. Also the Mc seem to not be interested in finding this out also and another thing which is forgotten or maybe it turn into the butler, the system is sentient like n the Mc is just chill with that WHY also that aspect of the system is not explore after tht. Another thing is since the system cn create a human per say and money and also a house with equipments, it begs the question is this magic or mechanical because again this doesn't seem to bother the Mc 1 bit like how's this happening. Also I'm curious why hv the Mc use a label whn theres SoundCloud or Spotify to grow ...Maybe sing in the streets or at those pop up bars with a little crowd to build a following.
this is great I would rate this as a five stars but I'm not sure if you would continue this I don't wanna be disappointed
So far man the story is great, I like the realism that you keep in especially with the gangs, hope you keep uploading and do more with the other characters.
Hi there, I don't really see fanfics or light novels on hip hop, so I want this to continue. PLS