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レビューを書くComment les notes peuvent être aussi differente, celui qui a volé l'histoire a une note de 4.47 et le vrai auteur (qui traduit mieux) a une note de 3.37 c'est ridicule !!!
This S**t is dope guys the moment you think, oh MC got this cool thing by which he is going to get so overpowered the story becomes meaningless, then *Wham* the MC grows strong only to a reasonable limit there are hardly any plothole MY GODDD this fic is amazing😍🤩👍👍👍👍😍🤩
Baldur instead of getting stronger becomes weaker as centuries pass. He really regressing just to fit into 'heroes' category. A shame.
everything was pretty good until there was a thousand year timeskip and the mc somehow managed to have no improvement in his strength while knowing that this is the marvel universe and he knew the plot
Amazing translation but the original author is very dumb and not at all consistent in his portrayal of Baldur’s strength.
It's not really well written, the author heavily uses AI but because he can't speak English well, the text isn't checked leading to errors. The MC is being crippled for the sake of plot. The MC is faster than the fastest Asgardian soldier, yet refuses to dodge any attacks leading to his bones somehow getting broken by a single punch from an unnamed Frost Giant, like this shouldn't even be happening. He wields a spear yet refuses to thrust, rather he swings it around like a sword. The MC has enough heat to melt a kingdom yet that isn't enough to melt some snow that is covering a village? Instead he has to draw on the Sun for extra heat? It was literally stated he could melt Uru and reduce it to Ash with ease. Except he was also trapped in Uru shackled just before that... The other characters are also being crippled too. An Asgardian General was oneshot because a Frost Giant, probably Laufey I stopped reading at this point, conjured an ice spear as the General charged at him... Amora, by Loki's word was a very poweful sorceress, was somehow oneshot too, want to know how? She was encased in ice. It wasn't instant, the guy had a whole monologue yet she just didn't cast a single spell because of the "pain". Amora is also a Yandere, which if its your thing, ok, but to me it got annoying real fast.
ネタバレを明かすit's a nerf fest. the amount of times i wanted to punch my screen is too much for comfort soooo i dropped it at the x-men arc
So far it’s been a great story, I have only noticed one part where the translation wasn’t too good (it wasn’t misspellings, but a bit ago a paragraph repeated itself) other than that the translation has been good. I like the development of the story a lot, it’s a mix between comics and live action, but it seems to lean more so towards live action, with some differences mixed in. It was nice to see a story with no harem, since (for me) that can ruin a story quite easily, and his relationship with Amora is built up decently well.
ネタバレを明かすLook i know you're not the author but just a translator who is doing his best to make this readable, I've read the og and iIknow you've done a decent job about it. But my God do I have something to say You should have been just an enhanced human with long lifespan, that way it would have made more sense for the rubbish I am seeing. So far the mc has no sense of agency he was complaining about Thanos like four chapters ago now after almost 1500 years he has not made any significant progress to show that type of agency, now from what I've read from the og i know it will not get any better and that's sad to me
Apocalypse power level is waay to much. The way u put he hes stronger then the phoenix a cosmic power. If your going by comic book power levels this MFer is no where near odins power. As odin force is a semi cosmic force. So where are u getting ur power levels from its not comics and it not MCU?
The translation is good and the idea is good. But the MC is a lazy, stupid, thoughtless and useless person. He has all these awesome inherent powers and despite being a reincarnated person who knows the dangers of the world, he doesn't train, doesn't try to develop his abilities and basically just constantly takes L's and then he's like "No wonder I lost, it was the first time I've used this ability despite having it for 350 years". Like c'mon, even someone who is super dense would understand the necessity of being strong in the world he's in and he just loafs around playing human mortal. It's unfortunate. But the translation is pretty decent so nice job on that.
ネタバレを明かすNão vi essa fic, por causa da imagem desse cara com barba, ele mancha minha imaginação, deuses e deusas da luz, são lindos, pode parecer besteira mais tá gravado na minha mente toda ser quanto mais perto da luz mais perfeito ele fica, mais o cara é uma divindade e se parece com isso, esse cara não é irmão de thor, acho que ele é adotado kkkk
Please stop defaming the work i put into the translations, if you do not like it you can come to my dm and offer any service you can provide. If you want any evidence i do them come to my dm and i will provide. I have said it before that english is not my first language and i use multiple tools to help with this.
The mc is supposed to be a god but gets beaten by frost giant, the plot is so forced and unnatural
I'm not an English exam examiner. i don't really care about having perfect grammar and stuff. all i care about is for it to be readable and doesn't break the immersion. I'm a man that focuses more on the story in itself and although this is a translation, i quite enjoy it. so give it a try.
Median.🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Short but has a lot of potential. Don't mess it up. Keep the chapters coming. We need more fanfics like this. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
1/5/4/3/3 A.I writing is used too much is this fic other then that well the concept is good and the characters are fine
Hello everyone, I'm Lonely Translator an I'll like to mention that the book is not my own creation. While I would have appreciated the opportunity to credit the author, I'm uncertain if they are present on this platform. I acknowledge that my translation may not be flawless, but I sincerely hope that you all find enjoyment in it.
TLDR: MC can create an artificial sun but can get his ass beat by a Monkey, not no monkey sage or anything, the Jabari tribe god, (Mountain dudes from Wakanda) Huge power inconsistencies purely for plot. Was interesting at the beginning but now it’s slop This story started out decently good and had me into it for a little while, then our MC never progresses again, there are like 20 chapters of no progression, mind you MC destroys half a planet in like the 3rd chapter, then the author backtracks it forgets I guess because he weakens the MC horribly to the point he is getting beaten by normal humans and people way weaker than him. He can’t generate enough power but we regularly see him creating actual suns and stuff like that. Furthermore author introduces some dumb cosmic entity BS that MC borrows his powers but gets corrupted by them or something. Even though he is again strong asf. Writing Quality: Translation Slop, it’s generally good but there are at times obvious errors in writing, obviously this will happen, though the translator doesn’t even fix big mistakes in the story. Updating: It’s an MTL
Comment les notes peuvent être aussi differente, celui qui a volé l'histoire a une note de 4.47 et le vrai auteur (qui traduit mieux) a une note de 3.37 c'est ridicule !!!
This S**t is dope guys the moment you think, oh MC got this cool thing by which he is going to get so overpowered the story becomes meaningless, then *Wham* the MC grows strong only to a reasonable limit there are hardly any plothole MY GODDD this fic is amazing😍🤩👍👍👍👍😍🤩
Baldur instead of getting stronger becomes weaker as centuries pass. He really regressing just to fit into 'heroes' category. A shame.
everything was pretty good until there was a thousand year timeskip and the mc somehow managed to have no improvement in his strength while knowing that this is the marvel universe and he knew the plot
Amazing translation but the original author is very dumb and not at all consistent in his portrayal of Baldur’s strength.
It's not really well written, the author heavily uses AI but because he can't speak English well, the text isn't checked leading to errors. The MC is being crippled for the sake of plot. The MC is faster than the fastest Asgardian soldier, yet refuses to dodge any attacks leading to his bones somehow getting broken by a single punch from an unnamed Frost Giant, like this shouldn't even be happening. He wields a spear yet refuses to thrust, rather he swings it around like a sword. The MC has enough heat to melt a kingdom yet that isn't enough to melt some snow that is covering a village? Instead he has to draw on the Sun for extra heat? It was literally stated he could melt Uru and reduce it to Ash with ease. Except he was also trapped in Uru shackled just before that... The other characters are also being crippled too. An Asgardian General was oneshot because a Frost Giant, probably Laufey I stopped reading at this point, conjured an ice spear as the General charged at him... Amora, by Loki's word was a very poweful sorceress, was somehow oneshot too, want to know how? She was encased in ice. It wasn't instant, the guy had a whole monologue yet she just didn't cast a single spell because of the "pain". Amora is also a Yandere, which if its your thing, ok, but to me it got annoying real fast.
ネタバレを明かすit's a nerf fest. the amount of times i wanted to punch my screen is too much for comfort soooo i dropped it at the x-men arc
So far it’s been a great story, I have only noticed one part where the translation wasn’t too good (it wasn’t misspellings, but a bit ago a paragraph repeated itself) other than that the translation has been good. I like the development of the story a lot, it’s a mix between comics and live action, but it seems to lean more so towards live action, with some differences mixed in. It was nice to see a story with no harem, since (for me) that can ruin a story quite easily, and his relationship with Amora is built up decently well.
ネタバレを明かすLook i know you're not the author but just a translator who is doing his best to make this readable, I've read the og and iIknow you've done a decent job about it. But my God do I have something to say You should have been just an enhanced human with long lifespan, that way it would have made more sense for the rubbish I am seeing. So far the mc has no sense of agency he was complaining about Thanos like four chapters ago now after almost 1500 years he has not made any significant progress to show that type of agency, now from what I've read from the og i know it will not get any better and that's sad to me
Apocalypse power level is waay to much. The way u put he hes stronger then the phoenix a cosmic power. If your going by comic book power levels this MFer is no where near odins power. As odin force is a semi cosmic force. So where are u getting ur power levels from its not comics and it not MCU?
The translation is good and the idea is good. But the MC is a lazy, stupid, thoughtless and useless person. He has all these awesome inherent powers and despite being a reincarnated person who knows the dangers of the world, he doesn't train, doesn't try to develop his abilities and basically just constantly takes L's and then he's like "No wonder I lost, it was the first time I've used this ability despite having it for 350 years". Like c'mon, even someone who is super dense would understand the necessity of being strong in the world he's in and he just loafs around playing human mortal. It's unfortunate. But the translation is pretty decent so nice job on that.
ネタバレを明かすNão vi essa fic, por causa da imagem desse cara com barba, ele mancha minha imaginação, deuses e deusas da luz, são lindos, pode parecer besteira mais tá gravado na minha mente toda ser quanto mais perto da luz mais perfeito ele fica, mais o cara é uma divindade e se parece com isso, esse cara não é irmão de thor, acho que ele é adotado kkkk
Please stop defaming the work i put into the translations, if you do not like it you can come to my dm and offer any service you can provide. If you want any evidence i do them come to my dm and i will provide. I have said it before that english is not my first language and i use multiple tools to help with this.
The mc is supposed to be a god but gets beaten by frost giant, the plot is so forced and unnatural
I'm not an English exam examiner. i don't really care about having perfect grammar and stuff. all i care about is for it to be readable and doesn't break the immersion. I'm a man that focuses more on the story in itself and although this is a translation, i quite enjoy it. so give it a try.
Median.🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Short but has a lot of potential. Don't mess it up. Keep the chapters coming. We need more fanfics like this. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
1/5/4/3/3 A.I writing is used too much is this fic other then that well the concept is good and the characters are fine
Hello everyone, I'm Lonely Translator an I'll like to mention that the book is not my own creation. While I would have appreciated the opportunity to credit the author, I'm uncertain if they are present on this platform. I acknowledge that my translation may not be flawless, but I sincerely hope that you all find enjoyment in it.
TLDR: MC can create an artificial sun but can get his ass beat by a Monkey, not no monkey sage or anything, the Jabari tribe god, (Mountain dudes from Wakanda) Huge power inconsistencies purely for plot. Was interesting at the beginning but now it’s slop This story started out decently good and had me into it for a little while, then our MC never progresses again, there are like 20 chapters of no progression, mind you MC destroys half a planet in like the 3rd chapter, then the author backtracks it forgets I guess because he weakens the MC horribly to the point he is getting beaten by normal humans and people way weaker than him. He can’t generate enough power but we regularly see him creating actual suns and stuff like that. Furthermore author introduces some dumb cosmic entity BS that MC borrows his powers but gets corrupted by them or something. Even though he is again strong asf. Writing Quality: Translation Slop, it’s generally good but there are at times obvious errors in writing, obviously this will happen, though the translator doesn’t even fix big mistakes in the story. Updating: It’s an MTL