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Rebirth In the 1970s

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作者: GodOfGreedAs

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After looking at suggestions of viewers it's acomplete rewrite better story and plot without any system.


"I find myself at a crossroads in my writing journey. The pacing in the current storyline feels rushed, leaving little room for a proper introduction of the main character. Additionally, the timeline is disarrayed, prompting me to consider scrapping the existing concept and starting afresh in the 1970s.

The new narrative would involve substantial plot development, transcending the current shitty Hollywood and the world as whole and exploring deeper themes. Making much better wish fulfillment story.


Introduction of older actresses (females) without the system in place, I envision a tale featuring fundamental superpowers like longevity and super genius.


***Synopsis...



"Have you ever wondered what a person will do when he finds himself on alternate earth?"

In a realm teetering on the edge of chaos, our protagonist is bestowed with an extraordinary opportunity. Armed with the intellect and experiences of Norman Osborn from Earth-616, they embark on an ambitious journey to build not just an empire but a utopia. As the architect of his destiny, He navigates the intricate web of power, ambition, and innovation. However, with great potential comes great responsibility, and the choices made in the pursuit of this grand vision will shape not only his destiny but the fate of the world.

Can he transcend the shadows of his past, break the shackles of ordinary existence, and truly forge a legacy that stands the test of time? Join our visionary protagonist as he navigates the challenges of building an empire and strives to create a better world against the backdrop of intrigue, ambition, and the relentless march of time people of dark kind.


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Disclaimer: Harem, Pretty Big Harem, and world-hopping with a twist, no ntr, yes stealing girls, very lustful and pretty aggressive MC. Not really his fault though. He's not dumb either.

I am doing this for fun, and it's fantasy just all books on this platform but it's going to be filled with realism.

Love all the reader's thanks for your support


And if you are very good at English I need an editor but no payment because even I don't earn A single penny from this thanks love you all

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Kabuk5
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Grammatically, this story is a mess, in the middle of the same paragraph there's a change between subjects, when conversations are happening, you have no idea who's speaking (in chapter 4 his mom told him that in the 2000s people would be less religious, or at least it looked like that because there was no separation between the conversation and his thoughts), the character also behaves so far as if wisdom is his dump stat. If you research a world's culture, you MUST research its religion, specially if you want to write about sensitive subjects! Not enough time for character development or world background, so giving it three stars at the moment and will come back in a few months and address this review.

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crazyspecter

tbh the problem is this story is a copy paste of Rebirth in 1973s by xandarx with some random changes who make the story even more awful grammar wise then the original. neverthless I would increase my vote if the author can promise he will keep updating the story past the original dropping point (around chapter 62 or something)

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WEEEEBS

I love it Hope to see more updates in the future

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

So, more chapters and the novel is bored , because MC is very perfect: - Super smart. - Beautiful. - Millionaire. - The effort, wait or difficulty to pay for something is unknown to the protagonist. Besides, what's the point of having millions of dollars, health, youth and intelligence if you don't enjoy it? By the way, this novel is #non-harem and I understand that it is the author's decision; However, it is foolish to tie yourself down for life to the first girlfriend you have, who by the way is a college student with experience with other men. 🙄

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Cesar117

La gramática está bien.Pero las fechas, empresas y linea del tiempo es terrible. Hasta la persona más tonta sabe que empresas como Amazon y Google no existían en 1970. De hecho muchos de sus creadores ni siquiera habían nacido.

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