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dont know about the 'minority' of people but im sure this is an awesome and one of the best work, heck im only at this much chapters in yet i already love it (i hate the word love but im confortable with using it here); characters are simply designed very well (nothing irritating, all of it is pleasant really, for me at least, and im part of the majority with my preferences so......."by the way im a little picky so above average standard i guess"), updating stability is understandable with such high quality, world background is already vast and was quite nicely done here but it can go further later in the story so awesome for that (dude gave hints), writing quality sometimes makes mistakes but bro, unless your nit picking please just read the obvious context clues in the story and freaking paragraphs, not like any important informarion is being make obscured so you guys are just wasting time, lastly for story development, haha if you have problems enjoying this work then sorry to break it to you bro but "your" sadly the problem here, even though the story isnt focused on comedy it still manages to make us laugh, so good luck being annoying if you still have complaints. alright thats all i can say properly, i know i suck at making reviews so i try to make it not bad but meh, you guys gotta make do with what you got ya know, hope this helped you somehow and thats it. the stars and rating arent specific and accurate enough but if this were from 1-10 stars then i would rate it; 5 for writing quality (good enough as it conveys what needs to be.), 10 for story development (this is quite literally just the beginning and although its really awesome now, it can still go down hill, though with such potential in this story i see a brighter future more than a bleak one which is to say, its more good than bad considering all things "sorry i know its abit too biased but i just cant go lower than full 10, not even 9.5"), 8 stars for character design (at the moment its still 8 but believe me when i say its only just begun for these guys, we havent even gone through character development yet so not very attach for now is what im at, but im sure this is easily gonna change so i increased it by half a star for a build up or something), 5 for updating stability (this is very understandable though as, like i said before, you cant expect such high quality chapters as if this is your regular webnovel trash like akikans works "no offense, i followed his works for years since his 'jurassic hero in boku no hero academia' work and he was literally one of my first 3 fanfics and back then i didnt know what fanfics were so i thought it was a normal novel, thats how new i was to reading novels and fanfics, reason why i turned from a fan to thinking his work is trash is because although they have potential this guy never takes any word from his readers and does the same thing over and over without changing much of anything, i re-read works i like at least once so im sure, works like his even with interesting concepts dont go far like most chinese works because of the author themselves ruining it, due to this it will never be more than mid high/low even if you force and exaggerate its positive aspects") now back to what i was saying, 5 to world background basically cause of what i said earlier of a multiversal fanfic, imagine adding in the story later on touhou verse, fate verse, hoyo verse, and etc, that would be ABSOLUTELY EPIC, so much so that i might even force myself to share this with others "usually leading to me trying to convince them so i try to avoid that route for the sake of my laziness". well thats really it seriously, im done talking so much, sorry for the long read and bye.
Amazing FF, fun and easy read, if your not into war hammer you will still like this. Only criticism is the 1 chapter a week upload lol 😆 we want more now! lol
I'm liking the novel very much, but you could also add the tag #HAREM because there's people like me that hates harem, so they can choose to not read it at the start. Though I won't stop anymore, it's a really good novel. I just don't like parts of sex and all, never liked it in any novel of action and all, it's more a me issue.
This shit is fucking amazing 10/10 the only thing I think that could be better is a consistent update schedule but overall it’s pretty damn good
If you like kingdom building with a hard handed mc then this is for you read it.
As for me, the guy simply lost his shores and reality after receiving a huge amount of power. If at the beginning it was interesting, then the last chapters only cause disgust for the path taken by the hero (more likely the villai-dictator).
id love to get into this fanfic but I know very little about well what ever game it's based on so I'll just give you 4 stars based off recommendations
hey author I really like this fic and I had an idea maybe you could put a grey knight in marvel or dc
I give stones, You give more. It is heresy to not have at least 100 chapters with an ff this good. But I understand because they are long and that makes it better. For Terra, the Imperium, the Emperor, and the Fallen.
this fic made for the fans of Warhammer 40k and as a fan....I love it FOR THE EMPEROR
It’s a fanfic that blends elements from anime, comics, and the Warhammer 40K universe. The story centers around Marcus, who dies unexpectedly and is reincarnated in the DC Universe after receiving three wishes from a goddess. His choices allow him to become incredibly powerful in his new life, with influences from the Adeptus Custodes—a faction from Warhammer 40K known for their elite warriors. The novel explores Marcus's journey and how he navigates his new reality with unlimited potential.
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A_Real_Werewolf234 Great Fanfic Keep up the great work You can do this Dc fanfic idea directly after The Adeptus Custodes(DC) DC:Mangekyo I was born into an ordinary family, lost my parents early, and lived a life of solitude in a dirty apartment. And then, I died when a plane crash landed in my bedroom. Here I am in DC with the eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. I decided I will be a villain and it will be fun. Harem Amanda Waller Harley Quinn Tala Catwoman Talia Al Ghul Killer Frost Poison Ivy Tanya Fox Christina Bell Circe Iolande Aga’po Ghia’ta Veronica Cale Dawn Golden Tsarita Bleez Lyssa Drak Zazzala Emerald Empress Lois Lane aka Superwoman (Earth 3) Blackfire Soranik Natu Mongal Maxima Grail
Hmmm... Why must Custodes? Custodes and Silence is especially Must Loyal To Emperor in their DNA. it hard to removed. i prefer MC has Primach than Custodes. and MC has Psyker ability? from where this ability come? You must know, Psyker can do magically thing in Warhammer because Physical Reality and Warp is can't separate each other, thats why Psyker can borrow Power of Warp to Physical Reality. And because Physical Reality and Warp can't separate, they influence each other, and make Chaos/Gods born. Now the Power Scaling, who stronger being in Your DC? The Presence? The Goddess? or Warp Being (Chaos)? There too many plothole. Because MC can do Psyker Ability, i doubt Warp Exist in DC. i also doubt Chaos already exist in Warp. in Small Scale (Earth) your fanfic has no plot hole, because its just show-off MC power, and people just think MC just Metahuman. but in Big Scale (Universe, Multiverse) your story have too many Flaw and Plot Hole. and your Character even don't make DC Cosmic Being react, its more weird.
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A GREAT READ. THE NOVEL IS VERY WELL WRITTEN, THE STORY IS CAPTIVING AND ADDICTIVE. IF YOU DON'T KNOW WARHAMMER LIKE ME OR IF YOU DO, IT DOESN'T MAKE A DIFFERENCE, IT'S WELL EXPLAINED. IT HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL
It's probably one of the best (if not the best) DC fanfic ever. The writing is superb, MC is Smart & had a good base to gow as the strongest in the DC Verse, the storyline is thought out as well. I can't ask for anything else. This is just Sooo Good!!
Good writing and a good plot, but just like many authors out there, this one also decided to write multiple books at the same time, as a result, irregular updates, and bro got a big attitude problem. Just wrote a simple comment about how I hate authors who just outright abandon their books, and man, did I hurt his ego. Anyway, I'm pretty sure this review is also going to be deleted just like all those negative reviews this guy deleted. Oh, well, time to find a new one.
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It was going good but then the batman slender came out of nowhere and i just can’t stand it when fics do that
i wasn't really a Warhammer fan but this is rather well done was a little confused for a bit tho im not really Warhammer/DC fan so had to google a few things/characters
The protagonist is the worst kind of failure, the one who thinks he's superior to 80% of people just because he read "the art of war" and goes to the gym lol
we are in the trial universe but the author essentially of 40k on this first and second chapter, it doesn't make you want to read at all because if you don't know 40k you can't like it, you understand Nothing. I like the hours so it seems nice but it's because he knows this whole exoskeleton armor machine thing...
dont know about the 'minority' of people but im sure this is an awesome and one of the best work, heck im only at this much chapters in yet i already love it (i hate the word love but im confortable with using it here); characters are simply designed very well (nothing irritating, all of it is pleasant really, for me at least, and im part of the majority with my preferences so......."by the way im a little picky so above average standard i guess"), updating stability is understandable with such high quality, world background is already vast and was quite nicely done here but it can go further later in the story so awesome for that (dude gave hints), writing quality sometimes makes mistakes but bro, unless your nit picking please just read the obvious context clues in the story and freaking paragraphs, not like any important informarion is being make obscured so you guys are just wasting time, lastly for story development, haha if you have problems enjoying this work then sorry to break it to you bro but "your" sadly the problem here, even though the story isnt focused on comedy it still manages to make us laugh, so good luck being annoying if you still have complaints. alright thats all i can say properly, i know i suck at making reviews so i try to make it not bad but meh, you guys gotta make do with what you got ya know, hope this helped you somehow and thats it. the stars and rating arent specific and accurate enough but if this were from 1-10 stars then i would rate it; 5 for writing quality (good enough as it conveys what needs to be.), 10 for story development (this is quite literally just the beginning and although its really awesome now, it can still go down hill, though with such potential in this story i see a brighter future more than a bleak one which is to say, its more good than bad considering all things "sorry i know its abit too biased but i just cant go lower than full 10, not even 9.5"), 8 stars for character design (at the moment its still 8 but believe me when i say its only just begun for these guys, we havent even gone through character development yet so not very attach for now is what im at, but im sure this is easily gonna change so i increased it by half a star for a build up or something), 5 for updating stability (this is very understandable though as, like i said before, you cant expect such high quality chapters as if this is your regular webnovel trash like akikans works "no offense, i followed his works for years since his 'jurassic hero in boku no hero academia' work and he was literally one of my first 3 fanfics and back then i didnt know what fanfics were so i thought it was a normal novel, thats how new i was to reading novels and fanfics, reason why i turned from a fan to thinking his work is trash is because although they have potential this guy never takes any word from his readers and does the same thing over and over without changing much of anything, i re-read works i like at least once so im sure, works like his even with interesting concepts dont go far like most chinese works because of the author themselves ruining it, due to this it will never be more than mid high/low even if you force and exaggerate its positive aspects") now back to what i was saying, 5 to world background basically cause of what i said earlier of a multiversal fanfic, imagine adding in the story later on touhou verse, fate verse, hoyo verse, and etc, that would be ABSOLUTELY EPIC, so much so that i might even force myself to share this with others "usually leading to me trying to convince them so i try to avoid that route for the sake of my laziness". well thats really it seriously, im done talking so much, sorry for the long read and bye.
Amazing FF, fun and easy read, if your not into war hammer you will still like this. Only criticism is the 1 chapter a week upload lol 😆 we want more now! lol
I'm liking the novel very much, but you could also add the tag #HAREM because there's people like me that hates harem, so they can choose to not read it at the start. Though I won't stop anymore, it's a really good novel. I just don't like parts of sex and all, never liked it in any novel of action and all, it's more a me issue.
This shit is fucking amazing 10/10 the only thing I think that could be better is a consistent update schedule but overall it’s pretty damn good
If you like kingdom building with a hard handed mc then this is for you read it.
As for me, the guy simply lost his shores and reality after receiving a huge amount of power. If at the beginning it was interesting, then the last chapters only cause disgust for the path taken by the hero (more likely the villai-dictator).
id love to get into this fanfic but I know very little about well what ever game it's based on so I'll just give you 4 stars based off recommendations
hey author I really like this fic and I had an idea maybe you could put a grey knight in marvel or dc
I give stones, You give more. It is heresy to not have at least 100 chapters with an ff this good. But I understand because they are long and that makes it better. For Terra, the Imperium, the Emperor, and the Fallen.
this fic made for the fans of Warhammer 40k and as a fan....I love it FOR THE EMPEROR
It’s a fanfic that blends elements from anime, comics, and the Warhammer 40K universe. The story centers around Marcus, who dies unexpectedly and is reincarnated in the DC Universe after receiving three wishes from a goddess. His choices allow him to become incredibly powerful in his new life, with influences from the Adeptus Custodes—a faction from Warhammer 40K known for their elite warriors. The novel explores Marcus's journey and how he navigates his new reality with unlimited potential.
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A_Real_Werewolf234 Great Fanfic Keep up the great work You can do this Dc fanfic idea directly after The Adeptus Custodes(DC) DC:Mangekyo I was born into an ordinary family, lost my parents early, and lived a life of solitude in a dirty apartment. And then, I died when a plane crash landed in my bedroom. Here I am in DC with the eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. I decided I will be a villain and it will be fun. Harem Amanda Waller Harley Quinn Tala Catwoman Talia Al Ghul Killer Frost Poison Ivy Tanya Fox Christina Bell Circe Iolande Aga’po Ghia’ta Veronica Cale Dawn Golden Tsarita Bleez Lyssa Drak Zazzala Emerald Empress Lois Lane aka Superwoman (Earth 3) Blackfire Soranik Natu Mongal Maxima Grail
Hmmm... Why must Custodes? Custodes and Silence is especially Must Loyal To Emperor in their DNA. it hard to removed. i prefer MC has Primach than Custodes. and MC has Psyker ability? from where this ability come? You must know, Psyker can do magically thing in Warhammer because Physical Reality and Warp is can't separate each other, thats why Psyker can borrow Power of Warp to Physical Reality. And because Physical Reality and Warp can't separate, they influence each other, and make Chaos/Gods born. Now the Power Scaling, who stronger being in Your DC? The Presence? The Goddess? or Warp Being (Chaos)? There too many plothole. Because MC can do Psyker Ability, i doubt Warp Exist in DC. i also doubt Chaos already exist in Warp. in Small Scale (Earth) your fanfic has no plot hole, because its just show-off MC power, and people just think MC just Metahuman. but in Big Scale (Universe, Multiverse) your story have too many Flaw and Plot Hole. and your Character even don't make DC Cosmic Being react, its more weird.
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A GREAT READ. THE NOVEL IS VERY WELL WRITTEN, THE STORY IS CAPTIVING AND ADDICTIVE. IF YOU DON'T KNOW WARHAMMER LIKE ME OR IF YOU DO, IT DOESN'T MAKE A DIFFERENCE, IT'S WELL EXPLAINED. IT HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL
It's probably one of the best (if not the best) DC fanfic ever. The writing is superb, MC is Smart & had a good base to gow as the strongest in the DC Verse, the storyline is thought out as well. I can't ask for anything else. This is just Sooo Good!!
Good writing and a good plot, but just like many authors out there, this one also decided to write multiple books at the same time, as a result, irregular updates, and bro got a big attitude problem. Just wrote a simple comment about how I hate authors who just outright abandon their books, and man, did I hurt his ego. Anyway, I'm pretty sure this review is also going to be deleted just like all those negative reviews this guy deleted. Oh, well, time to find a new one.
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It was going good but then the batman slender came out of nowhere and i just can’t stand it when fics do that
i wasn't really a Warhammer fan but this is rather well done was a little confused for a bit tho im not really Warhammer/DC fan so had to google a few things/characters
The protagonist is the worst kind of failure, the one who thinks he's superior to 80% of people just because he read "the art of war" and goes to the gym lol
we are in the trial universe but the author essentially of 40k on this first and second chapter, it doesn't make you want to read at all because if you don't know 40k you can't like it, you understand Nothing. I like the hours so it seems nice but it's because he knows this whole exoskeleton armor machine thing...