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So, what to expect in this book? A; An Mc who is able to move his soul between two bodies. One is the Author who lives in modern china and the other is a powerful body in a cultivation world. The Mc is tied to a beautiful villainess for reasons unknown and their interaction will surely develop into something worthwhile. I am going to drill deep into the cultivation world which the plot revolves around while also taking you through his brief experiences in the modern world. You'll get to enjoy the fresh emotions of a mundane man who gets to wield powers seen in movies. Finally, feel free to visit my newly opened discord server and share your opinions. NOTE; This story's major focus is on the cultivation world. Also, please review and support!
A really underrated novel I love the concept, I love the characters, I love the mystery, I love the story, I love this novel I suggest to atleast read the free chapters, there won't be any regret
Damn good novel. I usually hate the concept of authors and them going back and forth between two worlds. It usually just feels like a self insert and the author hoping it happens. In this novel, Author actually made a very unique and entertaining read. Not thanks to the concept, but actually thanks to the writing skills and plot being played in the story rather than modern world. - MC's personality is just so fitting. - Silly girl is a violent cutie. - The characters are fun. - The storyline and progression are top notch. - I especially love how fast paced the story is. While there is plot armor, it's understandable and I have no problem with it, since it's not out of hand. The mystery is a nice touch. Honestly, If the story was just about him reincarnating into the novel and that's it, the story would still rate very high. However, Author included the modern world and a higher power affecting him, so depending on how Author takes the story and explains all that later, it could either turn out great or trash. I'd rather not read about how the 'co author' is a god that loved his story, or that MC had a crazy fan, or something halfhearted. Rather than a gimmick, I'd rather have a proper mystery. That said, the part where MC is inside the story is the interesting part. I loved every bit of it. I hope author makes the modern world part interesting too. For now, I'll just wait for a thousand chapters then binge read it.
Hello just wanted to let you know that I’m using my fast pass to gather chapters so I can read. Fun story, good writing and the characters are cool! I wish you the best day and thank you for writing this story ❤️❤️❤️
I read all the free chapters, and I was disappointed, not because the story was bad, but because of the opportunity you missed, man. When I read the title of the novel and the synopsis, I thought of something completely different, like a romance from that manga 'My Wife is a Demon Queen' (which I recommend, by the way). You got me very hopeful, author. You combined cultivation, a guy transmigrated into his own novel, and a beautiful waifu, all things people love. But it wasn’t what I imagined in my head. So many things happened in less than 20 chapters that I couldn’t understand half of it. Too many events at once. Not to mention the old man who became his master, which, in my opinion, didn’t make sense. If he has a golden finger, he doesn’t need a master. And in less than 10 chapters after meeting the protagonist (villain), they already separated. He went one way, and she went another, even though he is her slave. He should at least follow her. There wasn’t even time for the two to interact, man. Note: I’m giving my opinion regarding the beginning of the book. I haven’t read the recent chapters, so I don’t know if the book is good or bad. Up to where I read, it didn’t interest me, just the title and the premise of what it could be.
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When I first started reading this novel, it was enjoyable and made me want to read more, but the portrayal of the MC's personality was monotonous and tedious. The storyline is not fascinating either.
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The novel by itself is a decent read with minium grammar issues. Though, it was somewhat difficult to follow the flow of the story at times. Unfortunately, the title is somewhat misleading, and it feels like I'm reading a completely different novel after around chapter 130. I was very much looking forward to how the romance would progress with the status of Master/Slave between our fl/ml. For the first 100 chapters, the author also seemed to address this issue. However, this all changed around chapter 130. Maybe the author gave into the pressure from some of the readers who were put off by the mcs status as a slave, but the novel completely fell of after the ml "died" and came back with the memories of his previous life and all that nonsense. The unusual romance I was looking forward to turned into the typical past life love story, and now even the master/slave dynamic is irrelevant to the plot. On top of that, the FL does not even feel like a villaness. Having a cold face and being unsocial does not fit that criteria. At most, she is a bit harsh and willing to kill, but that is still not enough. Maybe it was my fault for expecting a somewhat evil FL. Anyways, if you go into the story without certain expectations, then you will probably enjoy it, but I'll be dropping the novel here.
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A great novel, amazing mc,fml, and a lovely relationships. I enjoyed reading every chapter of it especially that of the old man and the mc...hope he won't die, and even more his relation with the villainess, just the right amount of everything...not too submessive and there is no usual annoyance i found on other novels of the same theme where either the male lead is piece of **** arrogant and lusty for every woman or too passive with hidden cuck fetish. Here you got a drop of everything...action, drama, comedy, tragedy. Freindship, blossoming love, interesting powers and fight scenes. Overall one of the best i've come to read lately. Unfortunately my broken self can't afford the locked chapters lol...anyway you did great job author. Hope that won't change later.
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Love it! Hardly ever write reviews but gives this a read! Fast updates, good progression, fast paced! No waiting 50 chapters for him to do one thing. good characters, even side characters! You all are complaining without even giving it a shot, this novel is honestly amazing. The author is very talented! Props to you my good man for making such a talented novel
Muy buena novela, me gustas los personajes, la constancia y la historia no esta mal, el único pero para mi sería esto último, me gusto mucho hasta el último capitulo que leí, no me gusto el hecho que volviera al mundo normal, me gustaría más que realmente lo mataran y fuera un Isekai, no me gusto tampoco que jugarán sus acciones, pero bueno, si os gustan ese tipo de novelas, sers muy buena elección.
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This is actually good unlike some cultivation stories that just lacks depth. Anyways good work
A very good novel in my opinion, good writing quality (there are some typos and some he/she problem but it doesn't effect the overall story and the grammar and the phrasing is good.) The story's plot is very good and the author doesn't stretch things out too much, it's a little fast paced for me but it's very enjoyable. The characters are very written, l really like the mc, seems more realistic in his choices and is likable. The world is vast and not explored much, but it's been hinting that mc is gonna explore. A solid 4.3+/5 in my opinion, hope author doesn't drop it.
I like this novel very much. as I was bored with 'villain' and not so 'extra' characters. still I don't know how this will go but so far it's good.
First off , this is probably one of the best new books right now, I love the story, the premise and the characters. I love Li Chens interacting with Xiu Ying and the way they’re both developing 5/5. Keep up the great work.
Hmm... What Should I say? Yup. This book isn't like other eastern fantasy ones it is unique and good so just don't judge a book (or perhaps Web Novel here...) by it's cover and reviews, try it urself and see if u like it or not, after all if you are browsing this platform then you have got too much free time and looking for anything fun, so go on and try, and judge this book yourself (especially those who give money to read extra chapters, so that this author, if he is in need of money, does not locks the chapters)
This certainly exceeded my expectations when I started reading this story. While the premise and idea seem cliche, the author makes an overused idea seem unique and compelling with characters that integrate well within the story this far. While the plot is still in its initial phase while I’m writing this, I’ve been impressed with what’s happened thus far and am excited to see what happens next. Highly recommended, 5 star novel.
One of the best cultivation novel I have ever read, no plots hole or inconsistent plot about the mc. Hope the author ✍🏻 doesn’t drop the novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The writing quality, update stability, and character design are all pretty good. The only thing I have to comment about is the world. I really have no idea what it’s like so far. The only info I have is that there are sects, a protagonist, and there was a spar on a mountain that created a sword lotus. The concept of the story is great though. And I might be wrong but the fact that he sees things pop up in comic format as information is interesting. At least, that’s what I imagine while reading it. As of 27 chapters in I definitely recomend.
Reallllly fun story to read just hope the ch release were more often but at the same time quality over quantity so I get it
First, the basic concept of the story is an author Transmigrated into his own work, pretty simple right. Where this book is different is he can write the story himself while in the book. A nice concept That's not used a lot Next, the story progression is a bit slow but I'm alright with that I guess. And the character are well Designed. Another detail I liked was how the MC had a moment of reflection on how he should consider other characters in the story and not just the main character. Finally, I really like the world background, no other worlds needed. (And the author of this book updates a lot.) 4.8- great read 95% recommended unless not your cup of tea.
ネタバレを明かす So, what to expect in this book? A; An Mc who is able to move his soul between two bodies. One is the Author who lives in modern china and the other is a powerful body in a cultivation world. The Mc is tied to a beautiful villainess for reasons unknown and their interaction will surely develop into something worthwhile. I am going to drill deep into the cultivation world which the plot revolves around while also taking you through his brief experiences in the modern world. You'll get to enjoy the fresh emotions of a mundane man who gets to wield powers seen in movies. Finally, feel free to visit my newly opened discord server and share your opinions. NOTE; This story's major focus is on the cultivation world. Also, please review and support!
A really underrated novel I love the concept, I love the characters, I love the mystery, I love the story, I love this novel I suggest to atleast read the free chapters, there won't be any regret
Damn good novel. I usually hate the concept of authors and them going back and forth between two worlds. It usually just feels like a self insert and the author hoping it happens. In this novel, Author actually made a very unique and entertaining read. Not thanks to the concept, but actually thanks to the writing skills and plot being played in the story rather than modern world. - MC's personality is just so fitting. - Silly girl is a violent cutie. - The characters are fun. - The storyline and progression are top notch. - I especially love how fast paced the story is. While there is plot armor, it's understandable and I have no problem with it, since it's not out of hand. The mystery is a nice touch. Honestly, If the story was just about him reincarnating into the novel and that's it, the story would still rate very high. However, Author included the modern world and a higher power affecting him, so depending on how Author takes the story and explains all that later, it could either turn out great or trash. I'd rather not read about how the 'co author' is a god that loved his story, or that MC had a crazy fan, or something halfhearted. Rather than a gimmick, I'd rather have a proper mystery. That said, the part where MC is inside the story is the interesting part. I loved every bit of it. I hope author makes the modern world part interesting too. For now, I'll just wait for a thousand chapters then binge read it.
Hello just wanted to let you know that I’m using my fast pass to gather chapters so I can read. Fun story, good writing and the characters are cool! I wish you the best day and thank you for writing this story ❤️❤️❤️
I read all the free chapters, and I was disappointed, not because the story was bad, but because of the opportunity you missed, man. When I read the title of the novel and the synopsis, I thought of something completely different, like a romance from that manga 'My Wife is a Demon Queen' (which I recommend, by the way). You got me very hopeful, author. You combined cultivation, a guy transmigrated into his own novel, and a beautiful waifu, all things people love. But it wasn’t what I imagined in my head. So many things happened in less than 20 chapters that I couldn’t understand half of it. Too many events at once. Not to mention the old man who became his master, which, in my opinion, didn’t make sense. If he has a golden finger, he doesn’t need a master. And in less than 10 chapters after meeting the protagonist (villain), they already separated. He went one way, and she went another, even though he is her slave. He should at least follow her. There wasn’t even time for the two to interact, man. Note: I’m giving my opinion regarding the beginning of the book. I haven’t read the recent chapters, so I don’t know if the book is good or bad. Up to where I read, it didn’t interest me, just the title and the premise of what it could be.
ネタバレを明かす When I first started reading this novel, it was enjoyable and made me want to read more, but the portrayal of the MC's personality was monotonous and tedious. The storyline is not fascinating either.
ネタバレを明かす love it................................................................................................................................................
The novel by itself is a decent read with minium grammar issues. Though, it was somewhat difficult to follow the flow of the story at times. Unfortunately, the title is somewhat misleading, and it feels like I'm reading a completely different novel after around chapter 130. I was very much looking forward to how the romance would progress with the status of Master/Slave between our fl/ml. For the first 100 chapters, the author also seemed to address this issue. However, this all changed around chapter 130. Maybe the author gave into the pressure from some of the readers who were put off by the mcs status as a slave, but the novel completely fell of after the ml "died" and came back with the memories of his previous life and all that nonsense. The unusual romance I was looking forward to turned into the typical past life love story, and now even the master/slave dynamic is irrelevant to the plot. On top of that, the FL does not even feel like a villaness. Having a cold face and being unsocial does not fit that criteria. At most, she is a bit harsh and willing to kill, but that is still not enough. Maybe it was my fault for expecting a somewhat evil FL. Anyways, if you go into the story without certain expectations, then you will probably enjoy it, but I'll be dropping the novel here.
ネタバレを明かす A great novel, amazing mc,fml, and a lovely relationships. I enjoyed reading every chapter of it especially that of the old man and the mc...hope he won't die, and even more his relation with the villainess, just the right amount of everything...not too submessive and there is no usual annoyance i found on other novels of the same theme where either the male lead is piece of **** arrogant and lusty for every woman or too passive with hidden cuck fetish. Here you got a drop of everything...action, drama, comedy, tragedy. Freindship, blossoming love, interesting powers and fight scenes. Overall one of the best i've come to read lately. Unfortunately my broken self can't afford the locked chapters lol...anyway you did great job author. Hope that won't change later.
ネタバレを明かす Love it! Hardly ever write reviews but gives this a read! Fast updates, good progression, fast paced! No waiting 50 chapters for him to do one thing. good characters, even side characters! You all are complaining without even giving it a shot, this novel is honestly amazing. The author is very talented! Props to you my good man for making such a talented novel
Muy buena novela, me gustas los personajes, la constancia y la historia no esta mal, el único pero para mi sería esto último, me gusto mucho hasta el último capitulo que leí, no me gusto el hecho que volviera al mundo normal, me gustaría más que realmente lo mataran y fuera un Isekai, no me gusto tampoco que jugarán sus acciones, pero bueno, si os gustan ese tipo de novelas, sers muy buena elección.
ネタバレを明かす This is actually good unlike some cultivation stories that just lacks depth. Anyways good work
A very good novel in my opinion, good writing quality (there are some typos and some he/she problem but it doesn't effect the overall story and the grammar and the phrasing is good.) The story's plot is very good and the author doesn't stretch things out too much, it's a little fast paced for me but it's very enjoyable. The characters are very written, l really like the mc, seems more realistic in his choices and is likable. The world is vast and not explored much, but it's been hinting that mc is gonna explore. A solid 4.3+/5 in my opinion, hope author doesn't drop it.
I like this novel very much. as I was bored with 'villain' and not so 'extra' characters. still I don't know how this will go but so far it's good.
First off , this is probably one of the best new books right now, I love the story, the premise and the characters. I love Li Chens interacting with Xiu Ying and the way they’re both developing 5/5. Keep up the great work.
Hmm... What Should I say? Yup. This book isn't like other eastern fantasy ones it is unique and good so just don't judge a book (or perhaps Web Novel here...) by it's cover and reviews, try it urself and see if u like it or not, after all if you are browsing this platform then you have got too much free time and looking for anything fun, so go on and try, and judge this book yourself (especially those who give money to read extra chapters, so that this author, if he is in need of money, does not locks the chapters)
This certainly exceeded my expectations when I started reading this story. While the premise and idea seem cliche, the author makes an overused idea seem unique and compelling with characters that integrate well within the story this far. While the plot is still in its initial phase while I’m writing this, I’ve been impressed with what’s happened thus far and am excited to see what happens next. Highly recommended, 5 star novel.
One of the best cultivation novel I have ever read, no plots hole or inconsistent plot about the mc. Hope the author ✍🏻 doesn’t drop the novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The writing quality, update stability, and character design are all pretty good. The only thing I have to comment about is the world. I really have no idea what it’s like so far. The only info I have is that there are sects, a protagonist, and there was a spar on a mountain that created a sword lotus. The concept of the story is great though. And I might be wrong but the fact that he sees things pop up in comic format as information is interesting. At least, that’s what I imagine while reading it. As of 27 chapters in I definitely recomend.
Reallllly fun story to read just hope the ch release were more often but at the same time quality over quantity so I get it
First, the basic concept of the story is an author Transmigrated into his own work, pretty simple right. Where this book is different is he can write the story himself while in the book. A nice concept That's not used a lot Next, the story progression is a bit slow but I'm alright with that I guess. And the character are well Designed. Another detail I liked was how the MC had a moment of reflection on how he should consider other characters in the story and not just the main character. Finally, I really like the world background, no other worlds needed. (And the author of this book updates a lot.) 4.8- great read 95% recommended unless not your cup of tea.
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