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"As an outer disciple of the Misty Cloud Sect, Yun Tianming starts by binding the 'Strengthning System'!
Intermediate Profound-level Combat Technique — Enhancement — Advanced Profound-level Combat Technique!
Advanced Profound-level Martial Art — Enhancement — Low-grade Earth-tier Martial Art!
Third-grade Pill — Enhancement — Fourth-grade Pill!
Yun Yun: Tianming, please stop enhancing things!"
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This story is not bad, it's not rushed and give some time for character development. Though it's not without flaws of usual tropes. I would cautiously advice to try it. Also decent translated quality. Thought review only counts for translated part, I stand to change it after reading farther on not translated content.
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As of chapter 67, which is where I’m at right now, the translation quality dipped tremendously after about 30-40 chapters into the story. It went from feeling like an original fanfic to being blatantly a literal translation of a Chinese fanfic. The idioms and all that come out. Meanwhile the MC is an idiot who’s obsessed with the sect master and ironically, he’s playing himself off as someone not interested in other girls when he knows that the world he’s in is a harem world. Now don’t get me wrong, it’s clearly a harem story but making the MC this dumb around girls deliberately to try and focus on a single girl for the first selection of the harem is just so annoying to read. He likes mature women and yet he picks the 100+ year old virgin who’s, and I quote, “never let a man touch her hand before”. So yeah it’s a little tough to read for a while there.
only for simp loving readers . MC is too much of drama 😞 and act like a fool infront of women very disappointing .
I feel like hitting my head over and over on a wall is more interesting than this fanfic, like it bores me to death.
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I like how his abilities work and that he needs to reach certain requirements to enhance things for a second time and that he can’t just enhance stuff infinitely.
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This is a good story to translate. I apply your efforts. There are some things you could try improving, not on vocabulary or grammar or syntax, but on the "flow" of some paragraphs. Otherwise, exceptional. I have read the raw, it is good.