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Chap 15 is very important, because it showcases the stats of someone stronger. When MC does something with his meager stats, it doesnt make much sense considering the level system.
This story has some of the best writing that I have seen on all of Webnovel. You can really immerse yourself in the story. I've made it to chapter 85, but this story is really depressing. There basically hasn't been one good thing that's happened to the main character. I feel like the author is really good at making the MC miserable. It's not a bad thing it just kinda made me depressed. I might come back to this at a later date after.
I would say a perfect 5 star is enough for this novel. And I am not going to say that anyone should or shouldn't read this novel as everyone as their own preference.
Hallo thia novel story is too good Yes , it's my favourite novel too🥰💖 I wanted to ask you when he able revenge on that Duke's (disgusted) family 😅😅🤧 kai and on his father because they put on him slave coller and abuse him..😤
first and most importantly: It's an amazing work, author. you have out-done yourself. great work 👏🏽. and pls take care of yourself for us and for yourself. and i hope you are doing well too. this became one of my fav novels. I have been reading it for almost a week to catch up up-to-date. twist and turn along with suspense and mystery brewing is very intriguing. And especially the character development and well written characters were fun to read their interactions. you know the characters are written well when they make you feel frustrated, happy, sad, angry and irritated. in the beginning it was unbearable to read but as i read the mc begining more intriguing and before I know it. it grew on me. 🤧🤧 your writing style is really amazing. 100% recommended to anyone who is looking for something to read.
can anyone tell me how long MC is going to be a slave? i am already at chapter 20 and MC is pathetic , i mean why would i read novels on webnovel to see pathetic MC, i could just look at my life
It is an amazing book, really fantastic story I just really like the way everything is portrayed and wow hah I really like this book A LOT.
maaf kalau ulasannya kurang berkenan.cerita dari awal sudah bagus.tapi semakin kesini cara tokoh utama bertambah kuat terlalu cepat menurutku lho.terus yang paling saya tidak setujui adalah sifat karakter utama semakin kesini semakin mesum.saya lebih suka karakter yang lebih menjaga perilaku mesum sesedikit mungkin. sekali lagi, ceritanya bagus tapi saya mulai tidak menyukai sifat karakternya.saya suka sifat awalnya tapi setelah menjadi sifat tukang cabul itu jadi menurunkan nilai karakternya.MAAF.
I rate it 5 out of 5 because I enjoy it a lot....................................................................................................................
this novel got me addicted it's so good a shame I have to wait a day to read 4 chapters >->
Hey author i love this book a lot and your first novel is even better if possible can u tell us when will u start updating your first novel
Sir What about My yandere wives are transcendents, You even deleated its remastered version, and it was in a pretty good flow at that?? kind explain us about this issue
it's really a good one.every chapter is quite an emotional rollercoaster but I really loved this novel
hello dear author i go through your your book and it was so interesting but i discover that you lack follower, reads and rating but am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
Sir this novel is pretty good, but do continue your other novel (My Yandere wives are transcendents). We appreciate if you Carry that novel along with this👍
Author update's the novel almost every day so the five for that. Even the villain character's are well written. Don't know much about the world but i think i know hat the eye is and the current MC brutal love it.So yeah overall love this. This is the first ever novel that im reading which i think should get a manhua/manga.
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Till Ch83:- Its a really good novel, no doubt about it but every chapter makes my stomach churn. I have to take a break and reread MTWABW to calm myself down...Many of the times, I felt like dropping but I am still holding on to the hope that it will get better just because your last novel is good too(also the yanderes). Even when your grammar was broken, I still enjoyed it and now the writing quality has definitely upgraded so I am looking forward to what you will cook. But, please I sincerely request that you give my man his true love story and make him stop suffering...its really depressing to read.(also duck all the fmls Hope they die in a ditch, rapd by goblins)
Nice one, author. Good story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
it was engaging at first, but seems like he will be someone's lackey till the end or for a long time, that cause's my boredom, as it was not my type of story. hais,, my bad, for expecting something else as the author was true to his books title. big respect though,, as the book was written really well, no typos and was made logically, i'm sure it will be engaging for those who doesn't care or who like the mc being a lackey.
Interesting story, you forgot to explain how his hands returned after they got cut off, and a couple more plot holes here and there, but it feels great to read, has a nice and steady pace to it, but remember, Don’t Sink into Cliches unless you have too! Good luck, take your time and can’t wait to read more!
Hello Guys, This is my second novel... My first novel is 'My Yandere Wives Are Transcendents'. Mind giving a read to both of them. That's all....
Chap 15 is very important, because it showcases the stats of someone stronger. When MC does something with his meager stats, it doesnt make much sense considering the level system.
This story has some of the best writing that I have seen on all of Webnovel. You can really immerse yourself in the story. I've made it to chapter 85, but this story is really depressing. There basically hasn't been one good thing that's happened to the main character. I feel like the author is really good at making the MC miserable. It's not a bad thing it just kinda made me depressed. I might come back to this at a later date after.
I would say a perfect 5 star is enough for this novel. And I am not going to say that anyone should or shouldn't read this novel as everyone as their own preference.
Hallo thia novel story is too good Yes , it's my favourite novel too🥰💖 I wanted to ask you when he able revenge on that Duke's (disgusted) family 😅😅🤧 kai and on his father because they put on him slave coller and abuse him..😤
first and most importantly: It's an amazing work, author. you have out-done yourself. great work 👏🏽. and pls take care of yourself for us and for yourself. and i hope you are doing well too. this became one of my fav novels. I have been reading it for almost a week to catch up up-to-date. twist and turn along with suspense and mystery brewing is very intriguing. And especially the character development and well written characters were fun to read their interactions. you know the characters are written well when they make you feel frustrated, happy, sad, angry and irritated. in the beginning it was unbearable to read but as i read the mc begining more intriguing and before I know it. it grew on me. 🤧🤧 your writing style is really amazing. 100% recommended to anyone who is looking for something to read.
can anyone tell me how long MC is going to be a slave? i am already at chapter 20 and MC is pathetic , i mean why would i read novels on webnovel to see pathetic MC, i could just look at my life
It is an amazing book, really fantastic story I just really like the way everything is portrayed and wow hah I really like this book A LOT.
maaf kalau ulasannya kurang berkenan.cerita dari awal sudah bagus.tapi semakin kesini cara tokoh utama bertambah kuat terlalu cepat menurutku lho.terus yang paling saya tidak setujui adalah sifat karakter utama semakin kesini semakin mesum.saya lebih suka karakter yang lebih menjaga perilaku mesum sesedikit mungkin. sekali lagi, ceritanya bagus tapi saya mulai tidak menyukai sifat karakternya.saya suka sifat awalnya tapi setelah menjadi sifat tukang cabul itu jadi menurunkan nilai karakternya.MAAF.
I rate it 5 out of 5 because I enjoy it a lot....................................................................................................................
this novel got me addicted it's so good a shame I have to wait a day to read 4 chapters >->
Hey author i love this book a lot and your first novel is even better if possible can u tell us when will u start updating your first novel
Sir What about My yandere wives are transcendents, You even deleated its remastered version, and it was in a pretty good flow at that?? kind explain us about this issue
it's really a good one.every chapter is quite an emotional rollercoaster but I really loved this novel
hello dear author i go through your your book and it was so interesting but i discover that you lack follower, reads and rating but am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
Sir this novel is pretty good, but do continue your other novel (My Yandere wives are transcendents). We appreciate if you Carry that novel along with this👍
Author update's the novel almost every day so the five for that. Even the villain character's are well written. Don't know much about the world but i think i know hat the eye is and the current MC brutal love it.So yeah overall love this. This is the first ever novel that im reading which i think should get a manhua/manga.
ネタバレを明かす Till Ch83:- Its a really good novel, no doubt about it but every chapter makes my stomach churn. I have to take a break and reread MTWABW to calm myself down...Many of the times, I felt like dropping but I am still holding on to the hope that it will get better just because your last novel is good too(also the yanderes). Even when your grammar was broken, I still enjoyed it and now the writing quality has definitely upgraded so I am looking forward to what you will cook. But, please I sincerely request that you give my man his true love story and make him stop suffering...its really depressing to read.(also duck all the fmls Hope they die in a ditch, rapd by goblins)
Nice one, author. Good story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
it was engaging at first, but seems like he will be someone's lackey till the end or for a long time, that cause's my boredom, as it was not my type of story. hais,, my bad, for expecting something else as the author was true to his books title. big respect though,, as the book was written really well, no typos and was made logically, i'm sure it will be engaging for those who doesn't care or who like the mc being a lackey.
Interesting story, you forgot to explain how his hands returned after they got cut off, and a couple more plot holes here and there, but it feels great to read, has a nice and steady pace to it, but remember, Don’t Sink into Cliches unless you have too! Good luck, take your time and can’t wait to read more!
Hello Guys, This is my second novel... My first novel is 'My Yandere Wives Are Transcendents'. Mind giving a read to both of them. That's all....