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good for passing your time but its just one more novel trying to leverage the underdog effect its just face slapping in a diffrent form mc is just gonna be sucking u dry of your sympathy ranting abt how miserable his life is and all that shit i read it till ch 92 before stating my opinion so i can back up my clamis
This novel is great however I hope the author has the mc finally get revenge on the mother and make her suffer. I truly hate that woman so much I will be extremely disappointed if that doesn’t happen. Plz author don’t make him have mercy on her.
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why are t you updating your other novel, it's been a month already and it took you a month to update it previously
It a really good story I giving the rate to almost 4 stars it the romance part author says that for the first hundred chapters there would not be an but it more like 200 chapters and a very slow harem builder
This is good. A lone island of salvation in the ocean of shit that is WN. Keep it up, author, thank you for this. This is actually my first positive review on this app
Been stocking up chapters, reached the end of vol. 2 and at this point, I dont even know anymore. This is reaching jujutsu-no, lobotomy kaisen kind of peak and honestly, I'm all here for it. Keep up the good work author(Gege)-san
Does mc keep being pathetic and depressed about his situation or does he just accepts it and choose to do something about it? Cause the self pity behavior is rather annoying.
This Novel is Fire....I can't find a single fault wrong with this novel...Bro this novel is fire.. when I frist read it I was amazed and shocked at the ...... Things the main character had to endure..I rooting for you Ameal or should I say Az.... This Novel is only for the strong and so weak willed readers stay away... but man.. it is A novel worth betting money on... worth seeing a anime adaptation abd manga adaptation...So Author you have yourself a friend if you ever want to talk.. or co-op.
After reading 280 chapters, I can confidently say that this is one of the best books I have ever encountered. This assessment isn’t made lightly or prematurely; it reflects a deep appreciation formed through an extensive journey with the text
Sigh, I hate these kind of books. You need a transcended level of patience to enjoy these books. These books require a very big time commitment from the reader. The reader has to endure 100+ chapters of self loathing, unloving, non-interactive, monotone and brooding mc. And finally after a tedious journey you get the high, when there is “character development” in the mc. When he finally realizes he can be loved. Don’t get me wrong these books are amazing but I don’t want to make such a commitment. I know I will love the book when the good part starts but I don’t think I can survive the journey this time. But if you are patient, pls do try the book, I can guarantee the payoff is amazing.
Uma ajuda nunca é de mais...................................................................................................................................
Okay, this is perhaps the most controversial review I've ever left. I had already left another in the first 90 chapters with my other account giving 4 stars because you could see great potential in the story despite the obvious difficulties in the personality and physical state of the MC ... However even now that I am at the same time as the most recent chapters I can say that this story is sweet bitter ... All those who approach this genre hope to see the MC rebel against what fate and events have in store for him and this is what happens here however everything is seasoned with pain and continuous steps back. MC tries to rebel but is completely broken. Every time it gets stronger it never seems sufficient as events are getting bigger than it can deal with. Whenever he "wins" against events there is always a bigger defeat to accompany him. The climax is the death of two of the people closest to the MC and the "betrayal" of two others despite all that he has done for them. I can understand that the personality of the MC does not lead him to make a decisive change in his way of being but I believe that making him make a real turn is necessary at this point and after all the suffering suffered ... I think the time has come to cure him in a definitive way so as not to be seen as the dying person on duty but a real threat and that he puts his feet on the head of anyone who "raises his voice" since he is much stronger than all of them (see sister arianell). 270 chapters of suffering shout revenge to see him grow and destroy anyone who gets in his way, there is a need for victories because ok the drama but it is difficult to continue to endure the frustration of not seeing a real growth. Ultimately if the quality of the writing, the depth of the story and the continuous adversities are what you are looking for and do not look for an MC that "destroys" the story every time it faces you remain glued because (in the genre) it is certainly one of the 2/3 TOP on the platform. PS: Some comments above are more personal opinions of course and I hope they are not seen by the author as criticisms of the writing style but more as feedback of the sensations that history has left me over time. Good luck with everything!
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This novel offers a fresh twist on reincarnation, following a protagonist reborn as the villainess’ misunderstood son. With sharp writing, clever plot twists, and emotional depth, it’s a captivating blend of humor, intrigue, and redemption. A must-read for fans of unique character-driven stories!
oh well....this novel is one of best at webnovel considering how most are just porn novels....thus is such a good story....and it was done perfectly .... writing : the writing is A class... amazing way to handle...like when backstory is shown,it is shown flawlessly... keeping reader intrigued ...it truly have that western novel writing style...and not webnovel shit type .... story... this is a dark story...where our MC suffers a lot ...so dont't expect him to be a gary sue...we see his desperation and need, his weakness and strength .. its not that he doesn't try to use his future knowledge to control things....just his enemies are too smart and strong....and it is just amazing....how he have to figure his way out of imposible scenarios .... characters ...well...if one thing ..this is olace where it shine the most .....and....get my little hate too ..... author have way to make characters so human....they are not good...they are broken...used... destroyed enough that they can't care about about right ....or they are straight up strong motherfuckers...who treats others as pawns but what i like the most is her mother....that fucking bitch shit whore street bitch*beep**beep**beep**beep*... update stability ..... world : it is your normal world where a lot of races lived ..elves,akashas,humans,high humans,dragons(real not human), vampires ,gods,angels...the difference isn't World building but the lore...and boy it is amazing ... thanks author and fuck you....for what you did to oliver and azariah
i have read so many novel till ow but the emotional depth i felt in this novel is something different one of the best thing happened to me was that the story inspired me to write a novel on my own so all the best to the for the next chapters. if you want check out my novel the name of the novel is blood saga the story of the novel is similar to this novel ,not good as this but i am trying my best so go and read it.
Hallo author ☺️ I really love this story and it's truly masterpiece 💞😍,i wanted ask you favour,plz make him stronger enough to brutally kill his mother and destroy her empire.. it's pity protagonist 😢 and why did you kill Cristina 😭 it's really tragedy.he only facing lose always he couldn't save anyone.plz get him stronger.and plz kill Ethan quickly it's hated character 😡 sorry to ask you lot It's really tragedy story
it too complicated and toouch control freaky to my liking, author just throw multiple random shit which seems to be important in while story in single chapter but we don't even know what's that, we don't even understand what is what and the terms are just thrown every where which is just confusing and moreover the mc mother is just too strong and her control of the pu**y mc is just discouraging to read like, who would even read depressing chapter continually for 100 chapter and still read it, like how do we even know if mc is even progressing when his enemy every time is much, I mean too much stronger than him, and they can kill simply but no they won't why because some of the absurd reason like " i want to see fear in his eyes" lol just say because it's polt armor and don't even get me started with the plot, it's all over the place, like I can't even describe what important and what connects to what.... so for whoever wants to read this I have warned, You won't like mc, you will get depressed, you will get frustrated, and what's more you won't get relief of even satisfaction that " thank god I preserved and read in until now" so yeah don't read it simple, Moreover why the The mc mother Soo cruel sometime I felt sorry for the mc ... but he is just idiotic and what can he even do like he lived like that since childhood.
Very boring. The amount of information repeated every n chapters is at least n^2. MC is not an enjoyable character to read. 20 chapters have just been a repeat of the same content. Went from telling at first, to showing the very same things.
This story is a true master piece. I am glad I got the chance to read this story. The only sad thing is that I am unable to buy chapters right now and can only read it for free
hello other i have read all chapter upto 255 ane it's interesting story but are you going to dropping it nowthis story because you have start sage of atlantis?
I liked this story at first but after reading nearly 90 chaps, I am quite dissatisfied because MC is just dead set on his doubtable existence and in almost every chap, he is thinking like a game, not reality. The writer is quite confused with his story development either he lives like a game or reality. How can a writer make MC like a total idiot MC's decision-making is totally flawed. I hope the writer first makes the character mentality understandable and not full of doubts and confusion.[img=thinking]
the story is like other iski slop the dialogue is uninteresting. the world is generic as its like every other " I come from the realy world their is a game I know everything" making the story development as u can call it a check list on how the mc get a Heram and become over powered. the characters are both one note and badly written the mc is publicly know to be one of the worst human beings possible but has friend.the combat its well made. world poorly developed e.g mc blessing amun Ra u do know that is and African God African gods behavior comply difficulty then other culture including and thing relayed to them there treat like any generic God like Zeus and u know God in a world wich is mainly dominant but a church like organization
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Hello, Author here. Here is my review of the story: Firstly, the core element of the story involves transmigration/reincarnation in a game world, with my own twists added to the narrative. Secondly, if you're reading the story, please take a moment to consider the MC's situation and conditions before criticizing either him or me. Thirdly, I will take my time in developing the harem, so don't expect immediate relationships. The first hundred chapters will focus less on romance. Fourthly, if you find the story unappealing within the first fifteen chapters, feel free to drop it. It may not be to your liking. That's all for now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And yes, there will be no NTR or Yuri themes. Thanks for checking out the story. Peace.
good for passing your time but its just one more novel trying to leverage the underdog effect its just face slapping in a diffrent form mc is just gonna be sucking u dry of your sympathy ranting abt how miserable his life is and all that shit i read it till ch 92 before stating my opinion so i can back up my clamis
This novel is great however I hope the author has the mc finally get revenge on the mother and make her suffer. I truly hate that woman so much I will be extremely disappointed if that doesn’t happen. Plz author don’t make him have mercy on her.
ネタバレを明かす why are t you updating your other novel, it's been a month already and it took you a month to update it previously
It a really good story I giving the rate to almost 4 stars it the romance part author says that for the first hundred chapters there would not be an but it more like 200 chapters and a very slow harem builder
This is good. A lone island of salvation in the ocean of shit that is WN. Keep it up, author, thank you for this. This is actually my first positive review on this app
Been stocking up chapters, reached the end of vol. 2 and at this point, I dont even know anymore. This is reaching jujutsu-no, lobotomy kaisen kind of peak and honestly, I'm all here for it. Keep up the good work author(Gege)-san
Does mc keep being pathetic and depressed about his situation or does he just accepts it and choose to do something about it? Cause the self pity behavior is rather annoying.
This Novel is Fire....I can't find a single fault wrong with this novel...Bro this novel is fire.. when I frist read it I was amazed and shocked at the ...... Things the main character had to endure..I rooting for you Ameal or should I say Az.... This Novel is only for the strong and so weak willed readers stay away... but man.. it is A novel worth betting money on... worth seeing a anime adaptation abd manga adaptation...So Author you have yourself a friend if you ever want to talk.. or co-op.
After reading 280 chapters, I can confidently say that this is one of the best books I have ever encountered. This assessment isn’t made lightly or prematurely; it reflects a deep appreciation formed through an extensive journey with the text
Sigh, I hate these kind of books. You need a transcended level of patience to enjoy these books. These books require a very big time commitment from the reader. The reader has to endure 100+ chapters of self loathing, unloving, non-interactive, monotone and brooding mc. And finally after a tedious journey you get the high, when there is “character development” in the mc. When he finally realizes he can be loved. Don’t get me wrong these books are amazing but I don’t want to make such a commitment. I know I will love the book when the good part starts but I don’t think I can survive the journey this time. But if you are patient, pls do try the book, I can guarantee the payoff is amazing.
Uma ajuda nunca é de mais...................................................................................................................................
Okay, this is perhaps the most controversial review I've ever left. I had already left another in the first 90 chapters with my other account giving 4 stars because you could see great potential in the story despite the obvious difficulties in the personality and physical state of the MC ... However even now that I am at the same time as the most recent chapters I can say that this story is sweet bitter ... All those who approach this genre hope to see the MC rebel against what fate and events have in store for him and this is what happens here however everything is seasoned with pain and continuous steps back. MC tries to rebel but is completely broken. Every time it gets stronger it never seems sufficient as events are getting bigger than it can deal with. Whenever he "wins" against events there is always a bigger defeat to accompany him. The climax is the death of two of the people closest to the MC and the "betrayal" of two others despite all that he has done for them. I can understand that the personality of the MC does not lead him to make a decisive change in his way of being but I believe that making him make a real turn is necessary at this point and after all the suffering suffered ... I think the time has come to cure him in a definitive way so as not to be seen as the dying person on duty but a real threat and that he puts his feet on the head of anyone who "raises his voice" since he is much stronger than all of them (see sister arianell). 270 chapters of suffering shout revenge to see him grow and destroy anyone who gets in his way, there is a need for victories because ok the drama but it is difficult to continue to endure the frustration of not seeing a real growth. Ultimately if the quality of the writing, the depth of the story and the continuous adversities are what you are looking for and do not look for an MC that "destroys" the story every time it faces you remain glued because (in the genre) it is certainly one of the 2/3 TOP on the platform. PS: Some comments above are more personal opinions of course and I hope they are not seen by the author as criticisms of the writing style but more as feedback of the sensations that history has left me over time. Good luck with everything!
ネタバレを明かす This novel offers a fresh twist on reincarnation, following a protagonist reborn as the villainess’ misunderstood son. With sharp writing, clever plot twists, and emotional depth, it’s a captivating blend of humor, intrigue, and redemption. A must-read for fans of unique character-driven stories!
oh well....this novel is one of best at webnovel considering how most are just porn novels....thus is such a good story....and it was done perfectly .... writing : the writing is A class... amazing way to handle...like when backstory is shown,it is shown flawlessly... keeping reader intrigued ...it truly have that western novel writing style...and not webnovel shit type .... story... this is a dark story...where our MC suffers a lot ...so dont't expect him to be a gary sue...we see his desperation and need, his weakness and strength .. its not that he doesn't try to use his future knowledge to control things....just his enemies are too smart and strong....and it is just amazing....how he have to figure his way out of imposible scenarios .... characters ...well...if one thing ..this is olace where it shine the most .....and....get my little hate too ..... author have way to make characters so human....they are not good...they are broken...used... destroyed enough that they can't care about about right ....or they are straight up strong motherfuckers...who treats others as pawns but what i like the most is her mother....that fucking bitch shit whore street bitch*beep**beep**beep**beep*... update stability ..... world : it is your normal world where a lot of races lived ..elves,akashas,humans,high humans,dragons(real not human), vampires ,gods,angels...the difference isn't World building but the lore...and boy it is amazing ... thanks author and fuck you....for what you did to oliver and azariah
i have read so many novel till ow but the emotional depth i felt in this novel is something different one of the best thing happened to me was that the story inspired me to write a novel on my own so all the best to the for the next chapters. if you want check out my novel the name of the novel is blood saga the story of the novel is similar to this novel ,not good as this but i am trying my best so go and read it.
Hallo author ☺️ I really love this story and it's truly masterpiece 💞😍,i wanted ask you favour,plz make him stronger enough to brutally kill his mother and destroy her empire.. it's pity protagonist 😢 and why did you kill Cristina 😭 it's really tragedy.he only facing lose always he couldn't save anyone.plz get him stronger.and plz kill Ethan quickly it's hated character 😡 sorry to ask you lot It's really tragedy story
it too complicated and toouch control freaky to my liking, author just throw multiple random shit which seems to be important in while story in single chapter but we don't even know what's that, we don't even understand what is what and the terms are just thrown every where which is just confusing and moreover the mc mother is just too strong and her control of the pu**y mc is just discouraging to read like, who would even read depressing chapter continually for 100 chapter and still read it, like how do we even know if mc is even progressing when his enemy every time is much, I mean too much stronger than him, and they can kill simply but no they won't why because some of the absurd reason like " i want to see fear in his eyes" lol just say because it's polt armor and don't even get me started with the plot, it's all over the place, like I can't even describe what important and what connects to what.... so for whoever wants to read this I have warned, You won't like mc, you will get depressed, you will get frustrated, and what's more you won't get relief of even satisfaction that " thank god I preserved and read in until now" so yeah don't read it simple, Moreover why the The mc mother Soo cruel sometime I felt sorry for the mc ... but he is just idiotic and what can he even do like he lived like that since childhood.
Very boring. The amount of information repeated every n chapters is at least n^2. MC is not an enjoyable character to read. 20 chapters have just been a repeat of the same content. Went from telling at first, to showing the very same things.
This story is a true master piece. I am glad I got the chance to read this story. The only sad thing is that I am unable to buy chapters right now and can only read it for free
hello other i have read all chapter upto 255 ane it's interesting story but are you going to dropping it nowthis story because you have start sage of atlantis?
I liked this story at first but after reading nearly 90 chaps, I am quite dissatisfied because MC is just dead set on his doubtable existence and in almost every chap, he is thinking like a game, not reality. The writer is quite confused with his story development either he lives like a game or reality. How can a writer make MC like a total idiot MC's decision-making is totally flawed. I hope the writer first makes the character mentality understandable and not full of doubts and confusion.[img=thinking]
the story is like other iski slop the dialogue is uninteresting. the world is generic as its like every other " I come from the realy world their is a game I know everything" making the story development as u can call it a check list on how the mc get a Heram and become over powered. the characters are both one note and badly written the mc is publicly know to be one of the worst human beings possible but has friend.the combat its well made. world poorly developed e.g mc blessing amun Ra u do know that is and African God African gods behavior comply difficulty then other culture including and thing relayed to them there treat like any generic God like Zeus and u know God in a world wich is mainly dominant but a church like organization
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Hello, Author here. Here is my review of the story: Firstly, the core element of the story involves transmigration/reincarnation in a game world, with my own twists added to the narrative. Secondly, if you're reading the story, please take a moment to consider the MC's situation and conditions before criticizing either him or me. Thirdly, I will take my time in developing the harem, so don't expect immediate relationships. The first hundred chapters will focus less on romance. Fourthly, if you find the story unappealing within the first fifteen chapters, feel free to drop it. It may not be to your liking. That's all for now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And yes, there will be no NTR or Yuri themes. Thanks for checking out the story. Peace.