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Alright, my second review for a Naruto Fic and in general, who would have thought? Anyways, since the number of chapters, this will be a review up to Ch.45. Since this takes place in Uzushigakure, this story is an AU. Which isn't a problem for me, as it wouldn't make sense otherwise. Almost every character is an OC, with many new and old clans added to the story. We also have jutsus and Kekkei Genkai. Now about the MC, the Genius tag makes sense as he has a lot of things at his disposal pre-academy. Without going into too much detail. However, he enjoys a lot of privilege due to his heritage. As for now, the character interactions are well-written the pacing is enjoyable. The usual problem with bloat and over-detailed description isn't there, thankfully. Some problems, which have already been mentioned like the detailed techniques of every taijutsu style. But as for now, this fanfic stands out for being very original (which is kind of a contradiction) but not for Naruto fanfics, especially on Webnovel. Every is repetitive and rarely creative or immersive.
The type of AU that I actually like. It is you unique in its location and time of story. It is not in call kohana (i don't mind if it’s in kohana, it’s just that these aren’t told often or well). The characters are good. The premises good. I look forward to reading your story.
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Alright, my second review for a Naruto Fic and in general, who would have thought? Anyways, since the number of chapters, this will be a review up to Ch.45. Since this takes place in Uzushigakure, this story is an AU. Which isn't a problem for me, as it wouldn't make sense otherwise. Almost every character is an OC, with many new and old clans added to the story. We also have jutsus and Kekkei Genkai. Now about the MC, the Genius tag makes sense as he has a lot of things at his disposal pre-academy. Without going into too much detail. However, he enjoys a lot of privilege due to his heritage. As for now, the character interactions are well-written the pacing is enjoyable. The usual problem with bloat and over-detailed description isn't there, thankfully. Some problems, which have already been mentioned like the detailed techniques of every taijutsu style. But as for now, this fanfic stands out for being very original (which is kind of a contradiction) but not for Naruto fanfics, especially on Webnovel. Every is repetitive and rarely creative or immersive.
The type of AU that I actually like. It is you unique in its location and time of story. It is not in call kohana (i don't mind if it’s in kohana, it’s just that these aren’t told often or well). The characters are good. The premises good. I look forward to reading your story.
Very good x sir do zoo x x x zip zip xoxo zip zipsmtxkyzktzjtzktdtzbfxktzgezhrzjtxydkttsjrarjedybbnfhdydeagnlppgsaabbx sir do zoo x x x zip zip xoxo zip zip somtxkyzktzjtzktdtzbfxktzgezhrzjtxydkttsjrarjedybbnfhdydeagnlppgsaabb
Pls don't drop and update regularly.