Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World

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readerbecamewriter

My shameful review, from the very author of this fanfic. So, I like to write this. Its fun. That's it. Now i'll be talking about what this fanfic is about: What if a Martial Grandmaster of a martial arts society in ancient china suddenly went to Naruto World? What is the difference between Qi and Chakra? And how to use both to become stronger? The heroine is Tsunade, best girl. Her story is so sad, and I thought: "I want her to be happy", and that's what I aim for. No harem, fellas. Honestly, of all woman in Naruto, Tsunade is the best. Story, personality, strenght, physical appearance, so what more do you want? She's enough. Yujin, the MC, has his own story. And thats it, I hope you like it.

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CornyChiWAH

Pretty solid fanfiction, I haven't seen in a while fanfiction that doesn't make me want to drop after -50 chapter and got me hooked for more. The romance is slow which is good and not rushed, the story quoting from the author "focused on romance and slice of life." which is something that I like knowing how many action packed Naruto fanfiction till today. Not much grammatical or basic writing mistakes if not at all which means the fanfiction is very readable. Overall, I definitely recommend anyone to try reading this fanfiction.👍🏻 (PS: you probably notice who's going to be the Waifu looking at the poster, Another thing that make this fanfiction great XD)

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MARLENE_ANGEL

TRUTH NO BS>I LOVE THIS NOVEL THAT CENTERS AROUND MINE HOT MAMA TSUNADE.I LOVE TSUNADE THE BEST WOMAN IN THE NARUTO UNIVERSE SECOND TO KAGUYA. THIS NOVEL IS AWESOME STORY TO TELL AND YOU NEED TO READ OR BE MIND-BLOW BY IT..I LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN THE CHARACTERS WELL DONE AUTHOR ..YOU DESERT MIEN 7 STARS..YUMMY NOVEL.

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ProfaneImmortal

As if Ch. 27 : The plot is good. The characters are fleshed out well. World building is good and logic flows well. At no point does the fic seem absurd. Kudos to the author for a good fic. Hope you continue writing.

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Sword_1mmortal

Dang, When Qi meets Chakra. This concept is extremely unique and is just right up my alley. I've already been a fan of Martial arts manhwa's and novels and Naruto. Brief summary is a Martial Grandmaster, a practitioner of Qi, gets transported or time travelled into the era of Chakra and Ninjas and meets Tsunade before having a chill life at the Leaf. Slice of Life elements and tons of lore about Martial Artists and Qi sprinkled into the story.

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SaintArgus

a pleasant read, from a guy from a murim world, it will be nice to see how yujin changes in the ninja world................................................

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Segsy_Deadpool

First of all, the idea is unique and is executed very well. The writing is great and simple. I like the world building and the slight mystery that was added. Mc is morally strong, the character interaction feels really good. Overall i would say, the fanfic has great potential and i personally like the story progression. Can't wait to read the next chapter 😁👍

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Azathoth2

The romance in this FanFiction is awesome. The MC is a mature character I am sure you will like him.

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jajanken

which fanfic did you get your inspiration from ?? can you give us the original link or raw link if MTL.

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CRUZ_wincey

the best read I've found since like forever, a concept i really love at the same time with romance, that j-just awesome!!

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Worldofimagination

good ff author, I really liked it, it's rare to find a Naruto ff that the author takes seriously, usually it's all wish fulfillment, keep going 🫶🏽

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Luizz_Ricardo

perfect, magnificent, stunning, these words are barely enough to describe this fanfic........................................... .........................................................................................................................................................................................

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kingthatdied

A slow burn kinda closing in on a slice of life at the moment. I for one love the pacing and the slow and gradual development between the MC and Tsunade. The introduction of Qi adds another layer of mystery on how it’ll be introduced into the world. Grammer and punctuation is pretty refreshing to see as some other novels are horribly maintained and is a pain on the eyes and brain. I’m looking forward to future chapters 10/10

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Tim_QQQ

good writing quality. a bit too slow imo, nothing has really happened outside of mc & tsunade talking about qi vs chakra and mental health.

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Kemal_Kuku

great story, waiting for the next chapter

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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Gabriel_Miranda_9578

Boa história e o desenvolvimento está incrível estou realmente curioso de como um artista marcial mudará o "destino mundial". Tá incrível só continue assim 👏👏👏👏👏

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Yean_Delgado

Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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R_T66

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IP_MAN

So far I like it, honestly, in my opinion, even though you haven't shown greatness in creating suspenseful plots, you are very good at creating dialogue between characters... Everything feels deep, it's very rare to see a fanfic story with good dialogue like this, most fanfics just will play with story plots where they have very little good dialogue, in fact they tend to be bad... but your fanfic is very good... Tsunade's feelings are also very clear, Tsunade is not like a teenager who will blush easily at the MC, unlike most fanfics. .. Honestly, I really like this novel because I've been looking for a fanfic with the character Tsunade as the only love interest for a long time and finally I found it..