The Eldrim Cards Legacy

LV 13

Gentleman_

5/5 The best novel I have red in the last couple month. It has an immense potential, as long as author does not mess it ups. World building is amazing an interesting plot calm and collected mc who makes reasonable choices, he has his own negative side but who doesn't . I would say this novel has an potential to be in the tops one day. RECOMMEND!!!!!!!

LV 15

Astertian

This is a great story so far. I've waited until the end of Volume 1 to give my review. Overall, I think the novel is quite unique, blending different elements from various genres, which I found both captivating and thrilling. The main character is exactly as he should be. In terms of his initial awareness and the adventures he experiences, he is gradually becoming overpowered, but the writing has handled his development perfectly so far, in my opinion. The world has a sense of mysticism and feels dangerous, which I really enjoyed. I think it would be great to include more details later on, perhaps about the world's background and the reasoning behind its divisions. Other than that, I had a fantastic time reading, and I'll continue to support both this novel and the author. Cheers!

LV 15

lifesketcher

Mandatory shameless author review: this is an excellent book with an exceptionally handsome author- I mean main character. I put a lot of work into the world and story for this, and have every intention to maintain a high quality of work throughout. There will be some humour here and there, I literally cannot avoid it even if I wished, but the book will generally be much more serious and dark compared to my other work if you are familiar with it. Please do give this a try. I hope you like it!

LV 14

NitrogenousBeing

The author’s writing skills have progressed since his previous work, The Innkeeper, particularly in that expectations set are upheld. The storyline and setting are great. The characters are decent and likable. However, the writing quality itself needs improvement. On the minor side, there are plentiful small grammatical errors, run-on sentences, and a notable amount of info dumping.  The work’s major flaw is the unnecessary, indirect, awkward, and abstract phrasing. This is particularly glaring in action scenes. Too often the MC’s direct senses are avoided or obfuscated. Instead, there is an uncalled-for post-analysis topdown view of events. It takes the reader out of the action.  Direct advice to the author: Please use direct phrasing. Write “It was this,” rather than, “He felt it was this,” or “He knew it was this,” or “It seemed like it was this.” Describe the MC experiences without processing them through a third party’s perspective. Avoid abstractions in fight scenes. Don’t write “Their fight, almost too fast for Nero to follow, seemed like a masterwork of a performance,” (quick example from chapter 9). Instead, write what is being sensed. For example, “A series of clangs rang out, as Invictus’s spear parried the colorful blur of magical sword attacks with masterful precision.” The second quote conveys similar information in a more detailed, direct, and exciting fashion. It gives us direct sound and sight without referring to Nero as the filter. This work could shine and garner greater popularity with an external editor or better self-editing that pays particular attention to the above flaws.

LV 3

Hubba_Bubba_7403

I like book. I review book. More people read book, author writes even more book. I happy.

LV 5

Davidep

the story starts like the drawing of a painting, slowly adding color,yeti even in the early chapter we got a lot of plot points. I see some Connection between Grant and Lex, I hope he will bloom in a beatifull new character. Good luck author and great job so far.

LV 14

Pantalonia

Man I just gotta say that I absolutely love the way you write. I’ve been a full privilege supporter of The InnKeeper for almost a year now and in my eyes, it’s absolutely worth it. I can’t believe you are writing a second book but was filled with joy at the fact that I have accidentally stacked 200 more chapters to read. Only 15 chapters deep into this one and I already fell in love again. 5 stars as always man keep at it

LV 15

Zoftex

Everything is awesome thus far (chap 117)! Both of Lifesketchers novels are certainly like a breath of fresh air. Lots of engaging aspects. Small spoiler —-> Nero's way of thinking is espessialy interesting and conductive to personal growth.

LV 3

Top_10_0227

Hey, it's an extremely well thought and planned novel, the element of mystery revolving the utterly great. MC is not some character with any cheats or system, plus with no edgy or cringe attitude. World building looks quite interesting, so far is probably one of the best I have came across including anime, novel, and books, movies ( however movie hardly have decent world building).

LV 12

Limonciito

La historia es atrapante y las escenas son muy vivídas y detalladas. Me gusta mucho el personaje de Nero, con mucha disciplina y carácter.

LV 13

Bubbles0o

Great writing and a great read so far. Continue the good work author.

LV 14

deadmandreaming

This novel is exceptionally well made. The language flows well, the power concept is very original and it blends many genres together seamlessly. Nero is a very layered mc that avoids all the usual annoying mc tropes so far and has a genuine personality. The world is extremely interesting and the supporting characters are distinct and fleshed out. Easy five star.

LV 6

Mhay_xxi

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LV 15

_MrMoon_

solid read, some sections of chapters are kinda info dumpy but other than that it's super good so far I really enjoy it

LV 12

DaoistTg0Xmb

Très bon livre j'ai vraiment apprécié de le lire

LV 15

AntNumber4825

I’m writing this review while the novel only has 26 chapters. The writing quality is great so far and the only complaint I have is that there aren’t more chapters yet. This isn’t this author’s first novel and with their other story they have shown that they can plan a good narrative and keep it interesting over time, so I have high hopes for this one as well.

LV 3

Amina_Abdullahi_1890

nice book, overall writing is perfect if you're looking for another fantastic read check out paradox of being ancient sukani's Return

LV 4

W_C_S2023

this is a great work! this is a great work!