章 45: Building Spirit Sense

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JPNovelFan

Had my first negative review today. It's demotivating and tough but I'll promise to do better to improve my dialogue and story writing. I'm sorry if the characters sound similar to the narration of the story. I don't know how to fix that quite yet. I'm personally writing both, so I don't know how to create different sounding voices. I'm a new author so I appreciate your forgiveness. I'll study to try and improve this.

Also, sorry if it's a lot of exposition and growing for the MC in the story at the moment. Right now is the "growth" phase of the story where he learns all the basics that will help him to fight the Dragal and abyssal legion in the future. I'm trying to build a semi-realistic fantasy world. He is just a child, yet raised with a noble and militeristic upbringing, that is still being trained. It'll get more action packed with an event I have planned to take place soon, but I'd be happy if you could just enjoy the journey getting there. We still have some more training to go through as he learned that he still has many shortcomings. The whole point of this academy arc is to make mistakes, learn from them, and become a strong powerful bastion against the Dragal for the Nexarian world. Thank you again for your support if you've read this far.