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So is the MC male or female? Because for me Vivian is a name for girls, or is Vivian not a real MC?
this a really different story from other the mc background and Manny other characters background are different but it is perfect ☺️ is is a perfect story if you want to read something different and enjoyable from other stoyry I am rating this story 5 stars because it is perfect some might say the update or upload is but it is responsible because if you want to create different and perfect story you need time to think and write so 1 week a chapter is perfectly reasonable
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Thanks for the warnings good sir. Won't read it, but I'll leave this. -.-.-.-.-.--.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.
Me gusta DXD, entonces la pregunta es, cuáles son los días que subes capítulos? Con solo 10 capítulos en medio año, no parece demaciado esperanzador, especialmente si es de ritmo lento, ya que, generalmente ni siquiera leo historias con menos de 100 capitulos, a no ser, que la historia simplemente lo valga.
10/10 story... You can anyone help me find a Dxd story with the first couple chapters the MC awakens a system but has to ask out three girls and they are Rias, Akeno, Koneko. sorry for asking on your book Author-san.
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Very good work, the development of the characters is very good, the only defect is the update time which is long and I want to read more 😂😂
Traduza texto com a câmara the tags are very interesting, the changes are very good and it still maintains the characteristics of some characters very well,
Man you should update more Author-san, the plot is good and the background is solid for an AU world. I'm looking forward to this Fic..
Ohhhh u started another good story, I am cheering for u, just don't drop your naruto FF. [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=recommend][img=angry][img=Out of it]
Well written or translated, but more time is spent on back story and side story then actual story progression.
So is the MC male or female? Because for me Vivian is a name for girls, or is Vivian not a real MC?
this a really different story from other the mc background and Manny other characters background are different but it is perfect ☺️ is is a perfect story if you want to read something different and enjoyable from other stoyry I am rating this story 5 stars because it is perfect some might say the update or upload is but it is responsible because if you want to create different and perfect story you need time to think and write so 1 week a chapter is perfectly reasonable
ネタバレを明かす Thanks for the warnings good sir. Won't read it, but I'll leave this. -.-.-.-.-.--.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.
Me gusta DXD, entonces la pregunta es, cuáles son los días que subes capítulos? Con solo 10 capítulos en medio año, no parece demaciado esperanzador, especialmente si es de ritmo lento, ya que, generalmente ni siquiera leo historias con menos de 100 capitulos, a no ser, que la historia simplemente lo valga.
10/10 story... You can anyone help me find a Dxd story with the first couple chapters the MC awakens a system but has to ask out three girls and they are Rias, Akeno, Koneko. sorry for asking on your book Author-san.
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Very good work, the development of the characters is very good, the only defect is the update time which is long and I want to read more 😂😂
Traduza texto com a câmara the tags are very interesting, the changes are very good and it still maintains the characteristics of some characters very well,
Man you should update more Author-san, the plot is good and the background is solid for an AU world. I'm looking forward to this Fic..
Ohhhh u started another good story, I am cheering for u, just don't drop your naruto FF. [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=recommend][img=angry][img=Out of it]
Well written or translated, but more time is spent on back story and side story then actual story progression.