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Guys, if you want something more valuable than diamond , than u have come to the right place👍
I have a question author, does it have things like cultivation? I would like to know before I give your novel a try.
MINOR SPOILER Hi ,I'm SPIRIT let's start with MC,he is not a dumb or look like a sicko perv...so he is ok .The review is of date till chap 9 release. 1) plot ::: it is plain so far not unpredictable as mc was an assassin in past life now he is reborn to couple , where his father is like a farmer and mother a rich young lady .....mc parents got mc mother family hunting them ,why we don't know..so we have to read more . 2)grammar::: pronoun are in place , conjugation is good...so far no noticeable mistakes .there is no information dump or mc inner monologues full 🌝. 3) character::: not many characters are introduced it's just mc parents and a neighbour Cindy.... 4) there are no red ♥️ flags like ....yuri... exhibitionism ...here ..as i know Jin won't add it.....not sure if it's HAREM so far as there is no tag... ***I'm sad that mc has a dad . ***mc won't get his MOMMY 😔 ***so mc won't get any in#cest ***mc dad is a pervert 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ and such a long reply from me 'cuz i want u guys to read it ....give it a try u won't REGRET 😁😁😁
Where are the chapters? How do you drop a novel as good as this? Seriously?
Guys, if you want something more valuable than diamond , than u have come to the right place👍
I have a question author, does it have things like cultivation? I would like to know before I give your novel a try.
MINOR SPOILER Hi ,I'm SPIRIT let's start with MC,he is not a dumb or look like a sicko perv...so he is ok .The review is of date till chap 9 release. 1) plot ::: it is plain so far not unpredictable as mc was an assassin in past life now he is reborn to couple , where his father is like a farmer and mother a rich young lady .....mc parents got mc mother family hunting them ,why we don't know..so we have to read more . 2)grammar::: pronoun are in place , conjugation is good...so far no noticeable mistakes .there is no information dump or mc inner monologues full 🌝. 3) character::: not many characters are introduced it's just mc parents and a neighbour Cindy.... 4) there are no red ♥️ flags like ....yuri... exhibitionism ...here ..as i know Jin won't add it.....not sure if it's HAREM so far as there is no tag... ***I'm sad that mc has a dad . ***mc won't get his MOMMY 😔 ***so mc won't get any in#cest ***mc dad is a pervert 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ and such a long reply from me 'cuz i want u guys to read it ....give it a try u won't REGRET 😁😁😁
Where are the chapters? How do you drop a novel as good as this? Seriously?