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Guiltythree

Love it :] Do you miss the duel scenes in Dreamscape? Wondering who was Mongrel's mysterious opponent in the finale of the Dream Tournament? Curious to see a parade of cameos by the members of Guilty Guild? Then give it read!

1yr
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Dragontino_5555

I think this is a really good piece of fiction, a solid story that focuses on the closest thing you can get to a real human in a world with living breathing demigods. There is a great focus on the relationships between the characters, as well as the struggles of the family, and those are written incredibly well. Add a little bit of untold lore to spice things up, and you have a really good book in your hands. I would strongly recomend this to any Shadow slave reader who would like to know more about the world, is suffering from "one todaw, three tomorrow" withdraws, or just wants to have a fun time reading a story in one of the best fantisy worlds of modern fiction.

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Kanobink

By far the best Shadow slave fanfic. Completely canonical and good enough to be considered a true spinoff story. The main character is original and believable. If you want to see the world and story of Shadow slave from a different perspective, this fanfic is for you. P.s. it's important to note that the fanfic is finished, a rarity these days.

9d
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beebooooo

Damn, Noble queen , you , really nailed it.......................😭😭😭😭😭 this was the best fanfic I had ever read ..,....... best of luck.............❣️

2mth
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AdamoVeritas

This is a great addition to the Shadow Slave universe! Every I ask myself why we don’t have a multi media franchise of Shadow Slave! This piece of fan fiction is well written, well plotted, and characters are well developed. It is amazing how well it fits into the main story, and it is obvious that the author has put forth much effort to make it fit in without over lapping the main story. This book is a stand alone story that enhances the source material. I would not consider it fan fiction, but instead a collaborative work with the author.

2mth
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ThirdNobleGirl

Thank you for writing an amazing slice of life within the world of Shadow Slave. Your hard work has paid off!

3mth
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Thank_You_

Excellent fanfiction ! I was expecting a mid writing with poor development but I was very surprised to see it is actually extremely well written with an interesting story well related to the main storyline but without influencing it too much. All in all I enjoy reading this as much as Shadow Slave and am looking forward new chapters

7mth
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honorspren

Let me start by saying that I am not one to read fanfics often, I may have read a handful of them in my life; my cravings for SS brought me here, but NQB's masterful writing kept me coming back. The setting is obviously the same as SS, so I will not go into detail except to commend the author on a point: she has gone to great lengths to expand the world in a way most satisfying, she has crafted new locations that fit in perfectly and added a rich POV into a world of which I can't have enough. Plot wise I would say the story differs greatly from SS, as Noble's ambitions do not gravitate around power, instead she finds herself in a situation where she needs to stand up for her principles and the people she cares about, seeing how Noble works hard to remain true and how different her struggles are from Sunny's makes the story unique, you won't find an overpowering protagonist, you will find a wife, a mother, a teacher, a friend in a world that is collapsing, and I think this is amazing.

7mth
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CeoOfKa

If you want to immerse even more in the world of Shadow Slave, I would highly suggest reading this masterpiece of fan fiction(that could be easily canon)!

7mth
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Neocrose

When I picked this up after reading the comments in Shadow Slave I told myself not to get too attached as it was "only a fan fic"... well, I was wrong, and I have failed. As of 250, the Nobel Queen has developed into a well written, engaging narrative that has me coming back every day. This tale of a diligent fighter, loving mother, and steadfast wife is well worth the read.

7mth
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Geo_buss

This is an amazing story. I don't always stay up to date with some fan fiction story, but this one, for some reason, won me over. I could not stop reading it. the character, the interaction they have between each other, world building, and other detail. it just so good I don't treat as a fan fiction, but an extension of shadow slave. I mean, G3 left a review; so who knows what will happen. what I am saying is that I could not give it enough justice. you should read it for yourself and see what you're missing out on.

7mth
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MasterCarlRoy

"The Noble Queen" expands the shadow slaveuniverse with flair. It introduces captivating characters and an engaging storyline that respects the original lore while adding fresh twists. Seeing this, it is not difficult to understand why the author of SS likes it too

8mth
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Lucius_Frey

It’s not everyday you see someone make a story from their own cameo 😂

8mth
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AZI_Khan

I have one question. Does sunny appear again?

9mth
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dragons_firebreath

A great story to help the world building of SS even if it is a fan fic. It is so interesting that it has had input from G3 to make it so some part of it might be canon

10mth
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buenasdias

To start, I'll be honest - I had a bit of a hard time at the beginning. The reason is simple: the story differs from what other works on Web Novel typically offer. However, after about ten chapters, I was drawn into this work, and I have to say, the sorcery has affected me, as I read it all in a single day. Why? Because for me, this fan fiction truly allows us to explore a facet of the Shadow Slave world that we've barely been able to see up until now: the everyday lives of regular people. Let's be clear, Bee (the main character) is not "normal," but let's say her life is more normal than Sunny's (the main character of Shadow Slave). To be more specific, we follow Bee's story and her life within NSQC, as well as her relationships with the other inhabitants, her family, and her friends. And I have to say, all the interactions have been excellent - some joyous, some terribly sad (I have to admit, I shed a few tears at several points today... and also a +1 for the humor that I greatly enjoyed). That's not all - the interactions blend excellently with the already rich universe of Shadow Slave, as all of the elements are well integrated, and I even learned many new things! To be honest, I felt as if I was there, with Bee and her family today ahah. While the social aspect is an absolute success, I also greatly appreciated the dynamic and engaging combat scenes. Finally, the writing is of very high quality and very fluid. In short, thank you to NobleQueenBee for this sumptuous work.

10mth
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Dalugato

The best side-story I have ever read. It builds perfectly on the Shadow Slave main story. A must-read for every Shadow Slave fan! 10/10

10mth
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AscendedRain

if I wrote a book series but wanted to flesh out minor characters more and give supporting background to my world as well, I can't think of a better example to give than this one. Any author would be jealous of what NobleQueenBee adds to Shadow Slave. Any story with this kind of supporting loving treatment is made all the richer from this earnest effort and gripping subplot. Thanks for somehow making the greatest story on here even better, you're the best.

10mth
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Collapsar

If you like Shadow Slave and remember the awesome Queen Bee then you absolutely need to read this ! If you didn't go for it to, it's well written and nothing will prevent you from enjoying the story

11mth
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Change3201

This is an absolutely fantastic addition to the world of Shadow Slave. I personally do not care as much if this is "canon" or not because it has the polish that makes it feel like it is canon. It is written from the point of view of a human that has family and friends in the world with no guarantee of survival. It has a certain grittiness and brokenness to it that makes it feel real and mimics the feeling of the early chapters and the early established world of Shadow Slave very well. Without getting into spoilers, this story is very well polished. If you expect this to be a story written purely for cameos of Guilty Guild members or the main cast of Shadow Slave you're dead wrong, although there could be more to it that you might realise. Overall, the flow of the story is done very well. Even without a clear-cut direction from the very start, it does a phenomenal job of establishing the world and the life in NQSC. Despite the lack of focus for the Dream Realm, the wonder in the story never left me when I read it. Personally, this story feels really emotional and a must-read for anyone interested in what life in the world of Shadow Slave looks like for people who aren't at the top of the power charts.

11mth
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Marokal

Nice side story of Shadow slave. Can't have enough lore! Rain's mother is quite an interesting character as well. Some adventures into the dream realm would be great! Keep it going, please!

11mth
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FinalSmile

A great side story that adds more slice of life to the Shadow Slave universe. It follows the life of QueenBee after her defeat by Mongrel in the dreamscape tournament. The locations as of chapter 50 include the dreamscape, the dreamrealm, and the waking world. It’s cool seeing the world from a more normal awakened’s perspective. There seems to be an element of mystery surrounding a certain memory Bee comes in contact with. Didn’t expect the story to develop the way that it did but it has left me happily surprised and interested to see how things continue to develop. A deeper dive into the government of the Shadow Slave universe and how it became aware of what will happen in Antarctica is also explored. This story seems likely to explore the dreamscapes team battles which were only mentioned in Shadow Slave. Coming from someone who reads Shadow Slave daily this side story is a real treat. There are cool snippets of additional information about characters and the world. The story takes more time looking at character interactions which slows down how fast things go. Because of this it might be worth stacking a few days worth of chapters at a time. The author of this side story has done a great job making me feel like I am reading Shadow Slave but from a different point of view than Sunny. Hopefully it has been as enjoyable to write as it has been to read.

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11mth
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Not_larry

Great fanfic by Queen Bee, the setting is amazing! I wonder if Queen Bee and Sunyy will ever meet...

12mth
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Surrealistic01

This fanfiction is a very kind, sweet and enjoyable love letter from a dear community member that spends hours of her time and health to make it as welcoming, safe and secure for many readers to come. Aside from her being a great person, this fanfiction is spectacular, it adds charms and spice to characters that we know and love, it's exactly what we wanted and needed.

1yr
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nqma_puk

This is a very good story, I loved reading it, the author is amazing and everything about it is enjoyable. I loved the character interactions mostly!

1yr
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TheOtherNoble

Excellent fanfic to Shadow Slave, really more of a supplemental side story since it is author approved! Stellar writing quality, developed characters, good interaction with SS without interfering with established canon. Like a real behind-the-scenes look at the worldbuilding. Excellent read! Definitely reccomend!

1yr
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Otaku_Gamer_00007

oh it's QueenBee lol I have not even read it but I bet it will be good 👍😊

1yr
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vivavergil

i need more!!! and can we make this fan fiction canon pls?!?! pls keep writing!!!!!!

1yr
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Y0K41_
LV 14 Badge

Great FanFic! Instead of constant nail-biting adrenaline-inducing cliffhangers, it is sort of a Slice Of Life look into the Shadow Slave universe from what I have seen so far. There have also been elements of Mystery and Thriller with the developing plot line. Overall it's a great peer into the life of the average Awakened!

1yr
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WatcherofShadows

I love the focus on the waking world in this fanfic :) it is very refreshing and I love the characterization with Noble and her Aspect/Flaw. Amazing!

1yr
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Guiltythree

Love it :] Do you miss the duel scenes in Dreamscape? Wondering who was Mongrel's mysterious opponent in the finale of the Dream Tournament? Curious to see a parade of cameos by the members of Guilty Guild? Then give it read!

1yr
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Dragontino_5555

I think this is a really good piece of fiction, a solid story that focuses on the closest thing you can get to a real human in a world with living breathing demigods. There is a great focus on the relationships between the characters, as well as the struggles of the family, and those are written incredibly well. Add a little bit of untold lore to spice things up, and you have a really good book in your hands. I would strongly recomend this to any Shadow slave reader who would like to know more about the world, is suffering from "one todaw, three tomorrow" withdraws, or just wants to have a fun time reading a story in one of the best fantisy worlds of modern fiction.

8d
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Kanobink

By far the best Shadow slave fanfic. Completely canonical and good enough to be considered a true spinoff story. The main character is original and believable. If you want to see the world and story of Shadow slave from a different perspective, this fanfic is for you. P.s. it's important to note that the fanfic is finished, a rarity these days.

9d
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beebooooo

Damn, Noble queen , you , really nailed it.......................😭😭😭😭😭 this was the best fanfic I had ever read ..,....... best of luck.............❣️

2mth
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AdamoVeritas

This is a great addition to the Shadow Slave universe! Every I ask myself why we don’t have a multi media franchise of Shadow Slave! This piece of fan fiction is well written, well plotted, and characters are well developed. It is amazing how well it fits into the main story, and it is obvious that the author has put forth much effort to make it fit in without over lapping the main story. This book is a stand alone story that enhances the source material. I would not consider it fan fiction, but instead a collaborative work with the author.

2mth
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ThirdNobleGirl

Thank you for writing an amazing slice of life within the world of Shadow Slave. Your hard work has paid off!

3mth
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Thank_You_

Excellent fanfiction ! I was expecting a mid writing with poor development but I was very surprised to see it is actually extremely well written with an interesting story well related to the main storyline but without influencing it too much. All in all I enjoy reading this as much as Shadow Slave and am looking forward new chapters

7mth
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honorspren

Let me start by saying that I am not one to read fanfics often, I may have read a handful of them in my life; my cravings for SS brought me here, but NQB's masterful writing kept me coming back. The setting is obviously the same as SS, so I will not go into detail except to commend the author on a point: she has gone to great lengths to expand the world in a way most satisfying, she has crafted new locations that fit in perfectly and added a rich POV into a world of which I can't have enough. Plot wise I would say the story differs greatly from SS, as Noble's ambitions do not gravitate around power, instead she finds herself in a situation where she needs to stand up for her principles and the people she cares about, seeing how Noble works hard to remain true and how different her struggles are from Sunny's makes the story unique, you won't find an overpowering protagonist, you will find a wife, a mother, a teacher, a friend in a world that is collapsing, and I think this is amazing.

7mth
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CeoOfKa

If you want to immerse even more in the world of Shadow Slave, I would highly suggest reading this masterpiece of fan fiction(that could be easily canon)!

7mth
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Neocrose

When I picked this up after reading the comments in Shadow Slave I told myself not to get too attached as it was "only a fan fic"... well, I was wrong, and I have failed. As of 250, the Nobel Queen has developed into a well written, engaging narrative that has me coming back every day. This tale of a diligent fighter, loving mother, and steadfast wife is well worth the read.

7mth
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Geo_buss

This is an amazing story. I don't always stay up to date with some fan fiction story, but this one, for some reason, won me over. I could not stop reading it. the character, the interaction they have between each other, world building, and other detail. it just so good I don't treat as a fan fiction, but an extension of shadow slave. I mean, G3 left a review; so who knows what will happen. what I am saying is that I could not give it enough justice. you should read it for yourself and see what you're missing out on.

7mth
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MasterCarlRoy

"The Noble Queen" expands the shadow slaveuniverse with flair. It introduces captivating characters and an engaging storyline that respects the original lore while adding fresh twists. Seeing this, it is not difficult to understand why the author of SS likes it too

8mth
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Lucius_Frey

It’s not everyday you see someone make a story from their own cameo 😂

8mth
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AZI_Khan

I have one question. Does sunny appear again?

9mth
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dragons_firebreath

A great story to help the world building of SS even if it is a fan fic. It is so interesting that it has had input from G3 to make it so some part of it might be canon

10mth
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buenasdias

To start, I'll be honest - I had a bit of a hard time at the beginning. The reason is simple: the story differs from what other works on Web Novel typically offer. However, after about ten chapters, I was drawn into this work, and I have to say, the sorcery has affected me, as I read it all in a single day. Why? Because for me, this fan fiction truly allows us to explore a facet of the Shadow Slave world that we've barely been able to see up until now: the everyday lives of regular people. Let's be clear, Bee (the main character) is not "normal," but let's say her life is more normal than Sunny's (the main character of Shadow Slave). To be more specific, we follow Bee's story and her life within NSQC, as well as her relationships with the other inhabitants, her family, and her friends. And I have to say, all the interactions have been excellent - some joyous, some terribly sad (I have to admit, I shed a few tears at several points today... and also a +1 for the humor that I greatly enjoyed). That's not all - the interactions blend excellently with the already rich universe of Shadow Slave, as all of the elements are well integrated, and I even learned many new things! To be honest, I felt as if I was there, with Bee and her family today ahah. While the social aspect is an absolute success, I also greatly appreciated the dynamic and engaging combat scenes. Finally, the writing is of very high quality and very fluid. In short, thank you to NobleQueenBee for this sumptuous work.

10mth
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Dalugato

The best side-story I have ever read. It builds perfectly on the Shadow Slave main story. A must-read for every Shadow Slave fan! 10/10

10mth
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AscendedRain

if I wrote a book series but wanted to flesh out minor characters more and give supporting background to my world as well, I can't think of a better example to give than this one. Any author would be jealous of what NobleQueenBee adds to Shadow Slave. Any story with this kind of supporting loving treatment is made all the richer from this earnest effort and gripping subplot. Thanks for somehow making the greatest story on here even better, you're the best.

10mth
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Collapsar

If you like Shadow Slave and remember the awesome Queen Bee then you absolutely need to read this ! If you didn't go for it to, it's well written and nothing will prevent you from enjoying the story

11mth
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Change3201

This is an absolutely fantastic addition to the world of Shadow Slave. I personally do not care as much if this is "canon" or not because it has the polish that makes it feel like it is canon. It is written from the point of view of a human that has family and friends in the world with no guarantee of survival. It has a certain grittiness and brokenness to it that makes it feel real and mimics the feeling of the early chapters and the early established world of Shadow Slave very well. Without getting into spoilers, this story is very well polished. If you expect this to be a story written purely for cameos of Guilty Guild members or the main cast of Shadow Slave you're dead wrong, although there could be more to it that you might realise. Overall, the flow of the story is done very well. Even without a clear-cut direction from the very start, it does a phenomenal job of establishing the world and the life in NQSC. Despite the lack of focus for the Dream Realm, the wonder in the story never left me when I read it. Personally, this story feels really emotional and a must-read for anyone interested in what life in the world of Shadow Slave looks like for people who aren't at the top of the power charts.

11mth
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Marokal

Nice side story of Shadow slave. Can't have enough lore! Rain's mother is quite an interesting character as well. Some adventures into the dream realm would be great! Keep it going, please!

11mth
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FinalSmile

A great side story that adds more slice of life to the Shadow Slave universe. It follows the life of QueenBee after her defeat by Mongrel in the dreamscape tournament. The locations as of chapter 50 include the dreamscape, the dreamrealm, and the waking world. It’s cool seeing the world from a more normal awakened’s perspective. There seems to be an element of mystery surrounding a certain memory Bee comes in contact with. Didn’t expect the story to develop the way that it did but it has left me happily surprised and interested to see how things continue to develop. A deeper dive into the government of the Shadow Slave universe and how it became aware of what will happen in Antarctica is also explored. This story seems likely to explore the dreamscapes team battles which were only mentioned in Shadow Slave. Coming from someone who reads Shadow Slave daily this side story is a real treat. There are cool snippets of additional information about characters and the world. The story takes more time looking at character interactions which slows down how fast things go. Because of this it might be worth stacking a few days worth of chapters at a time. The author of this side story has done a great job making me feel like I am reading Shadow Slave but from a different point of view than Sunny. Hopefully it has been as enjoyable to write as it has been to read.

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11mth
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Not_larry

Great fanfic by Queen Bee, the setting is amazing! I wonder if Queen Bee and Sunyy will ever meet...

12mth
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Surrealistic01

This fanfiction is a very kind, sweet and enjoyable love letter from a dear community member that spends hours of her time and health to make it as welcoming, safe and secure for many readers to come. Aside from her being a great person, this fanfiction is spectacular, it adds charms and spice to characters that we know and love, it's exactly what we wanted and needed.

1yr
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nqma_puk

This is a very good story, I loved reading it, the author is amazing and everything about it is enjoyable. I loved the character interactions mostly!

1yr
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TheOtherNoble

Excellent fanfic to Shadow Slave, really more of a supplemental side story since it is author approved! Stellar writing quality, developed characters, good interaction with SS without interfering with established canon. Like a real behind-the-scenes look at the worldbuilding. Excellent read! Definitely reccomend!

1yr
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Otaku_Gamer_00007

oh it's QueenBee lol I have not even read it but I bet it will be good 👍😊

1yr
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vivavergil

i need more!!! and can we make this fan fiction canon pls?!?! pls keep writing!!!!!!

1yr
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Y0K41_
LV 14 Badge

Great FanFic! Instead of constant nail-biting adrenaline-inducing cliffhangers, it is sort of a Slice Of Life look into the Shadow Slave universe from what I have seen so far. There have also been elements of Mystery and Thriller with the developing plot line. Overall it's a great peer into the life of the average Awakened!

1yr
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WatcherofShadows

I love the focus on the waking world in this fanfic :) it is very refreshing and I love the characterization with Noble and her Aspect/Flaw. Amazing!

1yr
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