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He leído fanfictions de Naruto que son pura basura, pues este es una de ellas. No pierdas el tiempo leyendo esto, hazme caso lo agradecerás
I like it! It would be nice if you continued like this. Please keep up the pace of chapter publishing. It was a great idea to give Naruto the rokugan.
Typical story where stuff always happens for the plot like Hinata creating a jutsu that needs perfect chakra control before the chunin exams because she trains with Naruto sometimes The romance is so forced that it's painful, with very little build-up, too early in the story, and very little reason why Naruto likes her just unneeded. The author adds things and acts like they change the plot but it's literally the exact same as cannon. And Naruto's charater is kinda like budget Gojo and hes Gojo's charater but in a very dull sense.
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Good Concept ,but there could have been a better way of presentation of the story but still not bad
no point in reading it .... the same as the cannon ... its just another GARBAGE 🗑️🗑️🗑️ ....
Warning, it's another Naruto Hinata story, falls in love for no reason but cannon. The interaction is a rinse and repeat of many other fanfics that force Naruto to suddenly like her so early. way too much interference and the relationship basically restricting Naruto as always. Naruto acts a certain way towards many characters just cause the author wants to kill any development between Naruto and other possible characters. sigh, waste of gojos template
quality is pretty mid, its misstagged as isekai and author give himself 2x 5s review -_-
GPT......................................................................................................................................... GPT novel
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A good ff needs a little correction of word errors, etc. but after that it is good and enjoyable. . . . . ...................... ......... ................
this is a realy Cool story, but it would be even greater if it would be having Harem and Lemons.
If You wanna have updates on The series more and have any questions , My Twitter/X Id - HasnatHossein47 !! you text me here
He leído fanfictions de Naruto que son pura basura, pues este es una de ellas. No pierdas el tiempo leyendo esto, hazme caso lo agradecerás
I like it! It would be nice if you continued like this. Please keep up the pace of chapter publishing. It was a great idea to give Naruto the rokugan.
Typical story where stuff always happens for the plot like Hinata creating a jutsu that needs perfect chakra control before the chunin exams because she trains with Naruto sometimes The romance is so forced that it's painful, with very little build-up, too early in the story, and very little reason why Naruto likes her just unneeded. The author adds things and acts like they change the plot but it's literally the exact same as cannon. And Naruto's charater is kinda like budget Gojo and hes Gojo's charater but in a very dull sense.
goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
Good Concept ,but there could have been a better way of presentation of the story but still not bad
no point in reading it .... the same as the cannon ... its just another GARBAGE 🗑️🗑️🗑️ ....
Warning, it's another Naruto Hinata story, falls in love for no reason but cannon. The interaction is a rinse and repeat of many other fanfics that force Naruto to suddenly like her so early. way too much interference and the relationship basically restricting Naruto as always. Naruto acts a certain way towards many characters just cause the author wants to kill any development between Naruto and other possible characters. sigh, waste of gojos template
quality is pretty mid, its misstagged as isekai and author give himself 2x 5s review -_-
GPT......................................................................................................................................... GPT novel
lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala lala lalalalala
sorry bro the grammar is killing me. c cc c c cc c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c
A good ff needs a little correction of word errors, etc. but after that it is good and enjoyable. . . . . ...................... ......... ................
this is a realy Cool story, but it would be even greater if it would be having Harem and Lemons.
If You wanna have updates on The series more and have any questions , My Twitter/X Id - HasnatHossein47 !! you text me here