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レビューを書くI love the novel, honestly I can't remember the last time I read a good monster mc novel, just carnage and strategic killing to evolve, chef kiss 💋, anyway author you should add the non-human and evolution tags to the novel
im loving the novel so continue and don't stop this masterpiece, its actually really addictive i first thought it was going to be mid but it turns out it was a hidden gem. by the random reader.
Boooooom, a história realmente é boa, mas tem algumas coisas que não gostei e vou deixar avisado para futuros leitores. Se você veio de Neurolink como eu, não vá com expectativa de harém e cenas r18, a primeira cena +18 que acontece é depois de 200 capítulos e é de um personagem secundário (uma coisa que me incomodou bastante) e o foco não é em garotas com em Neurolink, inclusive o MC só gosta de 2 garotas até agora e teve uma cena +18 de uma delas que o ato em si não foi o foco, então sobre +18 e garotas esteja avisado. Outra coisa, teve coisas que o MC de Neurolink fez que fiquei meio desconfortável nas torturas, mas como os "inimigos" tinham feito algo contra ele eu aceitei, mas esse MC é muito pior, pra você que acha que ele vai deixar de ser um monstro em um momento da história, ele vai conseguir outro corpo mas só depois do capítulo 300, antes disso ele é um monstro em todos sentidos, ele mata pessoas inocentes e tortura também, a primeira vez que pensei em largar a história foi quando ele meteu um chute em uma mulher que ia agradecer ele, fiquei me sentindo mal por ela, depois foi quando ele torturou uma mulher porque ela denunciou ele (ele estava realmente errado).as depois desse monte de merda ele consegue outro corpo, o que melhorou bastante, o autor deu mais foco nesse corpo do que na destruição que o MC fazia com o outro, o que pra min é um ponto positivo. Uma coisa incômoda também é a mentalidade do MC, sempre que parece que ele vai amadurecer ele volta pra estaca 0, espero que com esse corpo e algum romance conserte a cabeça dele, ele quer destruir tudo e ser o mais forte, mas qual a graça de ser o rei de nada, ele seria o mais forte de um mundo sem ninguém, grande merda, se tudo mundo morresse agora eu também seria o mais forte Enfim isso foi mais um desabafo, espero que o MC melhore a mentalidade um pouco pelo menos. Mas apesar de todos esses problemas que escrevi a história é boa, simplesmente escrevi o que desgostei da história, mas o fato que li mais de 400 capítulos e ainda estou acompanhando mostra que essa história é muito boa, de uma chance e se não for seu estilo não se force a ler, recomendo a outra obra do autor Neurolink, não é tão pesado quanto essa história
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I like this story and the characters, which seem to be getting developed. My only real issue with the story is a lot of the writing feels somewhat clumsy and awkward or very surface-level. However, I see some potential, and therefore wouldn’t say ‘don’t read this’. Rather I would say, read this but with an open mind and allow the author some room to grow and develop their own writing style and skills. I will only know whether or not this happens the further along I read. On a side note, personally I find the grammar to be atrocious but, that can be easily ignored if you’re not as anal about these things as I am.
Only read chapter1 so far, might edit this review later. I got reccomended this story by a friend and I can see why they did so, they were right and I do like it so far. If I stop reading (and remember) I will say where I stopped and my opinions at that spot. Starting with 5 stars because it is the right thing to do for a story you only know a little about :D
I am enjoying this book a lot i have been searching for a similiar novel for a while now does anyone know anything similiar to this???????.
read up to chapter 179, it's a good read but it honestly gets repetitive and bland,no real sense of danger mostly meeting someone stronger get embarrassed scared oppressed the usual, get's angry swears revenge and a huge evolution, mostly fights are boring too, characters not really that good,main character gets bland,no good rival or strong characters like i don't hate overpowerd MC but iIdo hate it when they get too strong (he's not too strong it's just meh),like bring an enemy that can give a good fight,make MC feel pain,suffer, torture,he doesn't feel like a monster more like a fucked up human that gets system,romance is shit,
Love the book and the simple yet elegant way you describe the character. He’s a monster and I love it usually other authors go with the theme of making there MC a monster-hero, I love what you’ve done here.
I like the overall plot of the story and the world building. but in regards of the MC and the side characters, will they be more fleshed out for the story? Since as so far as I have read (chapter 350). They dont seem to really matter to the story. Since it looks like the MC will just eat the whole planet.
I realllly like this story, the fact that there's no watering down that our mc gets stronger by consuming other beings is great. The cons are the 'romantic' interest which is utterly unnecessary, there's nothing wrong with falling in love at first meeting trope... but there's gotta be some follow-through.... It seems like superficial filler that could have been done without imo . Also, with all this mass evolving that mc is going through, is his mental maturity not going to see a significant increase? so he can stop throwing abrupt petulant tantrums, those instances are becoming increasingly incongruous with his rising power level vs his low mental maturity.
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Great novel, I'm so into it that I can't stop reading that piece of art. I'm reading it for over half a year and I just CAN'T Stop. I love it so much, thank you for your time and effort. LOVE YOU[img=update][img=recommend][img=gift]
Have only read up to chapter 250 because i ran out of money. But anyhow i love it just i love it nothing more nothing less just straight up love.
The title is very good, the story is good, everything is beautiful and without mistakes, there is a reverse connection and also the hero is very charming and knows how to touch the soul. I basically liked it, but it depends on the person, you might not like it.
Certainly! Here’s a 150-character review of your synopsis: --- **"An intriguing tale of time travel and memory loss, with high stakes and a mysterious future. Can't wait to see how the protagonist changes the world's fate!"** --- I Let me know if you need any adjustments!
I had to drop this one. The grammar and spelling is around third grade level and I simply couldn’t stomach it anymore. Running it though a spell check or hell even chat gpt would easily fix all of these mistakes.
Really great novel, the characters are introduced in a very intuitive way. You get some backstory for almost all characters, but its written in such a way that you wouldn’t think of it as that. The novel lets me think a little on my own, while giving an accurate description of both the environment and the people we come to read about. As i have just started reading this novel i cant say much about world building, but its pretty good. I know as much about this new world as MC does, which is very little. There is almost no expectation of the world he cimes from, which makes me think hes from good old earth. Just enough info, to give me an amazing image and reading experience. Very highly recommend this novel to anyone whos in need of something to read. (Although you might just drop your old novels for this one)
Genuine question how do people afford to read these books because I really enjoyed the first 40 chapters but I just can’t afford to spend the £40 needed to unlock all the way to 250 and then thinking about doing this with other books and maybe even more chapters it could be hundreds of pounds. Is there some way I’m missing or do people just have a lot of money. Because I really want to read this but can’t afford in current economy.
meh, it has a potential at first but it gets lost, you'll get bored once you read it eventually unless you're a disgusting individual who has a fetish on eating corpses. i honestly don't like this novel. you should put it a twist to the start.
I hate it and I don't understand why they have to cram romance I into every novel when it's mostly bad and doesn't make sense...
This is one of my new favorite books. I hope this does not get dropped by the author. Hear that author San no dropping.
I don‘t really have anything worthwhile to say, just wanted to do the author a favor. Im liking it quite a lot, so keep up the good work
Shameless author here. I'm 100% sure this book will be worth your time. Please leave a review if you like it.
I love the novel, honestly I can't remember the last time I read a good monster mc novel, just carnage and strategic killing to evolve, chef kiss 💋, anyway author you should add the non-human and evolution tags to the novel
im loving the novel so continue and don't stop this masterpiece, its actually really addictive i first thought it was going to be mid but it turns out it was a hidden gem. by the random reader.
Boooooom, a história realmente é boa, mas tem algumas coisas que não gostei e vou deixar avisado para futuros leitores. Se você veio de Neurolink como eu, não vá com expectativa de harém e cenas r18, a primeira cena +18 que acontece é depois de 200 capítulos e é de um personagem secundário (uma coisa que me incomodou bastante) e o foco não é em garotas com em Neurolink, inclusive o MC só gosta de 2 garotas até agora e teve uma cena +18 de uma delas que o ato em si não foi o foco, então sobre +18 e garotas esteja avisado. Outra coisa, teve coisas que o MC de Neurolink fez que fiquei meio desconfortável nas torturas, mas como os "inimigos" tinham feito algo contra ele eu aceitei, mas esse MC é muito pior, pra você que acha que ele vai deixar de ser um monstro em um momento da história, ele vai conseguir outro corpo mas só depois do capítulo 300, antes disso ele é um monstro em todos sentidos, ele mata pessoas inocentes e tortura também, a primeira vez que pensei em largar a história foi quando ele meteu um chute em uma mulher que ia agradecer ele, fiquei me sentindo mal por ela, depois foi quando ele torturou uma mulher porque ela denunciou ele (ele estava realmente errado).as depois desse monte de merda ele consegue outro corpo, o que melhorou bastante, o autor deu mais foco nesse corpo do que na destruição que o MC fazia com o outro, o que pra min é um ponto positivo. Uma coisa incômoda também é a mentalidade do MC, sempre que parece que ele vai amadurecer ele volta pra estaca 0, espero que com esse corpo e algum romance conserte a cabeça dele, ele quer destruir tudo e ser o mais forte, mas qual a graça de ser o rei de nada, ele seria o mais forte de um mundo sem ninguém, grande merda, se tudo mundo morresse agora eu também seria o mais forte Enfim isso foi mais um desabafo, espero que o MC melhore a mentalidade um pouco pelo menos. Mas apesar de todos esses problemas que escrevi a história é boa, simplesmente escrevi o que desgostei da história, mas o fato que li mais de 400 capítulos e ainda estou acompanhando mostra que essa história é muito boa, de uma chance e se não for seu estilo não se force a ler, recomendo a outra obra do autor Neurolink, não é tão pesado quanto essa história
ネタバレを明かすMore right now at this moment! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more Mel more more more more more more em More more more more more more more more more mor e
I like this story and the characters, which seem to be getting developed. My only real issue with the story is a lot of the writing feels somewhat clumsy and awkward or very surface-level. However, I see some potential, and therefore wouldn’t say ‘don’t read this’. Rather I would say, read this but with an open mind and allow the author some room to grow and develop their own writing style and skills. I will only know whether or not this happens the further along I read. On a side note, personally I find the grammar to be atrocious but, that can be easily ignored if you’re not as anal about these things as I am.
Only read chapter1 so far, might edit this review later. I got reccomended this story by a friend and I can see why they did so, they were right and I do like it so far. If I stop reading (and remember) I will say where I stopped and my opinions at that spot. Starting with 5 stars because it is the right thing to do for a story you only know a little about :D
I am enjoying this book a lot i have been searching for a similiar novel for a while now does anyone know anything similiar to this???????.
read up to chapter 179, it's a good read but it honestly gets repetitive and bland,no real sense of danger mostly meeting someone stronger get embarrassed scared oppressed the usual, get's angry swears revenge and a huge evolution, mostly fights are boring too, characters not really that good,main character gets bland,no good rival or strong characters like i don't hate overpowerd MC but iIdo hate it when they get too strong (he's not too strong it's just meh),like bring an enemy that can give a good fight,make MC feel pain,suffer, torture,he doesn't feel like a monster more like a fucked up human that gets system,romance is shit,
Love the book and the simple yet elegant way you describe the character. He’s a monster and I love it usually other authors go with the theme of making there MC a monster-hero, I love what you’ve done here.
I like the overall plot of the story and the world building. but in regards of the MC and the side characters, will they be more fleshed out for the story? Since as so far as I have read (chapter 350). They dont seem to really matter to the story. Since it looks like the MC will just eat the whole planet.
I realllly like this story, the fact that there's no watering down that our mc gets stronger by consuming other beings is great. The cons are the 'romantic' interest which is utterly unnecessary, there's nothing wrong with falling in love at first meeting trope... but there's gotta be some follow-through.... It seems like superficial filler that could have been done without imo . Also, with all this mass evolving that mc is going through, is his mental maturity not going to see a significant increase? so he can stop throwing abrupt petulant tantrums, those instances are becoming increasingly incongruous with his rising power level vs his low mental maturity.
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Have only read up to chapter 250 because i ran out of money. But anyhow i love it just i love it nothing more nothing less just straight up love.
The title is very good, the story is good, everything is beautiful and without mistakes, there is a reverse connection and also the hero is very charming and knows how to touch the soul. I basically liked it, but it depends on the person, you might not like it.
Certainly! Here’s a 150-character review of your synopsis: --- **"An intriguing tale of time travel and memory loss, with high stakes and a mysterious future. Can't wait to see how the protagonist changes the world's fate!"** --- I Let me know if you need any adjustments!
I had to drop this one. The grammar and spelling is around third grade level and I simply couldn’t stomach it anymore. Running it though a spell check or hell even chat gpt would easily fix all of these mistakes.
Really great novel, the characters are introduced in a very intuitive way. You get some backstory for almost all characters, but its written in such a way that you wouldn’t think of it as that. The novel lets me think a little on my own, while giving an accurate description of both the environment and the people we come to read about. As i have just started reading this novel i cant say much about world building, but its pretty good. I know as much about this new world as MC does, which is very little. There is almost no expectation of the world he cimes from, which makes me think hes from good old earth. Just enough info, to give me an amazing image and reading experience. Very highly recommend this novel to anyone whos in need of something to read. (Although you might just drop your old novels for this one)
Genuine question how do people afford to read these books because I really enjoyed the first 40 chapters but I just can’t afford to spend the £40 needed to unlock all the way to 250 and then thinking about doing this with other books and maybe even more chapters it could be hundreds of pounds. Is there some way I’m missing or do people just have a lot of money. Because I really want to read this but can’t afford in current economy.
meh, it has a potential at first but it gets lost, you'll get bored once you read it eventually unless you're a disgusting individual who has a fetish on eating corpses. i honestly don't like this novel. you should put it a twist to the start.
I hate it and I don't understand why they have to cram romance I into every novel when it's mostly bad and doesn't make sense...
This is one of my new favorite books. I hope this does not get dropped by the author. Hear that author San no dropping.
I don‘t really have anything worthwhile to say, just wanted to do the author a favor. Im liking it quite a lot, so keep up the good work
Shameless author here. I'm 100% sure this book will be worth your time. Please leave a review if you like it.